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gingerninja666


I don't want to be right. I just desperately want to be proven wrong. You can imagine how many friends THAT makes me.

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Did you JUST reference a Jontron era of Game Grumps in a clopfic? Specifically the "winning and realizing friendship is more important" bit. I don't know whether to laugh or shake my head in amusement and give you an upvote for an equally awesome story! So I will just do both! :rainbowlaugh::heart:

Good. Yes.


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Spike x Thorax story? It's about damn time I just hope the story is good.

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Actually, that bit isn't a reference. I just thought it was something Spikey would say if he was bashfully recalling his fantasies. XD

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Talk about a massive coincidence! It was almost a perfect word for word part of the bit too.

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The lack of them was exactly why I wrote it.

It's the first clopfic I've ever written, so I still have a long way to go, but I hope it did something for you. ^^

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Yeah it was well worth the time spent reading.
My question is why did it take you 4 years to start writing your first clopfic?

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Because I was trying to write something else. I was taking too long with it though, so I decided I wanted to try something shorter. Just to actually finish something for once.

I liked this story. The interactions and transformation was great and the sex scene was executed very well. Could you perhaps do a continuation for it?

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Well congrats on completing your first story and I do hope to see more from you in the near future.

so I decided I wanted to try something shorter

I wouldn't call 9,000 words story short.
Well to me at least.

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Thanks a lot! Is there anything in particular you wanted to see?

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Like ideas if you did do a continuation?

Okay here's what I was thinking. Maybe after Spike changes back to normal he still finds himself acting more effeminate than before. (like his interactions with others, how he thinks, how he looks at himself, sexual fantasies, maybe various other ticks and habits.) He thinks about what happened quite a bit and misses the feeling of being Thorax's mareish dragon and desires to feel that way again. Perhaps Spike even tries to recreate the feeling of looking and feeling girly without Throax's magic unfortunately able to make it so.

Maybe he starts to think more on his feelings on Thorax and his feelings on Rarity. Does he love Rarity or she just a crush. Does he love Thorax as a friend with benefits or maybe something more. Once the mania and afterglow finally wears off I'm sure Spike will have quite a bit on his mind on what he feels and desires.

Is Twilight and the others concerned about how Spike is acting? Or maybe they just feel like it's just a odd phase he's going through.

Thorax might have his own feelings as well. Spike is his idol and fantasy. Does he wish to indulge in that more? Is spike just his sexual buddy or something more? Is he concerned that the magic might be effecting more than Spike's body but perhaps his mind as well? What about dragon biology and how greed and desire affects that? Is the Changedling magic doing something to that as well? Amplified it or altered it in some unexpected way? Since it is Thorax's desires that is infusing these changes on the dragon.

Maybe Thorax explores more of how this new magic works and how it effects Changedlings and non-changelings alike. Maybe he visits others that might have been affected by it. maybe there was a pony or zebra was made strong by it or perhaps more fit. maybe some liked the changes it brought or maybe others did not. Maybe Thorax searches for some old lore on it.


Of course both of them are going to meet up a few more times to have sex again. Spike obviously loved it and desires it and for Thorax it's almost a dream come true. As it fulfills almost every fantasy he's ever had on the dragon. Lust seems to be a major driver factor for the two of them.

As for lewd stuff. Maybe some more buttplay and butt and thigh expansion. Thigh sex. Perhaps cloaca docking and frottage. semen swapping and semen mixing. Holding back on orgasiming. Ball worship. Femminity fetishing. Anal and other sexual training and practice. rimming maybe. Butt plug use and other self exploring maybe? Maybe exploration in sounding. Perhaps if Spike got really kinky maybe some 'belly riding' as well. Maybe even some power bottoming too.

Sorry for all this rambling of ideas and thoughts. I hope you don't mind. To condense it all. I'd like to see some more exploration of the magic and Spike's relationship with Thorax and vice versa. More transformation and the physical and psychological affect on Spike. And maybe how this affects the two of them and the their various friends. And of course more lewd sex.

Sorry if this sounds overly ambitious. You don't have to take any ideas from this. Just wanted to share mine. =)

This is oddly kinky.

I designate thee as "hawt."

I approve this! Heck, if I was also in this story as an unicorn, I'd give my lower horn as a gift for Spike's "front door" while Thorax delivers his gift at the "back door":twilightblush:

Possible sequel with Spike, Thorax, and Elusive?

I came. Really hot, & cute story.

Are you still thinking over possibly continuing this?

Although I do have to kind of point out that female dragons are really petite. Ember as one example. Shrug. Idk mlp wise both males and females are pretty muscular. But maybe that just cause of how harsh dragon lands are

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