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Hi, name's XenoPony. I'm an avid pony writer and fan fiction author with a wide range of stories.

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Not since before her banishment to the moon has Princess Luna been in charge of a hearth's warming celebration. Safe to say, she's not over the moon at what's been done with it while she's been gone.

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Featured: 12/28/18

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Noice! Bit late for Christmas, but good nonetheless

"Dear sister, let me in at once!"

*Frozen vibe intensifies*

TDR

Nice

Cadence ships ponies like FedEx

"Well, it has been an awfully long time since I've seen you wash it. There could be a whole civilization in there nowadays for all I know," Celestia retorted, twiddling a hoof in the air.

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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/22660/luna-theres-a-sentient-race-inside-your-mane

Nice! I love the dynamic between the Royal Sisters.

Some things are universal.

She levitated out another set of orbs, looking over each of them in turn. "Harry Trotter, Mearvell, My Little Human?" She looked at her elder sister with a raised eyebrow.

"They're personal, I don't just go hanging them anywhere!" Celestia exclaimed, surging up to swipe them from Luna's magical grip.

Drumstruck, Luna responded. "While I respect the literary genre as much as the next mare, you do know one of those is for little colts and fillies right?"

That being... Harry Potter, yes. :insertevilgrin:

Luna, do you have any idea how much the very first official Star Trot ship ornament from Stallmark is worth these days? The demand at the time was grossly underestimated, and as a result the few that do come up for auction today sell for hundreds, sometimes thousands of bits! :trollestia:

Celestia shows remarkable self awareness in her treatment of Twilight.

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That's kind of arrogant, to just post it like that. "Congratulations, you've been reviewed"

And to do it publicly like that instead of in PM? The only reason to do that is to be seen doing it. Which you would only need to do if you don't actually have followers of your own who will already see it on your own page and come here to read it because of that.

You're basically congratulating the author on being used to drive traffic to your own blog.

Given Luna's excoriation of brand advertising in this fic, it's actually really ironic. :rainbowlaugh:

She levitated out another set of orbs, looking over each of them in turn. "Harry Trotter, Mearvell, My Little Human?" She looked at her elder sister with a raised eyebrow.

Bit of a nitpick. But I think "My Little Monkey" works better, as a Ponyfied version of My Little Pony (we're monkeys/apes, in the same way Ponies are horses). And I don't think "Harry Potter" needs to be Ponyfied, except for spelling it "Hairy". "Hairy Potter" is the kind of name you'd expect to see in Equestria.

I relate to this maby going back to the roots would have me despising chrismas a little less

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Damn you sure lived up to your name. You have my respect.

Luna huffed. "A hoof and shoulders shampoo collection, so nice to know what you think of my mane," she pouted, forelegs crossed.

https://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=lyrics+hair&&view=detail&mid=29AC092BA79F645ACE7529AC092BA79F645ACE75&&FORM=VDRVRV
Music starts about 40 seconds in

Celestia winced at her sister's increasing volume, lifting a wing to shield herself as her ears folded. "Actually that set was from Top Mares, I went an (and) picked it out myself."

Drumstruck (Dumbstruck), Luna responded. "While I respect the literary genre as much as the next mare, you do know one of those is for little colts and fillies right?"

I have to say i Like this story it's very detail in the middle and ending... in somewhat i also like the beginning :3 .... when i read this it said first paragraph "Dear sister, let me in at once!" OMG I laugh so hard...

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Monkeys aren't apes.

And they already have a Hairy Potter, that's Star Swirl the Bearded, creator of amniomorphic (clay shaping) spell.

Monkeys aren't apes.

Strictly speaking: Humans are apes, not monkeys. But I think "My Little Monkey" sounds better then "My Little Ape".

I thought it was good. It sounded like Christmas with my brother. That last part reminded me of the joke and Santa and the Angel.

Santa was having a bad day. It was two days till Christmas. Three reindeer were down with the flu, the elves were threatening to go on strike, the candy cane machine was on the fritz, and no one could locate the Nice List! Suddenly, there was a knock at the door. Santa opened it and there was a little angel with a decorated Christmas tree.
"Hello, Santa," said the angel in a cheerful voice. "Isn't it a wonderful day? I've brought you a Christmas tree! Where would you like me to stick it?"
And THAT is how the tradition of putting an angel at the top of the tree came to be.:ajsmug:

10009340 Oh my, I had no idea about this, it's so cool! Thanks for letting me know!:twilightsmile:

10009368
Not you too, lotus!! Dose no one share anymore?!?! >..>
Eh :/
You’re welcome :D
Great story 👍

10009536 I guess not, but I don't mind. Thanks!

A loud groan escaped her mouth as she pressed a hoof to her face. "Of all the things I thought would make me want to go back to the moon..." She glared daggers at Celestia. "This is not what I had in mind."

This last line made me laugh hard, overall story gets a pinkie rating of :pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile:/5

Celestia's blush was ten times more evident than her sister's as she sank lower into her covers. "So what... Maybe I wouldn't mind if she took over and made me a slave or something for a little while."

Don't worry Sunbutt. Give Luna a chance to hang out with Twi some more and she'll see the appeal too.

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