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Yes, my avatar is looking OP, but it is merely a transfer character I have that seems OP, but not in the sense you are thinking. Think multiverse. And there are way stronger worlds out there.
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Honestly expected to see the "pshh... nothing personal kid" line get used.
I don't see why people dislike this but everyone/pony to themselves. I quite enjoy this story and will patiently wait for more.
7434422 My profile OC first by the haters of it. And then the initial two stories I probably had before this. It was a pretty failed experiment that spiral out of control. Now me and my co-author restarted it, this time to the setting of the theme we were going for. It kinda works, I guess.
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To give you some perspective, I haven't even read the first chapter, but the description alone had 3+ grammar errors that made me cringe. The actual story might not be bad, but the delivery has already ruined it for me.
By the grace of the golden throne this story is good
This story is great so far hope it will continue and not just die like so many other stories. Great work so far!
Is this a crossover with the video game Overlord?
7640307 No, just using the image but the title of Overlord is used as like the title of king in the story.
So edgy. This guy is so edgy, I bet he farts Three Days Grace, burps Green Day, and sleeps on a mattress of razor blades and shitty poetry.
Just keep pushing and she will eventually fall
I love the ant thing
7834332 We actually wrote out something for that reason. But it comes in later into the story. So for now, enjoy the battle and the sex that comes with it.
Here's what I can tell you, it won't be the same all over. You'll notice with the way we are writing as the chapters go on.
Why did your two stories fail?
7858352 To the fact that I and my buddy didn't keep to the main idea and basically was rehashing the show. Also to the fact that we had an interest to Fall of Equestria at the time and wanted to try something with it. But all together, we had no central plot to it. Just little arcs that sometimes didn't pan out that well or didn't even go that far. This story, it's just basically what if everyone had magic like unicorns and was medieval. Crouse I did want to try to have the main character literally take over everything and run the way he wants. But we are writing something like that but on Fanfiction and a story that isn't MLP...yet.
It's in the works.
It's classified.
Like that, he ditched his colloquial tail...
I may not agree with all of Sky's method but since this version of Equestria is more violent than the original it does make sense that he would try to end the conflict. Since it is like Europe during the Middle Ages and Germany during the 30 years war I can understand that one would do what they can to stop the chaos. This is an interesting story. Please continue it.
It seems that he is aiming for Celtica next after he deals with the idiots and their large raider army. I also have a feeling that things will get more difficult the more he starts to move south. I also wonder what is in those mountains that the arch mages talked about. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Nice call using their own foolish propaganda against them. Also I admire using vampires to create a extreme case of psychological warfare. The foolish 'army' will definitely have sleepless nights. Great story!
I love this and can't wait for updates.
Another good one I see. His libido is as endless as his name.
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If he does fall than his kingdom falls into ruin. His territory will fall apart just like Alexander the Great and everyone will be forced into the same pattern of war all over again. As I said before I don't like all of his tactics but I do respect his ambition to reach his overall goal.
This is the first actual lost that Sky has faced as the Overlord. It is wise for him to acknowledge that he was defeated and to save as many of his men as possible. Also to turn his defeat into later victories by gaining such a new and powerful ally is commendable. Great story. KEEP WRITING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A challenge. Very interesting. I approve. Keep up the good work!
The Overlord faces a true challenge now that he faces competent leaders. This campaign will be tougher than he originally thought it would be. I wonder how he will defeat those six leaders of Belgica. Also how about in Carthaginensis you use armies like the ones the city of Carthage had minus the elephants. Carthage had great naval power but relied on forming large numbers of mercenary companies into huge armies to fight abroad while most of their best trained troops in the true army protected the actual homeland. Also have you considered forming armies based on ancient civilizations like Greek, Persian or Roman. Some of their tactics and military are still admired even to this day. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Will this story have any characters based off of the Ginyu Force from Dragon Ball Z?
is he or she a good/bad guy/girl?
Honestly, grammar is still a bit weird but this is a major improvement from the start. I actually understand what's happening right now
How does she know he could take them down easily? Simply bypassing their defenses is not enough proof that he’s stronger, smart maybe though not strong.
How dark will this story be? It won't be as bad as Dairies of a Madman, will it? I'm not going to read it, if that's the case.
Mate, the map image doesn't work.
This is just pure Power Fantasy distilled into word form.
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Oooh, karmic retribution! And he gets brainwashed like he brainwashed stronghill and the others? That would be a fitting end for someone like him.
Why didn't you respond to my comment?
...you have no idea
What peace, the realm has been in a constant state of war for centuries
Again, what peace ?
They have a lot of material to work with then
Not a bad start.
The part with the ants was funny, and halberd pony got served.
Ah the old I got pregnant with a random stallion prank classic.
And so they went to war.
Not bad.
Ah finally a fire shooting salamander.
Dancing choker.
So Applejack wanted the D.
From the makers of Azarath and Metrion, comes Zinthos and since it comes in blue it goes with everything.
Bravo! Oncore! Magnifico!
Are they flirting ?
Just 'displeasure" huh ?
Map doesn't work.
The map doesn’t work
If you slam your head against a wall
There is only two absolute outcomes the wall will break or your head will