This story is a sequel to The night of the outcasts
It's been some time after the conversation Spike and Apple Bloom's conversation, and they decide to go on a date not minding the attention they would have from everypony around them. Their date goes well until they get interrupted by some ponies that they weren't expecting, Apple Bloom running towards her new house crying afterwards. Let's hope the dragon can cheer her up...
This is a sequel to 'the night of the outcasts', you don't need to read it, but I recommend that you give it a try, that way the events here will make more sense.
RATED TEEN JUST FOR SOME DARK PARTS IN THE SECOND ENDING, EVERYTHING ELSE IS PRETTY MUCH FOR EVERYONE (or at least I'd like to think so).
Still need to work on my grammar and orthography.
Tagged AU for obvious reasons.
Spike has wings in this story, even if he doesn't use them.
In case you want to read the prequel, here's a link to it. If it doesn't work, I'll figure out a way to let you read it.
wow...this is really really bad and stupid.
Sup Random, so you finally did it & release the sequel! So was it worth the wait? Honest answer... Yes, yes it was. Did it deliver? Hmmm... Hard to say at the moment, but it was a enjoy to read.
The 1st chapter was a little too short & could have gone a bit longer b4 AJ's big fat (honest) mouth ruined everything. [Fun fact, I have a aunt that's too honest & never shuts up XD]
Now thankfully, Ending 1 (aka the "Canon Ending") fix the small issue of chapter 1 had being too short and it showed off how much Spike truly loves and can't bare to lose AB or going back to being alone again.
Overall, I'm happy you did this Random, I asked for a sequel & I kept encouraging you to at least to try. Now that this is over, you deserve a nice break & to anyone that thinks this trash *coughs*diablo4000*cough* f'd off I'm the one who requested this, so leave Random alone! Ok, enough on "big bro" mode, laters!
It been a while I read the prequel and glad I did, it hard to find some decent Bloomspike/ CMCxSpike stories. And for this story I enjoyed it alot despite the short first chapter, and I love this ending and knowing me I can't handle sad romance endings there is only so much sad stories I can take.
But I will read the sad ending later in the future when my OCD kicks in.
And just a heads up I counted like two or three spelling errors nothing insane just there, keep up the good work!
Interesting✔Pretty good!
Poor Rarity
vary sweet i dont dislike it other pony who commented good job
please squeal.
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ok.
Rely Thank you,
hugs
Can you write a bit on Apple Bloom fate in the dungeon?
Me gustó más este final
That was a great story. Love the endings!
Happy 5th Anniversary!