Just another brony from another country (Yes, that means I have difficulty writing stories in english). Also a Spikebloom lover <3
Button Mash is tired of being the odd one in the class, and he also wants to date a beautiful filly named Sweetie Belle, but he's having trouble doing it, so Rumble and Spike tell Button to ask her a question.
Trouble is, he doesn't know what kind of questions he should ask her..
Warning: Maybe you should go away if you don't like Sparity, Rumbleloo or Buttonbelle / Sweetiemash.
Need to work on the grammar, orthography and pacing, please don't be too harsh on me.
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OMG, Rumbleloo? Are you stupid?!
OMG, Sparity, are you dumb?! 
Most overused story plot ever!
Rumble would never act like that! Uhhhmmm... actually, he was kind of pompous and rude in that one Season 7 episode... My bad.
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There are people who hate Sparity and Rumbleloo with all of their might...
Quick question, what if I like those?
Not bad. And it really picked up with chapter two, when Button asked Spike for advice. And what advice he gave!!! It was important for Button to learn that how Rumble got Scootaloo as a special somepony was not necessarily gonna work because Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo are completely different fillies..
I could see this kinda happening in canon (though we are pretty sure that Button will never have a canon voice or name, similar to how Derpy's official name is 'Muffins'...)
I have to give Sweetie Belle a kudos as well--she was open enough to see Button's first attempt but more importantly, she gave him a second chance to just be himself and stop fronting. Because Button let his guard down and was being himself, Sweetie was so much more comfortable with him around. At that point, it was inevitable.
Pretty decent for a first story. Bonus points that you wrote it when English is clearly your second tongue...
And yes, I'm a Sparity fan. My thing though is that I can deal with any plausible ship--provided that it shows that there has been some planning with the paring. Crack ships are funny as well in the beginning for the initial laughs; but over time they become boring and tedious to read.
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Then enjoy, I guess...
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Thank you! But this wasn't my first story... Anyway, I have a "hard" time writing these stories because I still have a lot of errors, and I think it's just going to keep happening.
I'm just a guy who posts stories on this site from time to time and hopes that the people here likes them, thank you for passing by and reading it!
Sequel about the date and the new Crusaders?
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Maybe... I don't know...
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Glad you liked it!
I imagine Button only being capable of jumping up two steps of a set of stairs at a time, and then falling off xd
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Truly an athletic specimen! xD
as soon as i read the title i though "ayo can u do a backflip?"