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3872269 Glad to hear! Also thanks for the favorite!

-Jake

Sorry to interrupt Jake, but i can't seem to find my tin of fudge. Any ideas? ~Dollars.

Nice job man I liked it.:pinkiesmile:

I quickly got to one knee and bowed my head, whispering a prayer to the Sisters. I thanked Celestia for the glorious day she gave us and thanked Luna for bringing the relief of the night. I also offered an apology for my forgetfulness, it was unlike me to forget to pray to them in the morning and evening. I prayed for their safety in these troubled times. I couldn’t let the rumors get to me, Celestia is still alive and with her sister. That’s all they were right? Just rumors, the sun still rises after all. How could ponies witness that every day and truly believe in her demise?

Faithful even after his "Goddess" is no more...I would love to see some human scientists exposing the princesses bullshit.

4030586 Some people take comfort in different things, he comes from a strict family of warriors who also happen to worship the sisters. He's clinging to his beliefs in the most stressful time of his life to help him carry on. He's in denial and I'm working on a better explanation of his family for a later chapter.

-Jake

4030803 I'm just saying. It's still a great story.

4030815 Glad you like it, and don't worry I've got some stuff planned for him in Canterlot.

-Jake

That moment when people dislike it for no reason. . . :facehoof:

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I believe its for the anthro tag. But oh well, some people don't like it and that's fine.

-Jake

It's very good so far. A few mistakes in spelling here and there but I honestly am interested in where this fic will go. Keep up the good work, man.

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Thanks, I'm glad people are still interested in it in spite of the lack of recent activity! I'll try to keep an eye out for more spelling mistakes in the future.

-Jake

You know I practically found it funny how our protagonist woke up to find Patches "playing" with Byron and Daisy. I do wonder if our hero will have to deal with more scenes like that or if the deer are going to come with them.

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Well Patches is one of those people who lives life to the fullest and he'll probably [REDACTED]. Daisy and Bryon will not be coming with them to the nest but [DATA EXPUNGED].
-Jake

Ooooh I'm sorry, it looks like spoilers were in this comment and it had to be amended. We thank you for your patience!
-ONI

Aww, screw off ONI!
-Jake

Comment posted by JakeAndDollars deleted Mar 8th, 2015

Gotta say I love this story. Your portraitions of the fights are amazing! Keep up the great work.

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Thanks! I'm glad you like it! I'll try to have another chapter out in the next two weeks or so!

-Jake

Nice to see the deer again.

5764169 It is pretty nice to have them around again.

Somehow, I feel that if Daisy gets lucky with Alex, then Byron will get lucky with Patches.

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Let's be honest here, with Patches its not really lucky. He'll say yes pretty much any time someone asks.

-Jake

Well, it was a nice chapter. Still, kinda disappointing not reading about how Alex and Daisy boned, but the suspense of the rock scene was worth it.

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Hah! Yeah I really had to debate including a scene with them boning but decided on [REDACTED].

-Jake

SPOILER DETECTED. This post has been edited for OPSEC integrity, thank you for your cooperation. But, let's be honest. Even if you didn't cooperate, you couldn't stop us.

-ONI

Glad to see the guys take a breather by landing on a peaceful town.

5976737 It was a fun chapter to write! The next part is proving to be equally fun to write!

-Jake

I really enjoyed Lucky's character. She was a fun flirt and she definitely managed to bond with Alex. Also, didn't expected the guy to be a cuddler. As for your clop scene...it was hot and I enjoyed the pillow talk between Alex and Lucky. Hope to see those two interacting more, as they would make a cute couple.

5987327 Glad you liked the chapter! Lucky was definitely a fun character to write.

-Jake

The little moments between Lucky and Alex were sweet. I hope to see more of them.

5998841 Yeah I gotta admit that first paragraph still puts a smile on my face every time I read it.

-Jake

6015458 I'm not sure I follow.

-Jake

6015541 it's a saying sid the sloth made, and in my old job we used it to say when we thought bad things were going to take place at some point in the very near future. I.E. "We are going down Cavagna road." "Shit that's some bad juju man.

6015632 Ah! Alright... Yeah bad juju.

-Jake

Nice chapter. Patches' secret past and Alex's tournament flashback were entertaining to read.

6054967 Dang that did not take long at all! You're on point!

-Jake

Great chapter. Ghost and the newt seem to be interesting characters.

What a way to finish the chapter in such an exciting cliffhanger.

6479067 Hah, thanks. I feel like I'm turning into Dollars.

- Jake

Man I've reread this story so many times and I'm always crushed this cliffhanger is here. Please keep working on this amazing tale!

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