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Shadowflash


If you have any issues with getting your story on the site or any personal issues (eg: depression), PM me. Please don't add me to random Skype groups without asking. Thank you.

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You don't see many female 2nd person stories around here do you...

751568 He's my editor, right now.

751579 Pish posh, he's just working on editing a large story for me. Look at my picture, tell me if you don't see him. ;)

I like dis story so far
*Adds to favorites*

751587 I can get him to talk to you, if you add me on Skype later tonight. I talk to him a lot. :derpytongue2:

751594 Pssh. I'm all~ the way in Canada. Doesn't stop m.e =3

751596 So is Sunny. :rainbowlaugh: I'll talk to him about you, though. Let him know. :rainbowwild:

You really should get a prereader. and put a space between paragraphs

751601If you want, I can still walk over to the States and pick him up?

751602 shit......I forgot about you.
:derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

it was a bad time for my to start, with high school ending for me and getting ready for college and stuff like that.

IF you still want me to proof-read, i can start over. If you want.

Interesting. there are not many 2nd person stories with sex where the reader is female. but i wonder, is there a story with 1st person/sex/reader is female? would be an interesting experience to read something like this.

752687 I was considering working on one like that. :3
751647 I do have a pre-reader for big things. Spaces between paragraphs is only necessary for thoughts and/or when showing a different section of the story (such as a pre-story item. Usually, these qualify as breaks).

753255 cant wait to read it when its there. when you write it of course.

753279 I'll make one soon, after I get some work done on some current projects. Maybe watch me, and you'll see something pop up.

753292 Ya i probably do tha.... Wait.... is that..... WARIO & WALUIGI IN EQESTRIA??? What in Tarzans dirty pants?? *add to read later list*

I know, Chapter 3 is short, but, I needed to make sure I got those details out there, y'know? :moustache:

Nice chapter but could you use(this is on my opinion, its up to you) marehood for vagina and stallionhood for penis cause it sort of adds to the effect :scootangel:

756865 It's hard to please both sides. I do both, to be honest. Cause, people say I'm either too discrete, or not discrete enough. :twilightsheepish:

756892
So... can you tell me a little about the next chapter? is there gonna be a cat fight between Rosy and twilight or something?:rainbowlaugh:

756920 Lol. :3
Time to work on Red Foo and Sky Blu ponehs! *Opens my artwork*

756922
Good luck May all your drawings be good ones
~Blaze

756947 If you were to look at my recent blog, you'd know. :3 :derpytongue2:

Sorry for it being short! Didn't have enough to put into this chapter! (Actually, I did. I was just too excited! :rainbowkiss:)

799545 I don't see any spacing problems. I space when a new item or location appears. Or a thought/speech.
I don't have pre-readers for not-so-serious fics.

Sorry for how short this chapter was. I didn't want to give too much away. I promise, next chapter will be longer!

Nice chapter :scootangel: but i spotted a few errors:
'It's too dark to tell' Wait what?:rainbowhuh:

Hey I just met you
and this is crazy
but we're in a porno
so f*** me maybe?

Damn. I want Sunny to end up with Rosey :flutterrage: Plus Soarin' is nothing but a damn gigolo in this fic :rainbowlaugh:

Am I the only one who thinks that Rosey might have overreacted just a teeny bit?

The evil Soarin is dealt with and love prevails :pinkiehappy:
In all honesty, this was a fun story. Well played :twilightsmile:

It's funny when reading in that perspective when you are chasing the pony that is you...

Rosey: ummm.... its exactly what it looks like..........

nuuu! we demand MOAR...well i do anyway ;w;

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