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More chapters please !!!
Quick question... If he is "legally blind" how can he see so well? Even if he was just very near sighted everything should be just a blob. But he sees almost normally?
7464621 Near sighted doesn't mean you can only see things close up it's actually the other way around you can see fine at a range but the closer someone gets to you the more blurry they become.
7678183 Near Sighted: unable to see things clearly unless they are relatively close to the eyes, owing to the focusing of rays of light by the eye at a point in front of the retina; myopic.
Is this past tense or present tense? I can't tell because of the would have smiled thing.
Good story idea but again why do people have their characters heart be stabbed or shot or in your case explode and they fuxking live for a few more moments son i dont know what world you come from but something even remotely damaging happens to your heart you die..immediately no couple seconds or last words its like a switch.click dead and his fucking heart exploded howd he live a couple more moments say some words and so how knows his heart blew up and funny how you glided over the fact that he told them that their world is fictional in his like they just accept that with no comment like the fuck but enough ass chewing other than those things its a good story with a good plot so far and adequate grammar and suxh good flow should of slowed down the bond between him and lu but good non the less.
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Since his heart exploded he would still have oxygenated blood in his head and the rest of his body, allowing him to feel the pain of his last moments
Just ignore the crazy Celestia and play along.
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Yes, but the brain needs a steady supply of blood otherwise the person's senses will dull. He felt it and continued to experience it until his death, but the pain would have just become more 'distant' along with his senses (but his heart exploded, I'm pretty sure that hurt like hell).
Sorry, but this is it for me. It’s not bad but is just not for me. I dislike his personality too much and the reaction of the ponies are not realistic at all.