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InTheSun


The NSFW stuff of someone who is far too careful.

Sep
14th
2012

MFW I got into the feature box · 3:56am Sep 14th, 2012

Getting into the feature box has been a long-time, long-time goal of mine, and not something I've been able to do with my SFW fics. So, I'm really, really, really excited over here. And of course, can't really brag to my friends about how people like the story I wrote about colorful horses having sex. So, I'm just being super-happy over here by myself.

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1091448 I agree with this weirdo here.

You write good (and well!), but cancelling stories constantly gives you a pretty bad stigma. :rainbowwild:

Stop cancelling things I'm reading!

I'm sorry, please don't hate me.:fluttercry:

607901

had plans that were more suited to an actually story than for clop. I was going to have to shoehorn in the sex scenes, and I didn't really want to do that.

Well why not just rewrite it with the clop being mostly off screen except where you yourself deem it both absolutely necessary, and where it's inclusion would feel natural?:trixieshiftright:
you can probably cut out like 90% of the clop by either only alluding to it or having a reaction take from Cadance/others like

"everything seemed to be normal, from the merchants plying their wares, the pair of unicorns in a heated make out session, the ponies just out enjoying the calm morning, to the foals heading off to... wait... OK they are still going at it, huh, anyway the foals are off to school..."

in other words make it (TVTropes warning) an Unusually Uninteresting Sight

607901 if your not finishing it through the story method at least put a finished tag on it so we know there won't be any continuation, and to answer your Question, the story was added to several specific clop groups, including hypnosis/mind control.

hope this answers your question.:twilightsmile:

607815

I'm actually really surprised at all the interest in it yesterday. Did someone post it on a blog somewhere?

I don't have any plans to finish it, actually. It's the second clop story I wrote, and I had plans that were more suited to an actually story than for clop. I was going to have to shoehorn in the sex scenes, and I didn't really want to do that. So, the answer to your question is never. Sorry! You can check out my other story, Monster Mares, which I am still working on and is honestly a vast improvement.

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