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XenoPony


Hi, name's XenoPony. I'm an avid pony writer and fan fiction author with a wide range of stories.

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It is the eve of the Summer Sun celebration, a tradition that has remained unchanged in Equestria for millennia. For Princess Luna it is one of the few things that goes exactly the same way it did before her exile, and she treats it with just as much respect as she once did. She also never had any doubts that her sister treated it the same way, even after a thousand years alone.

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Very good story. :derpytongue2:

Not half bad, Draconic and a great return to form.:twilightsmile: This is going in my Luna and Celestia bookshelves for sure.

This was a very sweet story, and I love how you portrayed the relationship between Celestia, Luna, and Discord. However, at one point it says "flies" where it should say "fillies". Other than that, the story is just beautiful! :twilightsmile:

7384819 Thanks for the observation:twilightsmile:. Should be fixed now.

7385759 You're welcome. For future references, do you think most writers might get upset if I point out mistakes like that?

7387073 I can't speak for everyone, but I don't think most people would get upset. Some typos slip through editing all the time, so I think most writers would appreciate the help. It's always better than upsetting people by jugging a whole story on one small mistake, especially if the rest of the work is good.

Saw this in group. Will check out later and let you know how it is

It's a very sweet story. I liked it

So many wonderful lines and you nailed what a conversation between the immortal beings would look like, simple and almost ordinary on the surface yet an ocean on the inside, reminiscences about very ancient past and old hurts and hope for renewal, a lot of things only hinted at and unspoken but understood immediately due to shared bond, past and wisdom of long-lived ones, without blatant angst-ridden-ness or drama many stories about these characters are so fond of, all handled very poignantly and sweetly :twilightsmile: A little gem of a story, I enjoyed it a lot more than hundreds of other takes on the Princesses so thanks for writing!

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