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poor girls, always being teased
Ah, the new chapter is up, I see. The one edited by me. You are quite welcome my friend. I hope that we can work together again.
(I can see why you don't make the zebras rhyme. That short one was pretty difficult.)
just as i was about to go to sleep i saw this got updated,. i tried to read it all i swear but the power of sleep won the game, oh woe is me!
also, does Penelope actually consume the cloth or does she tear it off, chew it, and spit it out?
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considering how often Alex goes off on tangents, you did well. you did miss a couple bits though
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I don't know to be honest. Even I as a author don't know all the happened that is Alexanders crazy world.
Isn't that an surprisingly close description of the world you stumbled upon?
He should have said "I decided to finally come out of the closed. Not that any of you would understand that..."
Sounds like a plan.
You must be new here...
Don't forget about N&N! They need love, too!
Good chapter; even if the title is kind of correct...
I mean, there is a battle going on and you are repeating the stuff from the last chapter.
Well, at least he goit a new 'ling for himself.
(But how old is she now?)Found two errors:
Decide for one of those two words and remove the other one.
In the end you wrote Susi excused herself and left. But she didn't she leave earlier already? Did you mean Palmyria here?
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Always love your comments ^^.
Also I don't know. I should check that if I have the time.
.........Ugh, I'm sorry but this story is progressively going down hill for me the "zany craziness" has started to just wear on my nerves the overall story is great but the protagonist has finally made this story irredeemable in my eyes, this could have been so much better, I may come back around to this at some point but at the moment I'm annoyed
(And this is just one of a number of quotes I could have posted abundantly irritating wouldn't you say?)