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Wintergreen Diaries

"And now these three remain: faith, hope and love. But the greatest of these is love." - 1 Corinthians 13:13



This story is a sequel to Song of Whispers

It wasn't enough for the Cutie Mark Crusaders to simply find their Cutie Marks and call it quits, and all it took was one fateful day in their clubhouse with Spike and Ruby Pinch to set into motion a chain of events that would turn their simple lives upside down. Crushes are formed, friendships are tested, and will Spike ever get to kiss Sweetie Belle? Let the passion of young love burn free.

Credit for the pic goes to smlahyee of DeviantArt. Special thanks to OminousBrony and MagicalTrevor.

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Comments ( 875 )

Hmmm, intriguing.

Carry On


Pipsqueak! Rumble!

I see the S.S. ScootaRumble on the horizon captain! Oh and I may be sensing some AppleSqueak as well, the recent story Earth & Sky has made that a recent favorite of mine.

Wait, wait, looks like it's the H. M. S. Jump-to-Conclusions! Abandon ship!

Poor Spike, poor Sweetie Belle, blocked at every turn.

This sounds epic, just finished reading the chapter in song of whispers, cant wait to read this one :pinkiehappy:

GASP! He's ALIVE! TO THE POPCORN! :pinkiehappy:

Aww, poor Spike. At least give him the satisfaction of getting a kiss from Sweetie Belle before he never sees the light of day again.

To tired to read tonight will read this tomorrow. after reading his other stories 2-3 times I expect this to be good.:pinkiehappy:

Oh this is fantastic. I can't wait for more. I guess i night have to go back & read the other stories you said interact with this one at some point too.

Wait. Did Sweetie Belle just lose her cutie mark?

863518 Uh... no? how'd you come to that conclusion? :rainbowhuh:

I like where this is going... :moustache::heart::unsuresweetie: :twilightangry2:YOU ARE

Looks like he got...
( •_•)
( •_•)>⌐■-■
Dared to death.


I think he meant mark as in target/victim not mark as in "cutie"

Oh wow!! I am SO watching this!! It was well written, the characters were all believable and it had Rumble and Pip (so cute!!!) and truth or dare and calling Celestia FAT. Awesome!! Keep going!

Sweetie Belle stayed behind to lament the regrettable loss of the opportunity of a lifetime, her mark disappearing in a lavender flash.

Her Mark being Spike. AKA Her target for kissing.

Ohhhhhhhh. Okay. Wow. That scared me for a sec. I seriously thought you guys were going to make this a dramatic story too despite the description.

863689 It may have its serious moments, but on the whole I want to keep this one fun, kind of an escape from the serious tone of my other stories. Especially when Rarity and Pinkie's drama starts, there's gonna need to be something to keep readers' spirits up. :twilightsmile:

Oh Pinkie... I hope she's not gunna do anything really insane. I'm dieing to know what she was talking about when she was talking to Rarity in the shower...

I actually thought Celestia would have a sense of humor! If he had send it as Spike he would live! All in all this is going to be fun.

woohoo! yet another side story! cary on on, my good stallion, for i have fics to read and LOL's to be uttered!:rainbowlaugh:

And Spike is FUUUUCKED:moustache:

Yeah, calling a goddess/god fat is a great way to end up like Odysseus. Poor Spike he is shit creek without a paddle as he invoked the wrath of the two creatures responsible for bringing him into the world in the first place. There is no way he can blame that letter on the cmc; it was their dare, but he decided to take things too far with the message. :twilightsheepish:

863303 Uh, isn't it SooctaSqueak and AppleRumble? :unsuresweetie:

864976 Yeah, it was running commentary while I read, and those were my immediate assumptions. Thus the bit about the H. M. S. Jump-to-Conclusions.

Hey, Cerulean, this is in the "Popular Stories" list on the main page. As it should be. Congrats once again.

Dude, I am SOOOOOO looking forward to this. How often will it update?

I have another two vessels you can add to you fleet, the H.M.S These-Stories-Are-Awesome, and
the H.M.S I-Keep-Refreshing-The-Story-Pages-For-An-Update-At-Least-Every-2-Hours.

I must also add that I found these stories, and many others, from your user page, and am quite
happy that I did, and more than a few of them are on my read later list!!

So I guess thanks for putting links to them there.

866575 Awesome! I'm glad to hear that someone has gotten some use out of my crazy lists.

866055 It will likely be sporadic, since it can't exceed past whatever day my main series is on, but what will likely happen is once I finish Song of Whispers, the time jump between that fic and my next will be used to get most of the CMC stuff done, though I think the story itself won't end until after the start of Rarity's fic. I wish I could give a more solid answer. :twilightoops:

I'm actually working on a scootasqueak. and Rumble is one of the main characters.


(There! THAT should get some comments going! XD)

Captain! The awkward levels! They're rising dramatically!!

Aww Pip. He is just so adorable!! And I like how practically everypony in this needs to have their heads readjusted. No threatening colts Applejack! Or Scootaloo's dad! Actually, given the male to female ratio in Ponyville you'd think it would be the other way around!!

So glad you updated! This is really adorable and fun!

You had me at the promise of potential SweetieXSpike.

You have scared Cerulean into hiding lol.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: this is just to funny 5/5 dashies

Evidently, Celestia doesn't even have to send Pipsqueak to the moon. He's such a space cadet, he could get there himself. :unsuresweetie:

I just about died when Twilight told Spike and Sweetie Belle that they could kiss:rainbowlaugh:

A quote from ASDF movie 5 coordinated to pony format.
Girl(Sweetie Belle): "It's so beautiful out here."

Guy(Spike): "Yeah it's just me, you, & the moon."

Moon(Twilight): "Hey! You two should kiss!"

I love this, it's just too cute. All the potential ships!! I guess it's good Pips a pirate.............. :twilightsmile:

awesome chapter! but how, in the name of celestias rainbow pastel beared, DO YOU POST A BUCKING PICTURE

Ah pip is the best XD SweetieXSpike is best ship!

Great story and developement, I will continue reading.
One problem with spelling that I noticed:
It's spelled, "Gawked"

Great job otherwise.:heart:

This was a good chapter, but I can't wait for more Whispers.:pinkiehappy:

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