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Blood Drop, or just Drop as many ponies know her, has always been different. She is an alicorn, but she's shunned for it. what makes it worse, is that she's a blank flank. But a recent trip to the moongazer library has peeked Drop's intrest.
Hidden deep within the shelves is an old book. A book about Vampires.......
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Sorry it's a little short, guys, but it's just supposed to give you a little idea about why Drop's an Alicorn......
It's alright if the chapter is short as long as the content is legit and sufficient. I'm curious to see where this goes. Seems like there is promise for a well developed character so far.
thanks, i am glad you liked it!
A period got away from you. Also, this sentence could be compressed and still be as descriptive. I feel uncomfortable about the shadows being mentioned twice when we could have had our epic pony shoot out from the shadow in the first pass.
Also, what's the castle like? Big towers? Little ones? Low walls? High ones? A little exposition would be nice.
Frantically.
I don't think she reached into a gang of dudes wearing blue. Unless I'm wrong.
Deafening.
I gave you a like and a Gold Star.
I like stories about vampires, so I will be MONITORING YOUR STORY.
4486487 Thanks for checking my mistakes, I can be kind of hopless when it comes to stuff like that
I will be sure to go back and edit some stuff. Also, thanks for the like and star!
But about Fracture reaching into the crib, i am kind of confued on what you were talking about when you said gangs of dues wearing blue?
So is Luna "Drops" or is she going to become part of the story later. Also this sounds awful familiar to " Tangled" but I will like and fav just to see where this story is going. I'm. Very curious as to what will happen next. Until next chapter
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Oops! See, everyone makes mistakes; don't feel bad.
About the crips thing - the Crips are a gang, but I think you meant CRIBS.
it's alright, it was really night of you to help me out...and i changed the p to a b....
So far I think it is good. How soon till the next chapter comes out?
I must say that your concept is interesting. a bit of advice though, you need longer chapters so the pacing won't be so forced. You also need space between your paragraphs, the lack of it gives your story a "wall of text" feel. You also forgot to indent you second paragraph. Other than that I didn't notice any spelling errors so that's good. All in all it seems very interesting, I'm gonna keep a close eye on it myself. I really wanna see where this goes.
Ok that was definitly better, and I loved that part where drop though one of these days I will in refernce to biting that unicorn. I did notice two spelling errors decied and which, you'll need to fix those. Beyond that however this remains an interesting story and I look forward to more.
I just noticed that your story title is not capitalized, you should fix that too.
So a magic lock that opens with blood. That is cool I can't wait to see what is in that book.
aww wheres the next chapter
i wanna read it now! 
x3
Neat can't wait till the next one.
My god this is a GREAT story! There are some spelling mistakes here and there but I rather read the story then judge the spelling errors. Keep the story going and UPDATE as much as you can!
4504966 Ya, i know there are a few.....
I try to keep the errors to a minimum by using microsoft word as a spell checker, but I do miss a few when I go over the story before publishing it.
As for the next chapter, I think you guys are going to enjoy it.....
Keep up the good work.
Aside from a couple of errors here and there I am definitely enjoying this story so far!
Keep up the good work!
I was kinda sceptical about this story at first, but besides the one or two spelling errors, this is an amazing story. Looking forward for more.
I see that you have deleted my comments without even bothering to respond to them. I wonder....
heheheh, I feel like I'm reading repunzel. Great so far, I'll be reading this while I kill some Grineer.
Ooh, That's a new one. Sounds like it was a necromantic spell.
Aww, I caught up. Ah well, off to read the other things in my favorites. I will watch from the shadows
This is going to get very good....
4511641 I deleted your comments because they were rude and unnessisary. There was no reason for you to use language like that just because you disliked my story, and there were other ways you could have expressed the fact that you did not enjoy my writing without trying to crush my spirits.
I understand that you may not have liked the way I wrote it, and that's fine, but you didn't have to say it like that. you could have simply not have read anymore of it if that's how you felt, and no one would have gotten their feelings hurt.
As for every one else, thanks
I am glad you like it!
4520671 Sorry. I'm just sick of everyone treating Alicorns as gods.
sorry guys, the next chapter might be a while...i am uninspired at the moment
You have gotten my attention, please me if you DARE.
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And now vamp mode is enabled
I simply LOVE this story, if you could, I would like permission to make hard cover copies when you have completed the story.
4532739 some inspiration you say? My Roommate Is A Vampire by Dennis the Menace. That will give you all you need.
thank you for your encouraging words, Eclair! as for that hardcover, i don't think thats nessisary, but i appreciate the thought.
the next chapter should be out soon!
So awesome!
you gotta post some more soon, you just gotta!!!!!!!! 
It is deliciously dark 
Okay. That premise really isn't helping. Red and black alicorn with a blood drop cutie mark (what does the premise say about that by the way?). Oh, and deleted comments. Not looking good. Not looking good at all.
Post more, more
5557252 Also, said R&B OC is a Cadance reskin, or looks damn close. It's like... off-color Cadance with Fluttershy hair.
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I cannot unsee.
...Ouch...
This is going in the Painful bookshelf.
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ALL of y'all are too late, all of your comments are posted a long time after she abandoned her account. Atleast around 20 weeks after it happened.
6531169 And yet you're here, dragging us back.
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woah im going down memory lane here
6531169 You're too late, you just replied to a comment I made 12 weeks ago. Nicely done, hypocrite.
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Thank you for being randomly hostile, I needed someone to take a neutral comment and reply to it aggressively today.
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Whats up with most of the people I replied to being all negative 'bout it, I wont do it anymore. Jeez.
6531555 It's what I'm here for.
Have a nice day!
Edit: Sorry for being an asshole. It was uncalled for.
Novice but not completely atrocious.
This needs editing but otherwise seems fine. Drop has a decent personality unlike pretty much every single black and red alicorn oc stereotype out there.
MOAR!