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Hey dude, looking good so far!
Just a friendly bit of advice though, watch out for combined paragraphs! There is a couple in here that are pretty huge and could be spaced out a little differently. To me, it is an eyesore and hard to get my place back when distracted from an amount of time and nicely spaced paragraphs are huge.
I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Nice story, and i do prefer a good mask myself as well. Since all a mask is that little disguise that you can put on for others and only for you to see what's under the mask.
Okay okay, back on track. I'm on the hunt for communists! I mean typos! Yeah.. Typos!
eh...Seems a bit edgy in the emo "I have suffered so much because reasons" kind of way. I'm gonna continue though. lot of good stories have rougher starts
I really enjoyed how detailed the description of the character was in this chapter.
Nothing better than listening to men bashing on drums and a screaming guitar when you're angry/sad.
You reminded me of my favorite saying...
7788392 You have so much of my love for finding that little truth. <3
I couldn't find the saying in a long time I missed it.
You can not see lightning hitting you as it is the speed of light.
8153888 The bottom tip of a lightning bolt traveling from a cloud to the ground does travel rather quickly, although it travels at much less than the speed of light.
lightning bolt=about 220,000 Miles Per Hour
Light=671 million (6.71×108) Miles Per Hour
does not mean he can realistically see it coming towards him, but this is not about realism, this is a fan made story about a show for 8 year old girls
i have so much in common but the eyes height and abusive stepdad and mom pushing religiom and martial arts
The serpentine Offering is a great song. Lol
Ok, weird beginning but not Bad, you have a very unusual way of describing events. But different doesn’t mean worse.