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Is the time all over the place in this story?
8805289
What do you mean?
8805468
It start with the doe complaining about the armour the put her own, and the plan about to start, then the preparation on how they were going to attack the hive, and then it finish with say doe wishing to participated, and they put an armour on her so she can help
8805931
Huh? I don't remember it like that.
8805970
So you start it with the end of the story, then cut to the start of it, and finish with the middle of the story…all that by accident?
8805989
Oh wait I see the problem now. You mist be confusing Mystic over Little steppes. Because at the beginning of the story is actually mystic, while at the last part it is Little steppes joining the Zebras.
8806015
Oh…so Mystic is now on the squad that is going to infiltrate while Little is going to be part of the army that act as a distraction.
Also, you know I can't help but ask…they ARE still inside a cave right? Caves are know to don't have the best of ventilation. Why not drop smoke bombs or sleeping gas into the hive, and knock as many changelings as you can without casualties? That is how the bee keepers collect the honey from their hives.
And if they used their magic to block the smoke, that works too. Let them burn out their energy and transform this into a battle of time.
8806030
Well their main source of their magic is within the hive. So being right next to their home pretty much give them a huge magic pool advantage. Also you forgot the possibility of them neutralizing the gas with their magic as well instead of blocking it.
Not sure if I made it clear, but Magic is a territory not particularly well practice by the Zebras other then religious rituals and their alchemy. Furthermore they have no knowledge about changelings biology or magic. So just dumping gas into a cave system could also backfire. Plus flooding and underground space right under a big city also seem somewhat unethical too.
Gas is gas and can easily slip through a few tiny cracks and release itself back into the outside world.
8806130
Oh right, and sounds could create the entire place to crumble, and with the city.
Maybe, but they currently have the high ground, right?
He would probably say something like "If I don't know what I'm doing my enymies won't be able to know either."
Good chapter!
I can't wait to see how the battle goes. (It will start in the next chapter, right?)
And I still have a question: What are N&N currently doing?
Mating?8813221
How lewd of you. Thinking about mating when a large number of Zebras and changelings are going to be fighting for their lives soon.
8812692
In that case someone could just write clop scenes for you, in case you ever want/plan to implement such. I certainly would volunteer if you ever want to add a bit of smut to this sexy story~
8814662
How lewd of you.
8814804
It's what I do as a clop writer.
8814837
Well I can just do the pic or sketch, and you write a story around it.
IF ever...
I still strongly believe that character like Alexander and sex, it like mixing sugar with salt.
Doing it with all the background characters is fine though, just look at the two Zebra siblings.
8814908
I can agree with that. Honestly I imagine trying to write a clop scene with Alex himself could be rather...weird. Not sure if it is the good or the bad kind of weird here either. He would monologue while the mare would wait for him to mount her and so on. He would talk about completely unrelated things, procrestinating it, and probably talk about unrelated things even during the act. It is I imagine a really difficult character to write clop with. But the other characters seem quite manageable. The twins with their trusting relationship, or the changeling with Dahla and her seductive and understanding personality.
8813759
I learned from the best!
I wish it really was like that. Ignoring my Bachelor work and it would ignore me back. Sadly I need to work on it, ugh...
8814942
Well see, if I want ot ever make a detailed sex scene of their...well sex. Lots of cream pies will ensue.
Also you forgot the possibility of him trolling the mare in question as well. Not giving her what she needs and just teasing her just for the sake of being a dick...quite literally.
Or some random shit could happened in the middle of it. Breaking a sexy sex scene...into something many would describe as "...what?".
8812692
I personally meant more for shipping purposes. Like, funny, entertaining, adorable stuff happening.
8815808
True. Trolling is possible. Many things are actually possible here. Someone could storm into the room. Or a mare could openly try to seduce him for power. Honestly, I wouldn't mind to see a gold digger fail at seducing him!
8816312
Because one he doesn't care, and two because their is only one true love he needs in his life, and that is cheese, lots and lots of cheese.
8828696
I dont have the link anymore.
8829028 Love seeing this story for it's something very different an I like it but I must ask when an will the king (I forget his name derp) have a metting with the princess for I'm sure they can see an May even be a little worried of how the zebra empire is slowly reforming an thus it'd make sense they want to talk to the leader of said empire also wouldn't they have herd of the menitars defeat for I'm sure they are allies of em an some how some way via spies in the menitar empire or just news in general catch wind of their defeat an seeing how the mentars are good fighters wouldn't it make em worry bout what said king plans to do when the empire is rebuilt an thus make em want a meeting with em for equestria is one of the main powers of the world via sheer numbers or maybe even just in general the only main power an thus make em be worried bout a new power joining the nations of powers stage.
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For one, Zebrica is quite far away from the continent where equestria is sitting on. And two, the Minotaur wont actively go around and tell everyone about their defeat of a previously fractured nation.
Its all about saving face in the end. Its all about lies and propaganda.
8816454 True, but as a non-immortal king, it his his duty to the people to produce a biological heir to the throne. Not doing so would most likely be interpreted as not caring in the slightest about the welfare of his subjects. This is even more true considering the state the nation was in before he got there.
Someone WILL say this to him eventually, if only to blackmail him into marrying their daughter for their political gain.
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He has Penelope. She can be an heir.