• Published 11th Jul 2012
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The Conversion Bureau: Fleeing the unknown - The Psychopath



A man wakes up after an error with a tested stasis tube. What is going on?!

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The new group

The road was quite bumpy, a bit normal seeing where the jeep was. There were still no roads, and the bumpy rocks on the path didn't help at all with the waiting. All was silent in the vehicle. The wounded unicorn was starting to calm down, while the weakened and brutalized mare remained on her seat, eyes directed towards the floor. Heart and Chocolate remained next to them, but they said nothing. As Gill turned around to see this sad little picture, he turned to face Jonathan, who still had a very serious face. The man thought a bit, before opening a conversation.

"Jonathan, what drove you to work for the HLF?"

"HLF?"

"Isn't the group you were with called the HLF?"

"No. Not anymore atleast. We WERE another portion of the organization, but everybody, especially Snowman, started to get pissed by the actions of the PER, and the lack of action against them. So called: 'We can't attack because they'll ponify us.' and so forth."

"Then what did you do?"

"We became active. Those who were ponified were killed by the others, while the rest of the PER were either killed or captured for torture and interrogation. In the end, we took the name of 'Green Eskimos' seeing as our leader was already called 'Snowman'. We intercepted everything the PER used, but Snowman started to go nuts. He only trusted humans, so he started to kidnap every single pony thinking they were part of that terrorist organization. I tried my best to stop him, but it was too late. When I tried to bandage one victim that the members captured, I was imprisoned. I only joined because I wanted to counter everything that the other organization had planned. Forcing a choice upon someone is wrong. Especially one they can't return from. However, now that you exist, we can create a new organization, one that will hold both ponies and humans, as well as ponification and anti-ponification potion."

"What? But how can we even create such a thing?" Heart cried out.

"Oh...I have an idea. The stasis chamber still has the necessary equipment for basic serum creation, so we'll be able to create the stuff there, and begin anew. We must first get these two to the hospital." Chocolate proposed.

"No. I'm fine. I'm just...weakened is all." the brown mare swiftly replied.

"Hmph. My cooking will help you with that." Jonathan laughed.

"What do you mean?"

"I have my recipes."

"Heheh...heh..."

The mare started to tremble as she grabbed her head.

"N...no...It's happening again...I MUST KILL THE HUMANS FOR PRINCESS CELESTIA!"

"WHAT?!" Gill and Jonathan both yelled.

The mare jumped on Jonathan and started to try and strangle him. Naturally, she was too weak and tiny compared to the Native-American to manage to do anything but keep him from controlling the jeep properly. Both Gill and Heart jumped on her and tried to pull her down, but it didn't work. The vehicle narrowly missed a steep cliff. That was when the giant got mad and grabbed the mare, only to lock her between his legs while driving. Her struggling soon came to a halt as crying replaced the potion's mind-control.

"It's okay. It's not your fault. We'll be at the hospital soon, then Gill can drive us to this facility."

The mare nodded with a sniff.

It barely took fifteen minutes to reach the city and get to the hospital, where the green unicorn was dropped off by Gill, who immediately ran back into the jeep to take off for the facility. Said place was no longer inhabited by the PER. On the contrary. That place was abandoned, and, somehow, the corpses were gone. Either way, the mare started to go nuts again, so Jonathan grabbed her and held her upside down until they reached th room. Despite his wounds, Chocolate found the equipment and reactivated them. The AI kept taking small samples from Gill, who was getting fedup with the surprise attacks. Heart didn't have much to do, besides holding the crazed mare down. Several hours had passed, and several antidotes were tried. None worked, and she was seeping deeper into a horrid rush of control and subserviance.

