Good chapter but.

"Oh... right. Then I need a new plan..."

"I think I have something that might work," Twilight said. "I ran into Linen earlier today... he works at Quills and Sofas for Davenport. Maybe I could try to ask him about it, try to get a feel for what Linen is like?"

"Yeah, you go ahead and do that, Twilight. I'll be here... planning... my plan."

kind of contradicts sense of doing that

"Oh, I know!" Pinkie said. "I'll introduce you to one of my friends! I know she'd also like to apologize to you, so if you're fine with it, I'd like you to meet her later this week."

"Um... who... who is she?" he asked, wondering if it was a mare he'd already met.

"Her name is Twilight Sparkle." Oh, it was her. "She runs the Ponyville Library out of the treehouse in town!"

"I... I met her already... she was... uh, really nice..."

"Oh, you've already met Twilight? Yippee! This won't be as bad as I thought it would be!" She opened the door and cartwheeled backwards on to the doorstep. "Don't you worry, Linen, I promise you'll get an apology from every mare in town in no time flat! I'll come look for you later this week, so don't do anything silly, okay?" She cheered and hopped off in the direction towards town, shutting the door behind her.

Otherwise pretty solid update. Hoping to see next one soon.

1061198 Thanks for the comment! But I don't see the contradiction there: Twilight wishes to know more about Linen, so she decides to ask Davenport about it. When Pinkie Pie asks, Linen says that he has already met her, and given on first impressions, thought she was a nice pony to know. So she believes that it will make getting an apology from Twilight much more easier than if it were just any other mare in Ponyville.

Exellent chapter my friend! cant wait for more.

...but he'd become too proficiently at it.

Dear lord! Look at that adverb! Look at it! Fix this right now! In the name of god, and all that is holy, fix this!

1063536 Fixed!

1064032 Thank you. That was physically painful to look at. Made my eyes bleed...

Don't accept any apology linen they deserve guilt and make them die because of it and make sure it's most painful to rainbow dash because I just got mad at her when she said she didn't care. END THEM NO REGRETS

, you decided to continue with it

I think Linen Spool is quickly becoming one of my favorite OCs. I wish I could say more other than "hope you update soon" (really I do, I feel stupid for doing it), but that's all I got, I'm afraid.

Please continue this for this is really good in plot and pacing.

1093567 Thanks, I'm glad you like it. The next chapter's pretty close to being finished, so keep an eye out for that.