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Lunafan1k

Navy Vet working IT, I usually write about whatever inspires me.

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DanvilleBengal
DanvilleBengal #1 · May 22nd, 2016 · · ·
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When you first published it, I see that you used the spoiler tag to show what it is, but personally I would have hidden "Mr. Sparkle/Night Light" tag, or just used the "Other" tag in its place to make it a surprise that Twilight's getting down with her father.

But on second thought, it's not much of a surprise after all, especially if everyone else see that coming forward. Just an opinion. :twilightsmile:

Mr Ghostman
Mr Ghostman #3 · May 22nd, 2016 · · ·
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Nice to see some Twilight Sparkle/Night Light once in a while. Good work! :twilightsmile:

The Winter Soldier
The Winter Soldier #4 · May 22nd, 2016 · · ·
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She stuck a finger in her mouth and suckled it, getting it lice and wet

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... Pretty sure you meant "nice and wet".

... Not sure what I was expecting after that spoiler. Back to the chair.

Lunafan1k
Lunafan1k #5 · May 22nd, 2016 · · ·
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7237685 Thanks!


7238139 Well it IS a shoddy hotel room....

jayJay
jayJay #6 · May 28th, 2016 · · ·
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7238187
I only saw a few mistakes but other than that great f***ing clop fic m8

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