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therandomone95


Just another brony from another country (Yes, that means I have difficulty writing stories in english). Also a Spikebloom lover <3

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Button Mash, Spike and Pipsqueak are the big dorks at their school, not even the fillies of their dreams pay any attention to them and they are often made fun of, they just survive the classes to finally be set free to play videogames all afternoon at Button's; that's the way it's been and it's the way it'll always be.

That, however, changes when Rumble felt pity towards these poor children, and he tells them about a potion that's guaranteed to make them cooler and make their dreams come true, only he missed the part that nobody tells well...

Do any of these guys know what they're messing with? Does Rumble know what he's doing to them? Is Equestria itself in danger?

Let's find out together, should we?

Teen rating mainly for some profanity at some points and some pretty real moments in some chapters. You'll see when you get there.

Contains SHIPPING, be warned.
The orthography may not be perfect.
In this story Spike has gone to school with every other filly and colt since he arrived with Twilight in Ponyville, but I don't know if that would be worthy of the AU tag.
Yep, this was inspired by "Be More Chill, the musical", but I'll try to make my own thing. But just in case you haven't seen it, please be warned of some spoilers.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 15 )

A potion to make you cool eh? There probably just drinking 100% pure Strider blood.

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AY! You got it right!

I'll try to make this as original as possible and NOT take much out of BMC. Still don't know if I'll continue it, though...

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What are you saying "no" to?

I wish this fic has more views. I dont review a lot of stories And I am a bit too fan of sweetiemash pairing also I dont have words to say what I am thinking so. I think this fic is good, but seeing the view counts made me fear that this fic will be on hiatus or have a bad ending. Sorry if i am not helping with my comment

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Nah, it doesn't matter. I've had little views on my fics since I started writing about three years ago and I still do it just because I want to.

Regarding THIS fic in particular, I am not too bothered by the views, I just want feedback to see if it's worth finishing it. If the feedback is mainly bad then I'll cancel it or I'll end it as soon as I can, but thus far it's been alright.

If you really want to help me, just share it with some other people or add it to the groups you think it could belong to. Because that way the story will have a bit more feedback and I can see whether or not I should continue.

Thanks for the comment! :twilightsmile:

Dear lord calm down there Silver Spoon :rainbowlaugh:

Kiita, been waiting for new chapter. Also don't sweat it too much we won't force you to write consistently. The only thing we would ask is that you don't let this fic dies and not tell us about it:applecry:

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Oh, don't worry about it, I am NOT letting this fic die, this is the most dedicated I've been to a multi-chapter fic since I started writing on this site, because I feel like I'm doing a better job than my other "attempts" at a multi-chapter fic before this.

I did a fic called "Spike's odyssey" some time ago, and I cancelled it because it was a bit too ambitious for me, but I've been thinking about maybe letting it run again. My other multi-chapter fic was called "You got what you deserved?", and I was basically writing the chapters and I was running out of inspiration towards the latter half of the fic.

In this one I actually feel like I'm capable of finishing it, I have the story planned out in my head and I have inspiration. So don't worry, I am absolutely finishing this, besides, we are about half way there.

Thanks for the comments and for not giving up on this fic! :twilightsmile: :rainbowdetermined2:

Ah the voice inside their head thing is so cool and creepy at the same time! It’s quite interesting. And I really liked that part with Rumble and Scoots at the end, it was cute and just a little mysterious. :twilightsmile:

Wow. Ok, I’ll be honest, at first I was thinking “this really isn’t my cup of tea” but this story is really growin’ on me. Especially this whole “mind pony figure” thing. I even laughed out loud during this chapter, and I really like how it’s going. I’m definitely intrigued to find out what happpens with Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon and Spike. Keep up the good work - the writing gets better every chapter!:pinkiehappy:

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