A girl so bad at writing she took to learning how to write at University. How'm I doing so far? Yeah, I know-- I'm working on it, I promise.
Rairty has long since been searching for that one pony who can sweep her off her feet and tell her that he loves her more than every other pony that he has ever met in his life. After her failure at finding her true Prince at the Gala she may have finally found that one pony who is exactly the way she had always dreamed him to be. Her one true love may still be out there somewhere.
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Alright, I haven't even read this yet, but I need to address paragraphs and indenting. This really seems like one huge wall of text.
Now to read...
EDIT: Didn't actually read, but skimmed through and everything seems pretty well-written. You really only need to fix formatting and that's it.
Sorry, now I'll read it for real.
This is actually a pretty difficult concept to pull off, at least for Rarity, who isn't at all narcissistic. (It's that whole Element of Generosity thing.) Good work.
Oooh, yes, time to read, then I'll critique it!
Yay. Another excellent fic by you, DreamWings.
You just need to work on the formatting a little.
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Now I feel like such a ninny. This is what I get for sleeping before it went out. It was all paragraphed in my other doc and I forgot it wouldn't be when I pasted it on here. Oops, will fix it, promise, 
1257313 It's ok.
Huh. Interesting one. Kind of makes up for the incredibly out-of-place romance of Rarity and Elusive in "On a Cross and Arrow", so thanks for that.
Now someone needs to do the same for Fluttershy and Butterscotch...
Awww!
I wanted Rarity to end up with Elusive.Well done!
Well, took me long enought to read this and comment on it. *patheticface*
So I see why you liked writing the ending. I kind of expected you to go with a *SOMEWHAT SPOILER* happy ever after romance. I'm somewhat disappointed it didn't end that way. Also, Rarity was really in character. It was great! I see though why this didn't work for you. There were a few moments that were like "Yeah, only in a romance novel, never real life" but that just enhanced it. So... great job!
My heart broke for Rarity. Did you mean to slip the little hint of Sweetie Belle considering him her "brother," or did it just come out that way? Either way, that was a marvelous clue as to what was going on. This was wonderful all the way around.