Great work

Sequel
-Yes?
-No?
-Maybe?

Foreboding

9888994
Thanks a bunch

9423835
Thanks. Everything’s already going ok. Hope you enjoyed

What a whole load of cheese.

Did you really wanted to write this chapter this way?

9889170
would it kill you to at least be a little more positive?

9889106
The ending wasn't so bad. I enjoyed the story.

9889351
Lying is not the way to go.

9889468
yeah, well guess what, there is such a thing as being TOO honest.

9889355 thanks a bunch dude! I couldn't finish reading your story cuz I was too busy at work... but you did the best work.

9890155
which one of my stories? Also, it's no big deal, everyone has lives and I can respect that

9890188 the magic Funtime one, I believe. Not sure, but yeah, I have loads of time on my hands until otherwise.

9890219
oh that one

9890328
Yeah.

Wait chrysalis is dead is that what happened?

It was a OK ending did they really have to kill Chrysalis couldn't they like purify he into a good Queen and have her join the herd. I just don't see why she has to die.

I'm already lost, is Darren human or stallion?

9892517
From what I can tell he's still human, his skin's just multicolored now