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I fixed all the mistakes i could find. Think its all good. :P
much fun
Went to check my other chapters as well, all mistakes have been fixed.
I was a little bit. Mainly the moral choices part.
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I will do so if you'd like, just give me some time.
Let's see if I can push out another chapter or two tonight. :P
Why all the space between the end and the author's note? It isn't bad or anything, I'm just wondering.
7449342 Eh, its just how it happened is all XD
I know the drill...One (or both) of the princesses will think it is evil and will try and either destory it or imprison it in stone for a long while. I seen this more than once i know what will happen.
I realy eanna like the story. It was great but theb he met the wolf he created.... "ok calm down, it might recover" and now its kinda flinsy. Its mostly because so far this started as my cup of tea then it got cold and the flavor changed to something else i dont like this story,
Suddenly the narrator got a Scottish accent. Seriously go read the celly and luna portion with a Scottish accent funny as hell.
Dude your tenses (if that is even a word) were all over the place here. Maybe you should take a closer look at this chapter.
Hey this is a great fic and all, but I've come to notice many spelling errors in this chapter and the previous ones too. Make sure you get this stuff proof read. But other than that I'm really loving your story and will favorite this in a heartbeat.
8782728 My writing has improved greatly since this first story. as shown in my other work :P But I am glad you like it anyway despite me horrible writing in this one x3
Unlimited power!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!