Jonathan was getting tired of this, and, if a solution wasn't found soon, he would have to do what he did to the pegasus in the base. Yet, Chocolate came with a potion that alternated from red to blue and vice-versa. He injected it into the brown mare, who started to calm down and fall asleep. Little by little, she became a human again. The men didn't pay attention, but when Heart pointed it out, they were staring at a naked woman, and they averted their gazes before becoming red. Chocolate walked by and went to a nearby locker. The uniform in it was orange, and probably wasn't the cleanest thing around, but atleast it would provide a basic covering. The AI extended one of its arms to grab the woman and place her on a desk, where it assisted the unconcious woman with her dressing. Gill started to think about something.

"Well...while you do this, I'm gonna have a look around. Let's see if I can find what I'm expecting to see." he said bizarrely.

The others shrugged it off, so Gill was free to go. He was surprised at how fast the antidote was made, and how many versions were cranked out too. As Gill walked down the stairs, he was reminded of that damned spot he met those ponies for the first time. Standing and staring at these toppled tables and broken radios, the man spotted a door right behind everything and moved the damaged junk to the side. He attempted to pull the door open, but it didn't work.

"Now how am I supposed to tear this down? Hmmm...a grenade? Muahahaha!" Gill thought to himself as he found an abandoned grenade on the floor.

The idiot gathered up the junk and fashioned himself a little barrier with pieces of couches and tables. He unpinned the grenade and yelled "GRENADA!" before tossing the explosive ball and covering his ears. A loud explosion followed by the man being crouched by his falling barricade shook the damaged facility, making dust and small bits of rubble fall down. As the man struggled to climb out of his newfound prison, he stared in awe at the contents within the room right in front of him.

"Gill, what the hell are you doing!" Jonathan yelled.

"Look."

"Look at wh...What are we going to do with this?"

"You'll see." Gill said from underneath the broken couch.


Three months later

Today, Snowman had finally destroyed a base of operations of the PER, and he was celebrating with the others. After all, they were outnumbered three-to-one. As everybody hit glasses of champagne together, and boasted about their exploits, the T.V.s all around their own base started to flicker, and, finally, the face of a smiling Jonathan appeared on T.V. . He had both ponies and humans next to him, with Gill standing next to him. They were all in a gray room.

"What the hell is that?" one of the soldiers asked out loud.

Jonathan began to speak.

"Do not be afraid. We aren't here to threaten anybody...or anypony. We have an antidote to the ponification potion, and those who have succumbed to the forced curse of becoming a pony, enforced upon them by the PER, are welcome to come to where we are. The address is just below. For those who WANT to become ponies, this shall be your blessing, as we also have vast supplies of ponification potions. This facility is for all. Those who wish to stay human, and those who wish to become pony.

We have perfected the ponification antidote, and it is now perfect. The H.P.A. (Human Pony Alliance) is here for all! We may not have the most original of names, but our purpose is sincere. We are also the enemies of the PER, and the Green Eskimos, who have been terrorizing both humans and ponies for far too long. We will aid those who wish to preserve their humanity, and that includes members of the HLF, so, unless you threaten us, you have nothing to fear. Our facility also comes equipped with basic health equipment, so you can bring your wounded for a temporary but effective treatment before taking them to a proper healthcare. But, who are we to thank for this antidote?" Jonathan stood up and started walking towards Gill.
"Is it technology? Is it nature? Well, the answer is 'Yes' to both questions. Thanks to an unforseen incident, our friend here, has the genetic template allowing him to help us produce the antidotes. So, when you come here, thank him, because if he didn't receive that incident, humanity would have become extinct. Ah! Yes. I had forgotten to announce to all. The PER had created an enslavement potion. One of our members, who shall remain anonymous, was the subject of its testing. She was captured by the Green Eskimos and mistreated. Malnourishment, and frequent beatings whenever someone would go to her cell.
She would frequently go into a rampage that forced her to kill humans for Celestia. Do we want this?"

"NO!" every member in the chamber yelled.

