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This is a good chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next with the changeling.
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Ok
Remove ‘the’.
That is a statement, not a question.
Feels like the first comma should be removed.
‘‘good first impression’’
it's
Missing comma before and after ‘though’.
Should that last part be ‘‘is there’’ ?
‘‘something of the like’’
ability
Remove ‘in’.
Comma should be moved from after to before ‘just’.
Awesome as always!
I don't know if anyone have said it so I will: I like the reference to Palmyra.
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What reference?
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Isn't the queen's name a reference to it?
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Well yes. The ancient city of Palmyra.
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Yeah, I meant that. I like that reference, just I decided to compliment it now.
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I do try to sneak it a lot of references into this story. Like Cyrus for example, which is obviously a nod to Cyrus the great of Persia.