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No!!! No more chapters
good job
Grate job so far this chapter was reather short but still all the enjoyable.
7547312 I realized it was short, but was experimenting with multiple long term character interactions. getting my bearings so to speak.
7547461 Like I said it was still enjoyable non the less.
Wow cool story bro keep it up
Im a bit torn. I like the story, however I wish anything at all actually happened in it. This story is absolutely chalk full of what the characters "would like to do", and yet nowhere do they actually "do" the action. Credit to the author, its a creative and good story, but the word "would" is used 774 times in the story. The word "would" technically implies that the action didn't actually happen. This story is full of this.
Again, I'm not saying that its a bad story at all, because I actually like the story and its characters, however I do have to point out that as written, most of the actions never happened as written.
This could be a top story on this site, and I highly urge the author to get an english speaking proof reader to fix these minor errors.
Votes are in. I will just rework everything in Gdocs. then unpublish them and republish the corrected ones
7642428 *shoves cupcakes into mouth* Ssssshh....there are people reading you know.