"We won't stand this. Also, we know that those groups are targeting us now, so we invite you with open arms. Attack us, and you're attacking the people. We fight, as the people. Ponies and humans have no need to hate eachother, as both sides have ups and downs. Such is what is taught by my people. Light cannot exist without dark, but groups of darkness can overwhelm small pockets of light. We are the amalgation of light, and, therefore, we shall protect the smaller pockets. Have a good day."

The T.V.s went back to normal, showing the reporters trying to assess the situation. Snowman was furious, as shown by the hole he managed to create in the cement pillar.

"What are we going to do now, Big Boss?" one of the troops asked as he turned towards Snowman.

"We prepare to kill them all and take the potion. NO FRATERNIZING WITH THE PONIES!"

"NO CORRUPTION!"


I ended this in a cliff-hanger so that you readers could imagine the next part yourselves. Use Gill and his new group however you want if you ever make another story. You want him as a tyrant? No problem! You want him and the group to triumh over the PER? No problem! You want the new group to be destroyed? Still no problem. They are there to let your imagination run wild.

Comments ( 90 )

The end? This was good though.

Will there come a sequel?

987591 I have a tendency to do those, but I don't think I'll make one for this. I wanted peôple to be able to use the events happening here for their own little custom stories. And how come you only just commented now?:unsuresweetie:

987597
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I Don't Know, LOL
Didn't realy have anything to say.......Buuut if you wan't my critic about it then:

I give the story: 7/10 ★
The story is good and has an interesting plot and characteristics. It could have been a bit longer and the ending feels kinda rushed for me. It's a pity people didn't like it as much as your other stories but what can you do. It did have some spelling errors and some plot-holes here and there (I'm not saying any, why? Because I'm lazy :twilightsheepish:) and sometimes questioning moments, but overall? It was actually pretty good. I guess that you didn't really put as much time and effort as some of you other stories, if it would have it then it would probably be better. As I said it could have been longer, have more characteristics and some other crap I can't come up with to say right now.
I give the story: 7/10 ★for good story, plot and characteristics

Is it that what you wanted to see?

Also: Is it wrong for me to not like your new profile pic then the old one?

987690It's supposed to be a preview. I'm going to hange it, but I'm still waiting for a certain person to draw my new profile pic.

987742 K
Hope you get a new pic, that one...I realy don't like it as much as the other one.

Also>...I think you story didn't get as much ass (ass=Viewers) as much as other because It didn't really have any characters from the show. People tend to not really care about stories if they don't have the characters they what to see, Example: You have 2 stories, 1 is about an Oc in the wastelands of EQ (fallout fic), the other 1 is about an Oc x Your favorite character. Tell me which one you would choose. Because there is a character that people what to see they would go read that instead of the other. Now you did make a reference to Celestia and Luna and yet they were only mentioned in the story.If and now I say IF there going to be a sequel and you want more viewers then you must have at least one pony from the show to "Catch" a viewer. I recommend to have Celestia and Luna in the sequel IF it was to happen.

Not only am I a good reader but I am very good at helping and giving tips

987793 Weeeelll...I do have a story that is set in the same universe as "The true Psychopath" that will have Luna as one of the main characters,but won't feature Psycho, that is being made.:ajsmug:

987845 Maybe. It features a new character of mine...a very creepy one.

987849 The Sociopath I guess.
Well.....Got nothin' to do.....Time to go Dear hunting in the swedish alperna

987864 Pff. I said creepy, not murderous.

987742
Hm... a shame it ended on such a cliffhanger... Also, I know this is odd to say... but I don't think Celestia herself -or at least canon, as I know little to none about TCB!Tia- would approve of a serum that causes one to become a complete and subservient slave to others with such an intense HATE of humanity. Aren't they supposed to get rid of hate, or something? XD My point with this statement is that... well, the weird part of me thinks Celestia would have some form of approval for the HPA, improving relations and all of that so there is less conflict.
987793
Booly... as odd as it is to say, I agree that I would like to see a fic in this verse in which the Mane Six are present and REASONABLE, but at the same time, I felt part of the appeal was it not having the Mane Six involved, 'cause then we'd either see for sure that they are anti-Human supremacists or see them break down emotionally from all the war this crusade, this farce, has caused.

