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MoJoK20X


I'm male, and autistic, just so you know. I've been looking for a career for years till I came here. Hugs to those I love, and the trustworthy friends I make here someday.

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what the fuck's with all the thumbs down, come on now.

7561045 I know. One of my other stories have about 4 thumbs down over about 3 thumbs up.

7561309 it isn't even a bad story, so why are they so negative, when there's only one chapter up. i really dont get the haters or disliker's sometimes

7561667 they would want something that sells out. I just treat things like they're video games: sold only for the enjoyment. People these days...

7561685 that's what i do with my own stories to, granted i havent recieved to many negative comments yet over at FanFiction, but still....

7561694 oh ok. Well it'll be fine. I just gotta learn my way around.

Now are the Dazzlings going to appear? If so, then could you please make sure Adagio is on top?

7562448 they might. Just give it time. No worry.

I've been waiting for a sequel quite some time now, and I am not disappointed.
I'd also like to offer you an additional OC for the story. Message me if you're interested.

Are u even close of finishing your first story?

Where are these factions coming from? I don't mind but they seem to be coming from the woodwork.

7803039 factions? Woodwork?
Sorry, I don't get these terms often.
Mind teaching me something like those so I could get better?

7803080
Faction: A collection of individuals who share similar ideals, motivations and loyalty.
Out of the woodwork: A term used to describe as if something appeared from nowhere. Similar to 'appeared from thin air'.
Not complaining or trying to be condescending. Just genuinely curious.

7803115 ok thanks.
And also, remember when I said that the clopfic is an adventure? Well, I thought that when it comes to adventure, battling (or banging) one character isn't much to go forward. When banging multiple characters, their satisfaction may lead to spilling the truth of something deeper or getting stuff.

7803115 it's like a multi-dimensional hentai with plot, so to speak.

Comment posted by Restrictblade deleted Jan 3rd, 2017

7839114 It's more than just banging horny mares...

7839721 I didn't mean any offense, if I did I apologize,

7839730 no. No offense taken at all. It's how I make a story in this case: imagining a movie.

A little stress relief is good for the body and soul, staying loose isn't too bad either, considering what's lying ahead.

Geodes? You mean THOSE geodes?! Yeah that's not good. Not to mention that she appeared in front of them Just to them that they were hers. Either shadow dancer is really cocky, (a different kind of cocky mind you, or she already has a contingency plan.

Out of anybody.. Or pony he could run into, it turns out to be Gilda. Either way, someone is walking away with a limp, I just hope mojo's training was enough to prepare him .
Hopefully this won't cut too much into the investigation.

Also wondering if there will be any other settings that don't take place in gea?

Well.. That got.. A tad dark for a second there. Jeez, they weren't kidding when they said griffons play rough..

Though when cornered there's no telling how dangerous someone could be, apparently this is gilda's first time seeing this.

Nice work

7852818 thanks. It took a little longer to work up the detail, but it's worth finishing on a Sunday.

Tell her. It's best that she knows.

Ugh. There's no nice way to say this (not that I'm inclined to sugarcoating): This just sucked.
Bad grammar, blatant disregard for Show, Don't Tell, and a shitty premise. A lot of typical fanfiction errors, but what really made me cringe was your "OC".
This isn't DeviantArt. Self-insert wish fulfillment isn't well liked here (outside of the Displaced circlejerks here anyway).

8150130
Look, this may not be the best story but you literally say NOTHING positive about ANY story. I dead serious. I've seen all of your comments and nothing about them are positive. We get it. Constructive criticism is important, but if you're gonna do nothing that point out anything that's bad and make fun of the stories you think is bad, you can go fuck yourself.

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