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8848388 I know the Minotaurs would not go around spreading the word the were taken out by a previously fractured nation but that is in a way a large scale battle that happened an thus even if the victor or defeated would not spread the word it get around cause ya also said the capital is a major trading hub thus many spices pass through so they'd garented hear rumors from the citizens bout the Minotaur's defeat cause this is a previously fractured nation that was threatened from inside an out so a victory aginst the Minotaurs would be something to very much remember an talk bout for awhile an with the many spices going through some are bound to have herd said rumors an then go to equestria for whatever reason vacation or family whatever the reason word is bound to get around one way or another that's just the way battles are known to people far disconnected so to say from the victors or defeated. Also ya said something in one of the last few chaps right now bout there being a bridge or whatever that connects zebrica to southern equestria.
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Their is no bridge. That bridge goes east, towards this worlds version of asia.
8849965 Ah must have miss read then
And the library is a little bit safer, too.
(Except if the library is a wooden/crystal tree, but that is another story...)
When was the last time someone asked a question like this and it actually was that easy?
The moment anyone asks this question it will never be easy...
Is it possible for this "reinforcements" to be actually disguised, queen-loyal changelings?
Good chapter!
I'm curious how the battle will continue.
Found a typo:
Should be "quiet".
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Hmm, the level of comments are slowing down? Are most of my readers already burned out by this?
...merd.
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Yeah, the number of comments this time was pretty low.
Not sure why. Maybe not enough Alexander spacing out?
Additionally, I didn't find any perfect scenes where I could add snarky lines this time.
So I just used second-best scenes. You probably noticed...
i'm not burned out just been rereading several stories and other things
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Well, we're right in the middle of a war a. Like exactly in the middle. Your readers are waiting with bated breath to see what happens next.
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Well three peoples who are saying that they are not burned out obviously doesn't speak for the majority of readers that don't comment.
I was just waiting for a few chapters to appear before I started reading it again I swear I'm not burned out. I'm still loving this story and can't wait to see what happens to the infiltration team. Hopefully something that will make Mystic pull the stick out her ass, but that might take an act of god to pull off.
So, the main character is absolutely obnoxious and at times i really want to hit him, but the interactones with the side characters are good and the world building is great. Really liekd it so far.
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I an only speak for myself, but I am not burned out. I just have noting to comment on rigt now. In the middle of an arc that is mainly fighting there is simply not much productive I can add. Still like the story and am waiting for an update tho.
will Nav ever come close to death and really serious himself up? like still be himself but see the world a lot more realistically? just asking btw
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Nava is in the other story. This is Alex place.
892654my bad, but same question for Alex
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Thought you like to know that when someone is using a narrator program on their phone or computer the narrator will say each of the period over and over again there are better ways to do this separating a line then putting periods down like no tomorrow the reason why I bring this up is because it's annoying to stop your game or stop what you're doing to select the next line even if it's a short sentence I don't know how many chapters you put this in but make sure in future projects you should think of the people who use narrator to listen to the stories.