997655 I haven't seen many TCBs, but I've seen that the PER aren't directly affiliated with the conversion bureaus. The PER, in fact, hate humans, and consider them a burden because blahblahblah human bad, blahblahblah, fire bad, fire bite. It hurt finger. Blahblahblah
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THey think that by forcibly ponifying everyone, they'll clean the Earth. I decided to give humans a shot at life by making Gill. I left it at a cliff-hanger because I wanted people to use my new group in their own stories. Perhaps I should write that?

997828
Lol. Sounds good to me... Wait a minute, write which? Celestia being reasonable and liking the HPA, or the other thing? So I guess the PER are the ones whom created the mind-altering serum in your fic?

997849 Yes. I've seen in other fics that they had a tendency to steal other potions that didn't transform a human into a pony too.

998003
Ah, makes sense.
I'm actually planning a post-conversion oneshot, myself... in which Celestia regrets the destruction of an entire species and resolves to never let the memory of them die.

998035So you aren't using Gill and the Native American giant? Awww.:ajsmug:

998367
Oh, you misunderstand. I use trollestia as my smily, not the others. :rainbowlaugh:

998372
:twilightblush:
Anyway, if okay with you, as I'm relatively unfamiliar with writing pony-based fanfiction, I may later PM what I have so far for creative consultance.

998388 Do a blog listing your ideas. I made one.

998393
Blog list... could potentially spoil. Plus, doubt many would look at it. :rainbowwild: I mean, my only fic here so far is part of that "Chess Game" universe.

998443 i just write it to remember. I get too many ideas, so writing them there prevents me from forgetting.

998449
Eh, sounds good. I suppose I could do that.

HUMANITY.... FIGHT FOR HONOR AND GLORY AND FREEDOM, FLY TO VICTORY!

I imagine the main character looking like Steve Carell and having his voice.

1010907 So THAT'S his name. I could never see it anywhere.:ajbemused:

Gill lowered himself and picked up the elderly stallion from under his forelegs and lift him high in the air.

"Look, ma. I dun found me one of dem small herses." the human said in a rather degrading town.

THAT'S SO FUCKIN FUNNY! OH CELESTIA, AHHHHHA!
I love this story, instantly favorited since first chapter.

1011459 I still have several other stories in case you're interested. Also, you want a dark story?

That there was a damn nice story, I tell you what, harmony to Snowman, harmony to the PER. Victory for the Human/Pony Alliance, not that they will live much longer what with the converging of the worlds... COO COO KAJEW!

1025175 Lay off my back man i'm getting to it jeez! My girlfriend is trying to get me quit weed all week it's been really stressful for me! I'll try again okay? You don't have to yell!

901917
If you get more than 9 dislikes then it means your doing something good.

1033850
In english please, because I have no idea what my generation does with all these memes and 4Chan and this rap music.
*me looks out side to see if there are kids on his lawn*
Wait... I don't have a lawn.

1033854 Is that a joke or are you really old?

1033856
No I just spend my life living underneath a rock... that and I barely keep up to date with all the memes and such.

1033860 Would you like to know the rules of the internet then?

1033864
All I need to know is Rule 34 and Rule 64.

Noooo, not over YET. SEQUEL, I NEED A F*KING SEQUEL. NAOW.

1533558 Snow is freezing cold and with no emotions or pity. Hmhmha.:pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by Furion deleted Jan 13th, 2014

1533946 Of course! You just have to ask me, and the answer will be yes or no unless there's a character I don't want you to use.

Comment posted by Furion deleted Jan 13th, 2014

1534014 Pfff. Then you still have much to learn.:duck: Do you get the occasional writer's block?

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