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Valtyra
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Mane character x Human OC? This better be good...
awwwwwwww dis guna b good
:D i like it!
and then celestia straped his body to a bed and raped it....the end :D
im so sick minded...
856701 That made me literally ROFL
:D thx
I love seeing good immortal humans in equestria
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not sure if complimenting story or fact... XD
859651 Both I get tired of seeing immortal humans going mad with their own power, yet you made one who isn't overpowered and still acts like a normal person
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lol yeah thanks :)
Yeah it's kinda a balance. he' been around for nearly 2k years meaning all the experience with stuff, but at the same time it would be boring if that's all he did, use his experience.
If anyone has any criticisms or positive feedback please, put them here :D
I actually love the idea for the story, but I get the feeling that the pacing is a bit... fast if anything. Just slow the story down a bit, and maybe make the chapters slightly longer...
But really, they're only tiny things, keep up the good work!
-Jorofrarie
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Yeah, i think so to, i'll try to slow it a bit, and 1.5 - 2.5k is generally as much as i can do in a chapter without getting bored, sometimes more.
OOOOOOH shit.....le plot thickens
Stopping a few meters in front of Celestia the Alicorn charged a spell in his horn, but Celestia tackled him before it could finish ramming him through a wall and out of the castle, as they were falling they would hit and ram each other and Celestia’s mane grew hotter with each hit, scorching the rock face around her every time she pushed off it to go for another attack.
Caffeine much?
lol your celestia has evolved into RAPIDASH! lol
Here's a bit of a "Filler" for you guys, admittidly this is only for me to get the confrontation thought up.
But it also adds some new stuff for me to work with later on which some of you might like
:D i like it!
TRILIGHT! I KNEW IT!
On an unrelated note... FOREVER!!!!!!111111111
*ahem* That is all...
-Jorofrarie
Oh no, this isn't one of those 'humanity is totally evil, period' stories, is it?
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nope, why would humanity be evil?
...And it's Fluttershy! Because you can't get enough anger directed at the Diamond Dogs! I swear, she has weighed dice. She rolls a 20 for dodge, 20 for attack (Always "The Stare", which always works), and 15 for shipping. Rainbow rolls 19 and Twilight 20 for the latter.
863564 Nah, chap! It's one of those newfangled "Multiverse traveler" thingumabobs.
856279 What I will always think, forever, when I read fanfiction. It never is.
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no multiverse here im afraid... Nopenopnope
well that was a quick fight
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Yeah :/ I'm currently rewriting it as you read this
It should be done in the next 2 hours.
Damn son you done killed his ass
There we go, I added more to it :D
ENJOY
Glad I read it AFTER you edited it... This story is great
the chapters could be a bit longer though. Other than that, it's all great 
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But i didnt gt ferst post D:1!
:D im liking it
DAYUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!
Nicks got legit SKILLZ, but its kinda rushed >:O
The story will take a different turn with the new chapters, but will still stick with the current story.
Just watch out
Wat teh fuck
Wow. Hope he didn't do anything he will regret... One small change to the past can cause catastrophic changes to the future.
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what do you mean?
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Hopefully i will go into that. If im feeling feeling funky.
869976 I just... don't know, maybe its you becoming a little colt and being with Celestia for a few years AHHH THIS PLOT IS INTERESTING BUT CONFUSING!!!
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lol, i've got one more time travel part and then it will be over and nick will go back to the present...
Or will he?
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Damn you and your ways for making me think that he wont go back!
Alright, this one is another filler, generally explaining the effects of Nick overshooting his mark and what happenes when the princesses died.
Wow, did not see these chapters coming...
Keep up the good work!
-Jorofrarie
The next chapter should be the last in these ones :D
Should
If there are any spelling errors, please pm them to me and i'll change them asap.
great story.
I love you :D
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Aww
<3 lu2
You mad doctor whooves?
The mind fuck that will happen when everypony finds out they're alive.
nice use of time traveling an stuff.
Duh dun dahh