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this had a LOT of spelling errors and incorrect sentences, so much that I thought multiple times that maybe I should get off my lazy ass and offer to edit it
like I lost interest in reading this and just continued reading it so the next chapter would make sense, this was a terrible read with all the errors, and not even the spelling, the structuring of sentences makes it seem like someone else wrote this chapter, none of this seems like your previous writing
Nondayus, soly notp cron tri no pol.
Please continue
There are quite a few spelling errors and typos Id suggest you re read this
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If you can fix it then by all mean. I can give you the link to the doc file if you want.
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i might actually, i can't rebuild sentences but i can fix glaring mistakes
send the link whenever you feel like it
As long as they don't start eating anyone...
*nom*
Wait, where did all my felows suddenly go? They were just behind me.
And why are those Fungi suddenly munching?
Whatever you want to make yourself believe, Mystic.
Maybe, just maybe, you should think of a plan before you make a move?
...
Meh.
Good chapter!
I've got a feeling this miner-changeling might be important in the future.
Found a few typos:
Should be "Mystic's".
(There are serveral other instances you wrote her name lowercase. I recommend to re-read and check for this.)
Soemthing went wrong here.
Should be "tasked".
Ah, I'm glad I started reading this. I've had it on my list for a while, and ignored it for a long time after just reading the first chapter thinking it was just hie smut. But then, I started it again seeing it had reached such an impressive size.. and more, that it was being updated still. ( many of my favorates have long since died :_( ) so I started it again, and 36 hours later I'm currentrying and very pleased with your work. I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
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Thanks for liking it ^^
I always enjoy reading each chapter, mainly because the main character is basically me irl.
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I have absolutely no idea about what I was talking about 5 months ago, but thanks for the comment.
ven is zee next update! YOU MUST UPDATE IT SOON!! OR I SHALL ORDER A NUCLEAR STRIKE UPON YOU!!!!!
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Soon, an editor is working on the next chapter as we speak.
9158569 Actually, she can't. She is not of royal blood and is a foundling, so the changling princess has more legal claim to throne then she does, and said princess has very little legal right to the throne herself unless she marries Alexander. That is how it works, blood relation is everything in the line of succession, and almost every other countries would be forced, by their own laws, to deny recognizing Penelope as queen and deny recognizing Zebrica as sovereign nation until someone of royal blood takes the throne.
Don't believe me, look it up.
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Those are all rules and believes created by mortals, not by nature or the laws of the universe. So just like us, those rules are expandable.
9160550 I think I should also mention two more things.
One. Penelope is a dragon, a powerful creature that is commonly driven by greed. If she became the queen, other nations would declare war on Zebrica under the claim of a crusade to oust a future tyrant before she becomes too powerful to stop, and most of the other nations would be hard pressed to argue otherwise because of the natural tendencies of her species.
Two. In real life, love is the least important thing in royal marriages when the royalty has actual political power, convenience is king in this mater and love is but a happy coincidence if it is found. Divinity: Dragon Commander does a decent job in demonstrating this, only one of the four princesses that get to you (the fifth one, a princess from the Imps, dies in a game of "hide and seek the lit fuse.") truly cares if there is mutual love in the marriage while the other three (and their race's ambassadors) focus more on the political gain you can get if you marry them. Besides, just having a queen would be a great convenience to Alexander in of itself, as he could pass some of his responsibilities to her and spend more time being lazy with Penelope.
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Politics, the sources of all evils. Also I am not sure if I...or rather anyone could see someone like Alexander having a queen, and even stranger a baby. Judging by his character.
9162154 True that, but it should at least be brought forward by someone. Perhaps have Celestia and Luna attempt to use it to try to get some control over him, or maybe make it the reason why he wants to attempt world conquest. After all, other nations can't force their rules and opinions on him if they don't exist .
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Alexander doesn't need to declare war on other nations to stop them from influenceing him. He will just confuse them so much that they will give up.
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Tell that Alexander, I think he would automatically agree.
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Will Alexander be in the next chapter? It would be dissapponting to wait almost 3 months only for a chapter without him.
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Well I have a couple of chapters already ready which only need proofreading,
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Do you have people to proofread for you? Or are you doing it yourself?
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Both.