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Thanks for the update!!
I really want to see him kill the queen and implement the changelings into his kingdom
Its cool dude, we can wait, and things are starting to get interesting.
Ok everyone raise your wings, hoofs, claws, tentacles or hands. How many of you wish for this psyco bitch of a changeling queen, to have a change of heart once she detect the human love and became as sweet as honey later on?
Bonus if she develop some minor puppy love too
Oh great, another idiot queen. At least the princess seems to be intelligent.
It seems like the previous queen was quite benevolent if the current one is such that her own subjects are escaping by the droves.
Ah well, more shenanigans will ensue soon! Makes me really look forward to Alex meeting the queen
Paranoid and mad Queen with decent and caring daughter? Nevermind my previous alarms, Alex don't need to fight them, but to help them with accelerated succesion of the throne. And this will be easy, as hive is already in state of critical unhappiness, as it looks.
And what kind of powerful king of empire he would be without any puppet rulers under him.
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I want to see him fall down a hole and onto the queen
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XD yeah that would be how he met or killed her
Holy shit, what's with these quick updates
AH HA I FOUND AN ERROR I'M BETTER THAN Veo Skride, Samellan, pahnazd.
oh my god, as if she couldn't get any cuter. BOOP HER
Sooo... Chrysalis is british?
Ohh shitt I can't wait for Alex to call Chrysalis swiss cheese or something.
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For one I am in an empire building mood which is why you see so many updates for this story, and second, no this is NOT chrysalis.
King Monkey x Princess Changeling ........ now THAT is a romance i want to see!
i hope the princess isnt too young, otherwise this might get weird
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nani?
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Chrysalis' hive has a blue-green/dark turquoise color scheme. This hive is orange.
I have the feeling your using 'convenience' a bit too much: The Zebra's have the ancient relic needed to get brownie points with the Gazelles, the Changelings are on the verge of revolt, Alex gets a baby dragon, Alex figured out the weak spot of the Changeling, Alex seems to have no bureaucratic issues whatsoever running a city,..
Even the battle against the minotaurs was basically handing Alex the victory. Do try to make Alex earn his victories from time to time.
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I get your point as well, in my opinion a 'normal' person would still be internally screaming about the fact that there in a new world, that's still barbaric and undeveloped. Not to mention that you must lead a destabilised nation, I get that he isn't your normal person and I Greatly enjoy that, main reason I like this story. But the monkey king magic stuff helps with the mental and physical I think, that and he seems to be a history nut, it gives him an edge.
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and having some random dude shout ot into the dining hall
*out
Can u add translation to the German words? Btw awesome story, keep it up!
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well I can't read
It's time to go Total War: Warhammer 2. Release the war hydras.
In all honesty though, if this world takes a Warhammer type of theme, it would be really cool.
In regards to the chapter feeling slow, I would suggest just cutting back slightly on random mental dialogue. Not entirely as it is a quirk of the MC, but toning it down a little will help.
Someone has been playing TWW2
Or, you know, simply being logical
So, Penelope being cute, our human being random and a new future princess for his empire. Good enough for me
This is a cool story an can't wait for more!
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i could kiss You Beautiful Bastard for this story i just found it more please
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Well it says in the description, "Wits, antics and stupid luck"
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That's what google trans is for =P
Also giving the story a character from a completely different country besides you typical english speaking countries add a little bit of charm in my opinion.
I remember a story where the main character was mexican, every chapter had some spanish sentences or words thrown in by either the characters thoughts or speech. A nice little break from your usual american, australian or british main character.
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Never have played that game, just saw it on youtube and what not. I am not even that familiar with the franchise. I am a little bit more educated though with Warhammer 40K. The setting that makes british peoples so METAL.
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because liberty and justice where so 2004. This year its all about power, superiority and cheese, lots and lots of cheese...the German kind of course.
Und Brezeln.
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Wait... Why? Honestly, why? It's an awesome franchise. Get Rome 2 the next time it's on promotion on steam and be happy. You won't regret it, I can assure you.
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I meant Warhammer not whole series.
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Oh, makes sense. It's good, although they did make concessions in the name of gameplay that go against the realism of previous games, such as all ranks of a gunpowder armed unit firing, no matter how many there are. But you can have monsters and flying units, which is a big plus. Also, the battle AI is considerably better. Not enough to challenge a veteran, but just so that you need to actually use some tactics to win, if not with direct superiority.
Also, dinosaurs!
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Huh...must have missed that part.
I hope that shorter chapters like this are the new norm I hate it when a chapter is huge and takes forever to finish
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more please of this story
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Хуя попаданца ёбануло!
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its not even in English so i care not
NO.
Also:
-German writers ramble. A lot.
-They use a lot of meta. Meta all the time.
Just establishing stereotypes... intentionally.
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I can't read that, but it looks cool.
Her Hive will fall to the same faults the Galactic Empire did: it was too rigid and inflexible to changing times and circumstance. If she could just find herself more adaptable, and gave herself better p.r, she wouldn't be assassinated, with her much better daughter taking the throne.
WAIT
so you don't have a deep web of spies in the fractured government of the zebras?
So you executed your best assassins? Are you having mental deficiencies? If your brain full of holes?
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This queen is an idiot. I hate her from this alone. She is the worthless slug who can't even be evil right.
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Well now that you mentioned it, she does seem dumb, but its mostly because of her increasing paranoia and madness all thanks to a certain statue,
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Oo my god it is a Russian changeling
What an arrogant queen.
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i know right