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I'm getting Dragon Age vibes off of that idol.
Does that include Seppuku?
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DA2 specifically. Bartrand's madness caused by the Red Lyrium Idol.
the fak, youporn is actual a website. I mean I totally didn't just search it up on my browser
what happened here
Nah it's probably because they're black
edgy m8
Yeahhhh more king shit, thought not enough plot in this chapter (get it, because every chapter has a- yeah i'll stop) Solid 9/10 since I forgot how I judged the score.
out of all seriousness though, you're introducing/adding way too many characters. Without having the character create a impact on my opinion, I doubt I'll continue to remember them.Edit: I just noticed I haven't read the last chapter, hahahahaha that's probably why I felt like there was a skip in time. I just thought my memory was shit. Well....
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My thoughts exactly. No complaints there, however. Good references are always welcome!
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Can you point this out better?
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It has to be fate, you replied so soon! that means we must definitely be in love.
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And you must definable be gay somehow. Anyway, just tell me where that paragraph is so that I can fix it.
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12-14 paragraph my love
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Oh, so he's telling this story from the future? And for dat line he's talking in third person just because he can right?
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Go away, I already told you that I am straight.
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He can do anything. Remember that he is NOT normal, and who might actually be the mortal incarnation of Sheogorath himself.
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NEVER, I WILL FIGHT UNTIL I DRAW MY LAST BREATH. EVEN THEN MY SOUL WILL FIND YOU
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I was under the impression that he was just a normal human, huh, interesting
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Well then you better start searching for a good coffin. Also I have the cellphone number of the Ghostbusters nearby if the need shall arise.
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I never said he actually is. I just made a suggestion, a theory so to say.
But then again, he does seem to have certain abilities under his belt ever since he got warped into this new world. The reasons as to why are hinted a little bit in previous chapters.
So in the laps of one day, Alex has being propose, had a small melt down, probably unintentionally cause his Lieutenant develop feelings for him (Have to see if she keep remembering that stare) and possible made Mystic Gem so happy that she could do a back flip and give him a kiss as thanks because her mission is almost over? Je all in a days work right?
Well congratulation Alex, you just capture the heart of 3 possible 4 mares without intending to do so, and create your own version of the stare, the 'attraction STARE' Fluttershy will be proud.
Oh man now I want him and Fluttershy having a stare off
I am going to make the guess that the Queen has the idol. I also would like if Alex married Little Steppe instead, I like her and what is the best way to improve relations with a nation? Marriage.
You know you don't have to make your own scene transitions you just need to type [ hr] minus the spaces and you have one pre made
Unless you’re human. For us it’s like looking at something and going “Meh” before just walking off and doing something else instead.
This is so true for me
Ahh I get it now
marry the changeling! best deal! magical shape shifting spies/assassins!
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Well, his theory that he might be the mortal version of Sheogorath might actually be true. He creates chaos and madness where ever he goes and not goes.
I think Discord and him would become instant buddies at first sight.
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Or enemies with him detecting that he is as chaotic as his, and according to the comics logic, the more chaotic being can in fact become the new lord of chaos while the previous one fade into Oblivioum
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Well in that case we already know the winner.
You willy.
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Fuck yeah!! Fellow Dragon Age enthusiast
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thats fine
That queen is crazy. And not the King kind of crazy... The malicious kind of crazy.
You see kids, this is why you don't accept mysterious powers from ancient mcguffins... Don't do Mcguffins.
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And crack, don't do crack either. But cocaine, cocaine is fine :P
8647503 'It's a move for cowards', is not a valid reason to ignore it. War is about winning, defeating the opponent with as few deaths on your side as possible. Caring more about showing off than winning has caused more defeats in history than anything else. Agincourt? Hastings? You're the historian, you probably know far more than I do.
Your other counter arguments are better. My main counter arguments would be whether there were places that could be fortified for the civilliasns to evacuate to? Could wells and water sources that couldn't be defended be hidden? Would the minotaurs have a relief force that could attack along the bridge and create a pincer movement on the blocking force?
Also, as you said, your army was untried, using it in a more complex plan would have meant more things that could go wrong. Now you have a blooded army. Your point about morale is well taken, if the intervening land they'd have been wandering around belonged to some of the other tribes. As it is, your army protected the other tribes lands too.
Could you use you skilled desert scouts to make night attacks and hit their supply tail? Zebras with axes galloping in, smashing the minotaur's water casks and wagons and vanishing back into the desert before the enemy could react would severely impact their ability to continue.
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The first comments was a joke. About the cowards one.
And about all of your suggestion. Well...maybe I could use them. More battles could certainly happened in the future before the big "empire building campaign" starts.
The changeling ark for examples, something will have to happened to end the problem and bring peace and stability back to the desert-lings.
8649628 Didn't realise that it was a joke, since that exact attitude has prevailed many, many times, usually leading to vast casualty counts and snatching defeat from the jaws of victory.
Take the battle of Hastings. The Saxons had the high ground (+1 Attack bonus), and a nicely defensible position. The French Normans were outnumbered 7 to 10, some of which was cavalry, had to make attacks up hill and against enemy archery fire, while their own was rendered less effective by the slope. an easy way to lose your army.
So they pretended to turn and run, and the Saxons abandoned their position to gain the glory of routing their fleeing enemy. They came down to the Normans level, just in time for them to turn on the Saxons and fight on a level playing field where the cavalry could be used most effectively. If the Saxons just held their position and kept firing, all of English history would have changed.
REEEE I deamand more chapters out sooner! REEEEEE! :P
Anyways loving your story ya have your story quite well wirtin or typed in this case an can't wait to see more!
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I dont know if many people tell u this but ur doing a great job at what u do!!
and i mean it
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That entire situation is nope...nope...nope...nope and nope
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I am well aware of the history of history.
Wow interesting chapter
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Why?
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Well I find it interesting where you are going with this storymies plot
8658718 You're doing better than me, I'm only aware of history. If you know the history of history... meta-history, that would be history-ception.
>The Princess told Alex all the information about the changeling situation in exchange for nothing.
>She went willingly to the palace, which is basically a maze and surrounded by guards.
Alex could easily just capture her and use her as bargaining chip with the Queen. I'm sure her mother would have been grateful if he delivers the leader of the resistance and wanna-be usurper.
Makes you question Palmyria's ability to rule, outside of the lineage fact.
I was half hoping Alex to propose something like "Instead of marrying and joining our nations after we defeat your mother, since the underground where your hive is located is still Zebrica territory, all the changelings will swear loyalty to the Zebrican Empire and as King, I will be your leader"
Opening the underground would expand the territory, and Palmyria can have a position of power as representative for the changelings.
Nice to see you brought the idol back. I wasn't expecting to hear from it and the gazelles again so soon.
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Trying to avoid plot holes of course...if I can remember them that is.
Also Alexander might be an asshole, but not an asshole enough to snatch the changelings away from the princess...or at least not in an obvious way.
Don't forget that Alex has those enhanced strength and skill from being there. So maybe he has some build along with others. Like if there is a long ass stairs but painfully karmas with lack of stamina, because he's lazy.
So this artifact of the does' is suppose to create more magic-based types of their kind... so why is it making the queen insane? Dark powers are afoot - or ahoof in this case - here...
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Because it was meant ONLY for the Gazelles.
This artifact is starting to remind me of the one from Dead Space with all of this mind twisting and causing people to go insane.
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and the artifact from dragonage 2