The Chosen One
I'm so sorry this had to happen Diddy; that I had to be the one to do this to you. I felt so bad about it, even though you were the one supposedly in the wrong. I never wanted to hurt you Diddy, really I didn't. The truth is I loved you more than I've ever loved anypony I've ever known-- even my own family is nothing compared to you.
Maybe I should care about the death of my Father, and I do, but he was less of a family than you ever were. You were kind, considerate, funny-- all the things I could wish for in somepony I cared for. I've had so many bad relationships in my past; it took you to be gone to realise that I had a good one right in front of my very eyes.
When you took over the Kingdom I and my sister had to run-- accompanied by Aunt Marelin. We had to escape so you and the Nightmare Monster couldn't hurt us anymore. And when I remember all of the corpses I'd seen as I ran through the gardens and the land surrounding Canterlot, it makes me physically sick. This wouldn't be what you'd have wanted-- I know you Diddy, and your Diary just proves who you really were. Now, you're stuck in stone and I go to see you every single say. I cry looking up at your still stature, your painful scowl, and I think about all of the happy times when we were together. Of all the ponies I miss, it's you I miss the most.
Even though I have lost many of my real friends (the list would be too long to write), and even though my brothers have also gone and left me for a better place now, I still care for you the most. Just you-- relieving your mistakes over and over in your head whilst you wait to be rescued from your torture.
The monster tricked you, I know she did. Sombra wasn't a help either. I blame them both for being your end; they're evil and deserve to be punished severely. Oh, but you wouldn't like that would you? Nopony should ever be trapped on the moon or in statue form-- I've already broken one of your earliest promises to yourself. If only I'd have paid more attention to everypony I would have seen that you were having problems and could have helped you with it. I was just too young-- I'll always be too young to be sensible.
Now it's what you say-- you told me the location of the Diary just before I and my sister acted upon your fate, though I did not want to hurt you as my kingdom would have me do. It took a while to find and I promise to show nopony else its words-- at least not until you yourself want it to be so. For now I am your chosen one, and in being so I must carry on your work and make sure this kingdom doesn't become the dull, boring, stressed place some would have it be.
My powers shall rejoice in ponies having fun. Even though I'm only powerful enough to control one part of day I'll make sure that I use that time in the right way. I promise that I shall do everything in my power to make your wishes come true-- Nothing can stop me. It's the only way I can make you live on next to me.
I'm so sorry Diddy.
Your chosen one, the sister you always hoped for,
Luna (a.k.a. Loony)
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Wow
AWESOME
Wow, that's an ending. Gotta be honest, I was hoping for detail on the whole Diddy taking over thing, but I suppose this works well for the story that was told.
And so a single manly tear was shed that day. But, as always, no fucks can be given by me. But if I could I would.
3407952 Yeah sorry about that. In order for Diddy to let go of his old life (which he really had to do since he was essentially destroying it) he had to let go of the Diary as well. The main story will be shown in The Legend of Alicorn once I get round to that part of the tale.
Nothing needs to be said. Nothing.
I...
I-I...
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Legit tears right now, Author. I await 'Journals' with tissues and cautious optimism.
I... I... Just...
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I liked the ending a lot, it's just I was expecting something from Celestia. Like it'd be one more chapter after this one about how Celestia feels. Anyways, good job this story was amazing.
I was actually hoping something from Celestia too. I really hoped we would get some insight from her too... xD
3410461>>3413029 I feel like I should explain something about my decision not to have Celestia say anything after the event. The main thing I have to say is, don't worry everything's done for a reason. After all that's happened to Diddy, Tia being the cause of it in some ways, and knowing how bitter they are to each other in the future it seemed in the best interest that she kept quiet about her feelings. Don't forget that Celestia is quite close to her family, and quite often chose others over Diddy, whereas Loony had an affection for him to the extent that she ignored all his faults (missing many of them because she was too young to understand). Don't worry, everything's done for a reason, and in this case I didn't feel it right to get Tia involved (in any way I'm quite proud of Celestia. Once upon a time she was desperate to read the Diary, but because she knew Diddy wouldn't have wanted it she chose to follow his wishes. I feel like it showed some kind of care on her part). Sorry, I shouldn't try to explain things
, I just felt I should explain my reasoning before moving onto Silas.
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I understand, it makes a lot more sense after hearing it like that. I really enjoyed this story and I eagerly await Silas.
Wait... so Luna was Discord's love interest. I'm confused.
This would make a bit more sense if it was Celestia writing.
3417390 'Relationships' can refer to things other than romance. Loony was mostly referring to the relationships with her family, especially Cedar, and her 'friends'. In this way she realised Diddy was the closest thing she had to a good family, and thus was sad when it was gone. Hope that helps
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3417569 Okay confusion gone now.
3475388 nono every story i read i feel no emotion. what is wrong with me
The feels
... The goddamn feels 
I was just kicked in the feels.
poor Discord
he only made what his friends created because he was lonely and also Celestia you fucking bitch one day you agree with Discord about the moon and stone being the worst prision and nopony ever deserved it but you did it nonetheless first with Diddy Lion and then with Loony
4306702 Om nom nom!
Hold on wait, doesn't Diddy mean....?
5480914 Doesn't Diddy mean what? Sorry, I have the dumb at the minute. Just had an exam and assignments so my brain's not working.
6160996 Glad to see your getting into it. Yes, Nox does need some heavy lessons to hit him. Guess we'll just have to see what the future holds, hmm?
Enjoy.