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yay, new chapter
I hope Mystic survives.
........ hes gonna eat it like a omelet isn't he?
so, product of Mystic labor is an egg...
is she secretly a bird of reptile?
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That or Penelope will become a sister.
Now for some (potential) errors:
kill
overwhelm
it
hole
mighty
were
it
interested
too
lay
huh, neat
Complete dues ex machina at the end was kinda annoying. Though I think this is my favourite chapter for the fact that shit actually got done. For once, there was no Alex going on a tangent and taking up 4-6k words with it, so something important actually got done! For once in 213k words I've finally been 99% satisfied with a chapter in this story.
Awesome. I wonder what will become of the egg?
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Be my editor.
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Its what's inside the egg which will turn up a lot of questions...trust me.
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So I did good then.
the way the ling says (not to be offensive or anything) kinda makes it seem like he is a beta cuck
http://www.crunchyroll.com/the-master-of-ragnarok-blesser-of-einherjar/episode-1-the-oath-of-the-chalice-774917
seem familiar?
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I don't know.
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just the story is all, a modern kid is in fantasy land, a modern kid has some device on him that gives him the knowledge that will help him rule his fantasy people, a modern kid is the king of a people
and just in case it comes off this way, I'm not saying it's a copy paste, i'm just amused by the similarities
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The link just sends you to crunchyroll.
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strange, well at the vest least you can read the link, it says The Master of Ragnarok & Blesser of Einherjar
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must be an Anime about a teen with an unnatural hair color and really wide hair...oh and a harem. You know, typical anime stuff.
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his hair was actually black but he did have a harem, it was also shit, with the whole (the protagonist can do no wrong, he is a perfect being and anything that seems evil always turns out to actually be a good deed in disguise) you know, the really shit things a lot of writers do in their anime.
but that reminds me, what has Alex done that could be considered bad? what mistakes has he made?
I mean if he hasn't managed to make any mistakes you can at least say you went with realism in how he taught his army the phalanx formation, they didn't just learn it overnight, he also doesn't have a perfect record where none of his soldiers died because it would be a stain on his image, Alex HAS lost soldiers and it had a very real effect on the story, which I like
stupid anime being nothing but a massive blow job to the protagonist
Is that a phoenix egg?
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Well Alex is meant to be a comedic character.
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i don't think this magical idol would turn in a phoenix egg, something that isn't that hard to acquire
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Maybe it has a connection with the parasprite on the cover
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oh yeah, based on the timeline it could be the first parasprite in existence
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Could be, but I am trying something completely difference for once. Something none of you are expecting. Though if the idea is meant with negative reception then I will obviously change it.
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looking forward to it
Mystic: "Are you implying I'm fat?!"
So, she is basically going in the direction which promised the most changelings, hoping to not meet any changelings?
If you really think that might work...
Rainbow would be proud of her, Twi would simply facehoof.
Let's think: What kind of changeling would need an queen-sized bedroom...
A queen, perhaps?
Indeed! That is an ability reseved for a certain other being!
Kiss him!
(That worked with the other changeling they had caught, right?)
At least we can be sure he isn't actually an disguised changeling...
Finally got around to read this chapter!
And now we are having more open questions than before...
In other words, just the usual madness.
Found a typo:
"our"
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Great comment. ^^
Explain all of this; Alex teleportation ring, and the idol egg! Now!
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Deus Ex Machina.
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You mean Alex ex machina
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I like that one. points at you
You are making big old Alex worried you know!