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Well, I do hope that I can keep your interst captured! I am just using my experience in roleplay and the knowledge I possess. This is something I have been wanting to do for a long time. But the rules on this site seemed very strict. So I decided to wait out awhile before I would try again. Thankfuly this one came through. So I will be pushing out chapters as often as i can.
Also, second act is now available. Please enjoy.
Hmmm, I think I havet enough to push out one more chapter for tonight.
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I suggest rereading this chapter when you can. There are a lot of typos and switching of tenses in inappropriate places. If you'd like, I will help you out tomorrow.
I would appriciate it. But i will see what I can do for the time being.
Well I just learned something new today; scarey and scary are both technically spelt right, although scary is the more popular spelling.
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I take it back I.don't like it the ponys would react way more violently especially since he looks like a fucking demon
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Kinda hoping this stops in later chapters but you are using "would" way too much. It's repetitive and detracts from the story.