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You never fail to amaze me with your stories my friend. You have once again made it on the featured list.
A note before this goes any farther. The Enlightenment ran on coffee. If this human increases the production of coffee and makes its consumption widespread he could kick off an intellectual boom entirely by accident.
wellp, so much for first impressions
If I was him, I don't know if I would be flattered to be a king, or insulted by being called "The Monkey King".
He's also becoming king of a land that is divided and where incest isn't probably taboo.
Ok its officially, Discord is going to love this guy, oh boy if he let him borrow some of his chaos the things he will be able to do
Well, um, oops? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
well shit, I wonder how this is going to end.
Hmm. Iz a bit cliche, but still good.
I know the guy was just doing his job, but at this point his whole ‘getting to the council’ thing was starting to get annoying. He was somewhat like a North Korean tourist guide in that regard. All planned, no fun.
It's as if he's trying to get to the plot.
Can't wait for the next chapter
Yeah the epic entrance rarely ever works when you really need it
...well, you got one thing right... They certainly won't be forgetting that anytime soon.
Great chapter as always.
(pleasedont forget about rise of the crystal emperor, it has felt like 988888 years since you last updated. you must sacrifice your personal life to serve a random commentator his need of good stories at once!)
I suppose the epic entrance was good in theory, but the execution is somewhat lacking.
This is odd. I've definitely got your story favourited but i can'y see when you update...
Reminds me of the alien 'I will survive' song.
Found a few mistakes
“Greeting there young native, what brings you to headbutt my leg in the most unsuspecting way possible?”
*Greetings
Did those two saw these two guards from earlier too and get horny from that again?
*see
“Here, can you hold these for me for a second, I going to blow these old guys hair off with an entrance they will never forget."
*im
You have to start off on the right foot not trip on the left.
Perfect man
If our 'hero' is going to eventually create a Persian like empire, than I feel this is appropriate.
(P.S. This channel is simply win. )
Epic fail on the first impression.
Well that's certainly one way to make a first impression.
'Gilganash' great now all I can think of is that one Final Fantasy/MLP displaced fic...
For the love of all that is holy you are NOT helping in these thoughts.
7877045 What are you talking about? I know that fic, but what seems to be the connection.
7877056 You know, Gilgamesh-Gilganash, the way the main character is acting, granted Gilganash is someone else but still the connection there is pretty solid.
At least to me.
7877073 I just took Gilgamesh and warped it a bit for this story. Going to be using allot connections to real life history and epics in this story.
Silly human, that's not how you powerslide.
7877748 yea I kinda agree with you about the childishness although its mostly the main character that seems to be childish and doesn't seem like leadership material.
Well there gose his dignity.
Other wise I like the storys cover pic Jarl Balgruuf teached him well.
7874614 Holy shit, that should totally happen during his first meeting with the Equestrian royalty.
If i would ever made a entrance i would do with this song while holding an AK over my shoulder.
I think this song might've worked better.
7879053 Don't know how you made the relation to THIS with transformation when it was still good.
Also I don't even know what this song is about.
7865076 I was hoping that I wasn't the only one to think that.
I think I like Susasa and the guy/girl that said that, I mean whoever said that makes me think of another character I know and his personality.
I would say that he maybe believes everything and is going to keep trying to please the new king should that guy get a face and a name.
I'm still not sure what to think of them, but I think it is even less of problen as it was back then. I probably will still not enjoy seeing them in a similar situation in the future, but I guess there is worse stuff out there.
The only thing I'm always thinking about is how they tried to defend the incest thing, which is not a problem, but I remember that one comment that said something like this :
"Do what you want and don't listen to the others!", however as far as I remember you are not really comfortable with it yourself so much and only wanted to try something else, did I remembered that right? Sorry I only needed to say that, because I kept remembering how strange it was that that guy said you like it if I think you said the opposite.
I'm not trying to be mean, it was just kept bugging me, now that I have written it down it is not important anymore.
Not gona lie, I thought this was going to be the song
I got the power from Snap? I searched it up and listened to it as I read.
Edit: That was in quotes for some reason
7878235 Konrad agrees
7890050 Like a Boss!
Noice, don't usually see things with zebras.
You have my attention, ser.
Man this story gets better and better
will the next chapter will arrive soon?
7899828 Yarsss need moar.
It's looking good, have to admit I was skeptical. I even like the twins.
Huh, does that mean that Alex wasn't the only human to be sent here and crowned king? I guess that makes sense, considering the mixture of various types of architecture (likely from the previous kings).
Not a fetish, it's sex.
Nava I don't think you have this kind of money...
7948890
he meant incest