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Interesting. Gonna check it out when I wake up.

I have a terrible feeling about this story. *Faved*

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Took the words right out of my mouth... *tracked*

I feel like a horrible person not only after reading this, but enjoying it, ...and wanting more. :twilightblush: Tracking for sure, excellent job.

This seems interesting, tracked.

Hmmm....there was a movie like this.....can't remember what it was called though......
*tracked*


Son, this is sick and you know it.
Also liked. :moustache:

I applaud the stallions/colts in this story for being upstanding. :moustache:

Cadence you awesome slut!

How long is she going to use Orion as her sex slave? Oh and this TOTALLY deserves the feature box! I :heart::heart::heart: it!!

Wow...this is getting pretty dark.:applejackunsure:

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Thanks for the feedback! I'm still pretty new at this. :pinkiesad2: How does one go about getting their work featured? :rainbowhuh:

It was night. Everypony in Orion's home was asleep, or so he thought. Twilight crept out of her bed, using her horn to dimly light her path.

She snuck into her brother's room, humming their special song. "Once I fill you with more air," Twilight whispered, "You'll be my bigger brother best friend forever!


ahhhhhh, dicks

*shakes hand*

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Thanks for the kind words. My goal is to make this dark, without becoming uncomfortable. More is coming soon.

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Thank you for all the great comments. :pinkiehappy: I love reading people's reactions to the story. :twilightsheepish: I also enjoy seeing what everyone's favorite lines are, :yay:

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Do yourself a favor, don't read chapter five. :pinkiesick:

pics, or it didn't happen.

paaaahhhleeeeze. I can do more than Orion.

HEUEHUEHUEHUEHEUHEUHEUEHUEHEUHEUEH

I have no idea how I found this......but for some sick reason I want to read more. Luna, help me.

Uh.....Yeah I'm not gonna say anything.

....I...I have no idea how to respond.

I give up. I still don't know how I got to this story or why, but I'm going to fave it. Just to see where it goes.

There are a few of mistakes, two double spaces, a few forgotten apostrophes and some full stops don't have spaces after them. Otherwise the story is quite good, I'll keep reading.

I already thought it's the story of Mi Amore Cadence who-never-get-laid.
Hoof of approval for the kitchen scene. Faved. :eeyup:

I'll be honest: I'll add this to my read later just to read out of amusement.

Chapter 5 is my favorite, keep it up.

"As the rays from Celestia's son crept over his windowsill[...]"

Celestia has a son?!

I'm hoping that bitch Cadence gets what's coming to her.

Soooooo....is this story going to end well?

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Thanks. I thought the chapter titles worked out nicely myself. :rainbowkiss:
Chapter 8 is up BTW.

Will she snap to her senses eventually??

Sheesh dude, I would love to read this story but then I have a strong aversion to explicitness. Could there be, perhaps, a less hardy version of this fic?

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I eventually plan on releasing a PG-13 version, with the sex scenes trimmed down.

Great story, but now I'm not sure if I should hate Cadence or feel bad for her... :applejackconfused:

Oops, mispelled Cadance... SORRY :derpyderp2:

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