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Primus
Yes, my avatar is looking OP, but it is merely a transfer character I have that seems OP, but not in the sense you are thinking. Think multiverse. And there are way stronger worlds out there.
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Not sure why this is being disliked, doesn't seem like that bad of a story, seems a tad rushed but other than that and any minor grammatical errors seems okay to me
This story isn't half bad in my opinion, a little rushed but good none the less. I like it enough to read again, so until the next update.
2885453
They think that a lover that has connections to the Wonderbolts is a bad paring to Rainbow. The reason is pretty obvious. Plus they see problems overseas coming over and problems inland is bad, maybe.
Another reason is probably my first story, yet that is holding together.
2885453 its being down voted because of the idiotic, "super original" faggy alicorn oc. i voted down because of it. whenever i see a story about an alicorn oc i down vote it
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To each their own I suppose. I don't care really, I do it because I like to write these stories and being in my own fantasy land. Unlike some who do it for fame, I don't care about. I do this because I like this and the other author I'm writing with probably feels the same way.
So yes, there is a 'super original, faggy alicorn oc', but do I care no. I live my fantasy through Primus and have happiness where I could in this bleak outside world. Through him and myself I live. He started in a dream and now this and other sites so it can become permanent and the story is set in stone. That way it doesn't change.
So yeah downvote because of another story, see if I care. These stories are like by some and that's a bouns for me.
So as my last line,
FUCK YOU AND YOUR HATE
WHY CAN'T WE LOVE AND TOLERATE BECUSE WE HAVE AT LEAST A COMMON INTEREST?!
That is all.
2909678 Why so much hate against alicorns OC?
3076061
They see them as overpowered.
Judging from the sex and gore tag, I'll say STDs.
*mental note that i'll probably forget: lightning is OVERPOWERED*
More nuff said
Lightning, are you a god?
Silver shield: I don't know maybe but maybe not.
But you are the closest to a god
Silver shield: so are you, you made me. Or the idea.
I suppose so...
More plz
not bad but the flow of the diolge is jerky
not bad but over kill for the space on the strip club funny but it ruines the effect stick to 3 or 4 lines
Poor midnight
He noped the fuck outta there
More nuff said
Really hope Lighing fights armore so his ass can be kicked
That author note
Why is this disliked so much? This is a good fic.
4382888
My first story.
loved your raidio show
...cyndaquil?
Hm...kinda shame that this story has so low rating...
yada..." but its presented in a interesting and decently phased way. There are really not that many flaws in writhing, not that I'm a expert in anyway, form or function...
I mean sure, it has the almost ever-present "OC' is to strong/smart/popular...yada
So yea, shame bout the low rating and views...and yes, I suppose your first story might be a reason for it...seeing that there apparently are someone that lives on this site to down-vote all stories with OC's/alicorns...still judging a new story based on your last story is kinda...
You need to hav a better pacing. That is all, enjoying the story so far
Why so many dislikes? Freakin haters give the story a chance
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They just hated this story for me and the first story I made.
I suggest changing the description a bit. The one you have now is too short, lacks information on what the story is about. Keeping a air of mystery may be able pique the reader's curiosity, but many prefer to know about the story before spending time reading it.
Leave a thin outlining of the story, so that the reader would know what to expect. Try to make the description interesting, to grab the attention of the readers to actually click on the chapter.
tovarishch
товарищ
And does he train with Rainbow too?
Talion....from shadow of Mordor....
5256224 The game wasn't there when we made it.
His head works like a pachinko machine.
Don't wanna sound like a perv and all, but when the clop part is going to be featured? I'm currently reading chapter; Now it's More Fun and Ten Times More Funnier.
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It's in the chapter you're reading now.
5289981 thanks
oh and thanks for putting clop in the chapters were it's going to be featured.
5289988
Was planning on it, but never got to it.
5289989 ok, and nice OC
I am liking the story so far, but this chapter was very difficult to follow. It went very fast and at times seemed like a train wreak of information all at once. And I can't for the life of me stop hearing lighting with a Russian accent.
4802874 i think the second person narrative story confuses them.
5320521 ohhh I see
Deathstroke
I'm still catching up with this fic, and I fully intend to, but I'd like to say that individual chapters over 20k words can be a bit off putting to newcomers, and you have a few well over that.
I, personally, don't mind, because I have enough time to read them usually, but back when I didn't have as much time as I do now, they would often be a nuisance.
Nice XD
Ok this stories jus' got crazier even fer me to read it anymore! I sorry but I'm gunna stop it man, nothing personal jus' I don't get the references anymore and it's too much love and shipping fer ma head!
Please no one hate me I'm only quoting what Applejack said this chapter: what are thooooooooooose
soooo much to read and the one whit the element: avatar and i saw an Halo 3 refrens wake me when you need me
read time round 3-4h damn so much text make me dead and i love this have loads of laught at some moments
Only vodka
soo good and now to waiting for the next one