fffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu** why it was so good

7724020 It's not over as I said. The story will be picked up in another with a different title with a different goal in mind. This one's has already been met. Again, I rushed it too quickly. So Iam going to make sure that the sequel gets what it deserves.

Either way I look forward to more awesomeness.

Oh a sequel. Noice.

At least you got a sequel in the works. I await the next story

May the shadows keep you safe.

I don't mind at all cause the name says it all and with the mask off it won't work well with the title.

May the moon shine upon ur path

Looking forward to the sequel.

GRate story and hope to see a sequel soon!

7844850 "Yeeess do it, kiiilll them. MUhahaha!"

7845289 As far as the body and the horn go yes, but his hair is more straight and long, and his fur is a pale white. If I knew someone who could draw him i'd get him done. But I don't DX

7895306 they and a few other words are my entire life and that is what I go by...
No matter where I travel or when I find myself looking back, those words that I carry with me will last forever...

7982708 This was my first story. I know I made plenty of mistakes in it. That is why I am developing my skills in every story i create.

8092142 Clearly you don't understand what the character AND myself go through look up the term 'legally blind' and come back to me on that. It's people like you who offend most people with this disability with your tactless words.

What will be the name for the sequel if there will be one?

8124506 Well, that was my first story. So I like to think I have improved. If it makes you want to puke, then go to your closest toilet and hold on tight till you are finished.

8267453
yeah i agree but it still hurts my eyes and my brain!

Thank you for writing this story I quite enjoyed it even with the missed spelling it was good and I look forward to reading the next instalment.

this story looks like a good read I will add it to my read later bin!

If he is blind, how can he 'watch' anime and 'watch' mlp?

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Not fully blind, his sight is weakened.

That reminds me of
"I am legally blind"

So out of curiosity, are you ever going to continue this? While there were/are a few spelling errors the story was vary good and I'd like to see more of this.

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Sorry to say but i just can't get through this story with the grammer as it is. You should really get a editor to go through this story to make it look presentable or go over it again yourself. Your use of "would" is unnecessary to the extreme.

loved this story, my only real complaint is the grammar but it was so good i forget the grammar the moment I pass any errors. I love stories with Luna as she is best pony, I also really enjoy darker stories and while this one isn't as dark as I normally like, it still hits the mark. interesting choice on powers, personally I would have chose something more creative than one of the basic elementals but basics are easier to work with so I get that. in case you might ask of an example of creative powers- "one I'm personally fond of using it something I call blood forging" if you would like more details feel free to dm me. keep up the good work