Princess Celestia hosted Equestria's 1000th Royal Gala, welcoming all kinds of species, Griffons, Dragons, all kinds. During this she met many interesting people, ponies, and other species, but lacked a date, a stallion to be with, and was looked down upon by the royals. A princess without a date? This was unusual.
... until she met him. One of few humans in existence, she fell in love with him quickly and asked him to stay in Equestria, rather than returning home beyond the Great Unknown. He didn't need her. He didn't need anyone, for that matter. It was only when she was ready to give her life to him did he realize that he wanted her.
He would come to need her, just as she needed him... and on the night of their year anniversary of being together, he was wrongly taken, his love and memories destroyed and was sent back to the human world without any hardships, so as he would have no want to stay in Equestria, even if he did return, somehow.
But how long can he keep himself apart from his memories of her? And why does her sister act the way she does?
Pacing, sir. Pacing.
Just from reading the summary, I feel like I'm about to read one of my own Fics - Come Back To Me. I could be wrong, it's just the summary.
But still...
7644453 Yeah, but trust me, I'm trying to keep my distance.
I've made this mistake before (trust me).
First off, please change the guy's name. Em and Emy sounds way too feminine. It also doesn't help that he was also referred to as Emma!
Okay you really need to change his name, because Emerald definitely isn't a name for a guy! It's a name for a girl and exclusively girls! I've looked it up! CHANGE HIS NAME!!!!!!
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SPOILERS:
His name is Emerald Sky. T'was the name that was given to him at birth. Sorry if it does sound femenine. T'wil only be for two more chapters, hold on!
7763567 I'm not gonna read that because I don't want the story to be spoiled but I just want to know if that's a reason you won't change his name.
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I will give him several names, Mr. Sky, or some will say Sir, and another which will be revealed later. But I do appreciate your concern, really. I won't change his name, per se, but I will give him several. I mean, Crystal is DEFINITELY not a guys name, but Zamiriac did it, so... yeah. I hope it doesn't bother you too much. :(
If this is going to have clop as it is in the sub-folder of Celestia x Human, Romance (with clop), then why is it rated Teen?
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Good point, I hadn't thought of that. Not sure why I did put that in there, thanks for the notice.
-Joss10
more?
It seems to switch to first person a few times.
8132568 Crap, I will fix that. Thank you for pointing that out.
This story is just coping the story "COME BACK TO ME" like no originality you took the same story and just changed a few things
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It's really not, me and Zamairiac already had that discussion. I had (have) an entire story plot written out (in my mind), and because I knew it was so similar to Come Back To Me, I wanted to specifically address how I am going to make it different to make it as unique as possible.
Please refrain from nonconstructive criticism, please, at least, before I've had a chance to do something wrong.
well got a like and fave from me. here is hoping for more.
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Yeah it may be a good idea to ensure you have solid pacing. I am noticing that it is off as well.
8530510
Not anymore!
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Haza
9258140
I feel like its still dead
Good to see a new chapter, looking forward to seeing what happens next. Hope things calm down enough you get a chance to do more writing.
Not going to lie, I forgot about this story.
8177125
Whats wrong with that? The author of that story hates it, and felt out of place for writing it. Whats the problem?
Update?