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ForgottenDreams
I bid you welcome traveler let this ancient storyteller do what he does best. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCcsS60n04i48UCZJ0lYPGsQ
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Nice work. Intens, passional Good job
7246417 thank you I try my best
Dunno, but I suppose you don't like the common comma or something?
Might want to get someone to look this over. While the base story is pretty good... the structure and execution isn't, to be honest.
I can no unread it stuck....halp.
Okay, accepting the idea that Hondo is lusting after his daughter cause he and his wife haven't done it in years, and the fact that Sweetie only just turned 18. My question is, why didn't he lust after Rarity? Rarity is prettty darn hot too.
7247855 Simple she doesn't live with them; and Sweetie Belle walked around the house half naked most of the time
7247863 That is a remarkably simple and effective expaination.
Well, I'm an idiot.
*menopause
You seriously need to revise your use of semi-colons. Did you even get an editor?
It's not bad, but it needs the help of an editor.
7250549 Maybe is coma is broken?
7285434 Wut?
7286188 His coma key is broken.
7247855 That would be a good read! Maybe as a sequel!