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Pinkie Pie has been asked to help Celestia relax and let her mane down.

Sequal: Letting Her Mane Down 2: Electric-boogaloo

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Sorry I just had to.:twilightsheepish:

Vocaie cawogirl nobowy knows

Really rushed but cute and fluffy.

A good idea but it feels a little short. It feels like you are dropping hints at the end but it now says complete (such as the rainbow center "and if I was only younger comment"). Further while it sounds like Celestia has started to relax it does not feel like there was a real sense of closure here.

2469226

hmm, I guess you're right. I might fix it up sometime, probs later

โ€œIf I was a couple thousand years younger...โ€

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Lol'd hard. I was originally going to make this a clopfic :/ though, getting to the baking part, I thought it would spoil the whole thing.

Maybe a sequal would have to be done /:)

Where's The Gak-y Hair I was hoping for gaky hair

4062310 The gak-y hair was inside you all along...

4062344 :facehoof: From Indiana) that's corny
From Wisconsin) that's Cheesy

Just out of curiosity, why didn't you make this a one-shot?

4382591 um... Dunno tbh.

This is interesting. But I really don't see the reason to split it in two... :rainbowderp:

It looks interesting enough. Maybe kind of bold and I could see many grammar errors, but, overall, it was enjoyable :pinkiesmile:

I was laughing within 2 minutes in...

I agree it could use a little more closure, but otherwise it's great:pinkiesmile:

The first thing I thought when I read the description was: "How is she gonna do that? Her mane is always moving around...

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