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This guy is... is just... just wow.
It's a good wow... but wow.
This guy is a genius and an idiot at the same time. I love it.
For some reason, I keep imagining him having Death Troopers from Star Wars as guards. Will he create some kind of elite guards?
7947245 He's going to HAVE to, this is going to get embarrassing just to read if they don't find and pick up their game.
MOAR, DARN IT! MOAR! NEEDING MOAR STORY HERE!
What an incompetent pack of guards. I'm also curious about all the enhancements our protag seems to have gotten.
Also: colored cover image! yay!
Woot! The original crew is back together, The guards really need some training in discipline. If I was king of that place, I'd have all the tails cut/knotted/fashioned short for all the maid mares...
For science of course.
7947245 The Immortals. They actually existed, but obviously not in the way as the movie 300 depicted them.
Throw.
The.
CHEESE!
Weird, i have this story faved and thumbed up, but new chapters refuse to show up in favourites library.
Same here, new chapters weren't seen in the list
7947447 THROW IT NOW!
Spoiler for My Hero Academia
Maybe he's tapping into the strength of all previous monkey kings like All Might from My Hero Academia
7947324 <("<) or he is the reincarnation of a being with incredible powers
*In another universe*
*A british man reading his newspaper suddenly looks out the window, a confusion in his eyes, sensing the troubles in his owner's mind, his dog looks at him*
Hmm? Oh, don't worry Gromit, It's probably nothing.
could it be 'monster hunter' perhaps?
Found a few mistakes:
“What the? Seriously? By the Gods, this has to be the greatest luck either I or my sister have every had.
*ever
Gil simply nods. “A very direct but effective idea indeed. Something of which more leaders have need.”
*more leaders need
They didn’t even HAD potatoes in that time period so I don’t know
*have
Also, when is there going to be a part 2 of the misadventures of nava?
who cares about currywurst if you can have döner? döner ist the most popular fast food in germany
This chapter was worth the wait.
I can of wonder, he landed in a house…where were the owners? if Superman jus suddenly crash landed in my house groaning, I will be worry, but I must likely go to aid him in concern, that is just human nature…or do Zebras don't have much of that nature and the owners bail?
CHEESE! They sell cheese!!
Well on its way to the contending spot for favorite human story
doing a really good job on the story so far keep up the good work
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Immortals wasn't King bodygurds, but rather his professional army. When most of Persian armies were contingents from wassals with different equipment and training (from militias to famous Bactarian cavalry), Immortals were backbone of army, loyal only to King. Exactly ten thousends disciplined soldiers armed with long bows, spears and shields, with light armor (there wasn't any heavy armor infantries on these areas, too hot and too expensive).
"300" is absolute bullshit from historical point.
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This would be more appropriate:
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Which says something about standards and how low they are for HiE's. By the by, what's your current favorite?
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Seems guard incompetency is a global norm on Equus. Remember this brilliant show of tactical genius by a renowned captain?
Yes! genius! Shoot a beam of pure magic at a being who eats magic, then sit there and do literally nothing else. Brilliant!
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That describes roughly 75% of humans in Equestria.
7949507 Well it IS hard to not come up with something that has already been done before in today's age.
Plus a cliche isn't really a bad thing, it just depends on how its done and what this cliche really is. Plus it has also been proven that sometimes, peoples just want the same stuff over and over again. The current example I can think of is fastfood like McDonalds. People know that is but and really offers nothing different, but still they go there occasionally to just get the same thing all over again.
I'll have to keep my eye on this one, mainly because my following box doesn't seem to alert me to the chapter updates...
I cried, this is pure awesomeneness.... is that even a word? Meh, it's now!
7949507 Bad Mondays
CHEESE!! XD Instant Wallace and Gromit memories.
Discord has a new buddy.
huh, the cover has colours now Interesting
P.s I love it by the way
This was a very amusing chapter Well done
Really!? What's wrong with you That is just so wrong
Need more please.
-Ru
....This man is my spirit animal. Literally me in that situation.
Uuh... what?
That has to a mistake there....
Also there were a few more errors i saw but forgot where they are and i can't be bothered to try and search them on my phone...
7950325 actually he just described the human race perfectly.
7953301 This is hilarious
If someone is suggesting something was done by the wind, it probably was not the wind.
Only one way to find out. But remember: You will have to use the trick on everyone present, otherways it will fail.
Was that intentionally?
Monster Hunter?
Had you never played video games? Followers are either blocking your path (mostly when you have to escape) or are stuck somewhere far away (mostly when you need them.)
I hope that will be explained later.
Just on your first day and already starting your harem. Go on!
Good chapter!
Can't wait to see what happens next.
(I'm writing way too long comments, don't I?)
One small thing:
You wrote "gryphon" a few times. Did you mean "griffon" instead?
7956246 Nope, gryphons is the right term for sapient griffons. You so silly.
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Actuall, this time I'm not the silly one. (No offense.)
The title of Episode five, Season one is "Griffon the Brush Off". That was the one which introduced Gilda.
On top of that even Fimfiction is using the term "griffon".
As long as you are referring to creatures like Gilda and Gabby [see S3E19] "griffon" is the correct term.
I hope he doesn't become too much of a gary stu with those misterious new powers he has.
I also hope the baby dragon is a female. We need more female dragoness in this site. The only downside is that it will take a couple of years for it to be an important character in the story and not just a cute baby dragon (which I dont really mind if that were the case).
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Good to know I am not the only one with this problem.
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he landed on a roof, and did not fall through.
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Then how was inside a hole?
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bad writing.
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And what about the soldier that arrive at his location and turn him over?
How does one gesture so many airquotes on one word?
7993251 You mean to say that you broke your lungs by laughing to hard?
What a strange medical condition.
7993287 You should try health care.
R.I.P. FHA 2/3/17
Loving this fic SO much!
Dude, you made my week with this chapter, we need more! And why i have the feeling the twins gonna bring more lewd trouble for our mighty king in the future?