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PrinceLeonytus


Prince Leonytus of Lyons

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Reading your description...um, humans don't have a heat cycle...

Does not make sense.

As Leona tossed and turned while she tried to get some sleep,her dreams kept her up.

Her dreams are keeping her up, yet to dream, you must be asleep.

Makes no sense 10/10 would not fap again.

6914803 inb4 it's magic and I ain't gotta explain shit.

Right... I mean well I unpublish and edit it, or we can take the lazy man's route and say due to magic or something, magic causes heat cycles lol idk

Btw I'm also working on putting out an anthro version of this (hence the 'Humanized' part) for all those guys/gals into that stuff

This could use a cleanup pass or six. Concentrate on showing the reader things, rather than telling them. Especially unimportant details of other OCS not present in the story or really relevant to it.

Well that was magical

Looks good you deserve more recognition than you get my friend.

In the Heat of the Night (Humanized version)
You mean there's a non-humanized version?:pinkiegasp: Can you give a link?:twilightsheepish:

>>FluttershyXOXO thank you!

>>Frankie2 Yes...There is an anthro version I am currently working on. There will be very small changes to the Humanized version (mainly being the color of 'fur', words, proportions, etc.) and I'm working on how to go about the horse cock (like no real bulge, realistic bulge, or extreme bulge)

Hey,could you provide the source of the cover image please?

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