A Pegasus Too Far

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Macharius

Macharius #1 · May 7th, 2017 · 2 · · I: Presence Filled to the Brim ·

So it begins.

I just hope that by the end Thunderlane has it better than last time.

stanku

stanku #2 · May 7th, 2017 · · · I: Presence Filled to the Brim ·

8146733 Not that he wouldn't deserve it at least.

Semicolon

Semicolon #3 · Jun 3rd, 2017 · · · Epilogue ·

I'm... confused by this story.

The original was fun, fluffy and hot. The sequel was different. I just don't know what to make of this one.

Perhaps I just came in with the wrong expectations?

stanku

stanku #4 · Jun 4th, 2017 · 3 · · Epilogue ·

8208106 Let me just tell you that my personal life in between the stories made its own twisty contribution.

ponygrad

ponygrad #5 · Jun 11th, 2017 · · · I: Presence Filled to the Brim ·

He got so far as to the next block before realizing what had happened, another three crossroads until he got what had really happened.

Women have this obvious-distortion-field around them that just unravels over space and time. You may have replaced the word coach with couch one time, but in context it works perfectly.

ponygrad

ponygrad #6 · Jun 11th, 2017 · · · Epilogue ·

A tragedy in three parts. Someone had to pay the price for Rainbow and Fluttershy to become honest with each other. Although Fluttershy asking "what more could you want than friendship" makes me think she's not being honest either with him or herself.

stanku

stanku #7 · Jun 12th, 2017 · · · I: Presence Filled to the Brim ·

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I knew I'd botch that one at least once despite looking out for it! Maybe I should've have contacted you over proofing this, but I figured it had been such a long time since I last did it that it might be awkward.

stanku