Big Mac has always had a love of the air and when he gets an invitation to the Festival of Flight he gets something unexpected. A great day of fun with Spitfire.
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Cute. That's all I have to say really.
7119748 Thank you that was my intention
That's me
7120347 Yes, yes it is
I kinda like this pairing you gave me
While this was an adorable story of Spitfire/Big Macintosh, there are things that need a bit of tweaking such as some of the grammar. Still though, you did a decent job on this.
7120355 Haha thanks just message me if you need any more ideas.
7120776 Well if you keep giving me gold like you have been you just might become my go to guy.
Always willing to give strange pairings a chance
i would have never thought of this pairing in a million years
7121324 I have http://www.fimfiction.net/user/jackplanet88 for the pairing itself. I just wrote the story
Are you a native english speaker?
7123365 Are asking if English is my native tongue? The answer is yes, but my written grammar isn't always perfect. However English is not the only language that I speak. I also know some: Japanese, Chinese, French, German, Spanish, Italian, Russian, and a little Latin. Though those tongues I don't practice very often so they aren't very strong
Why do you ask anyway?
7123409
As you have said yourself, your grammar seemed iffy, your vocabulary was poor with an occasional rare word that seemed out of place as if you used thesaurus to put it there. The grammatical structures you used were few and repetitive. Stuff like that. But then again I am not a native English speaker so my judgement in a question like this is rather meaningless.
7124486 What 'rare' word would you be referring to?
One that I think caught my attention in particular was exuberance. But I remeber that I had an other one that started with an "s" Cant seem to find it now though. But as I have told you my word is of little relevance in this topic.
7125638 If you don't know what exuberance means it is full of energy and excitement. As for the other word it was probably simultaneous which means done at the same time. If you weren't referring to their definitions I don't know what you are talking about. Also the only time I use a thesaurus is when I've forgotten how to spell a certain word. Though I do know the definition of said word.
7125700 Yex thank you but I can use thesaurus quite well. (Altough I prefer the oxford dictionary.) I have already looked that word up. And yes, if you are an native english speaker that is quite expected that you dont have to use dictionaries too often.
p.s. simultaneous was not the word I am reffering to. But I am not sure if that word even exist. I might remember incorrectly.
7125791 Kind of off topic but if you don't mind me asking. What is your native tongue? I like to talk to people from other countries to learn about them.
It is Hungarian
I am not sure what you know about it (I would assume nothing but you said you like languages so you might have heard about it.) And that is why I am not sure what to tell you about it. I could start with the obvious and tell you how hard it is But that is probably the one thing you would know about hungarian anyway so it feel kind of redundant.
Other than that what is there to say about a language? I don't know, you must learn it to have some first hand experience with it.
Hmm...
That might just gave me an idea.
Dont worry I dont want you to try and learn Hungarian. It is quite literally impossible. But I would really like to know how does it sound to a foreigner who cant understand a word from it. Well that is kind of a board question. So what if we made it into a game?
Here is one of my favourite Hungarian poem I would like to know, what you think, what this poem is about? Based purely on its sound.
Okay in order not to keep you completely in the dark, I'll tell you its title: Evening question.
I breached the 300 mark! you know what that means
THIS IS SPARTA
"YEUP!" <= My only complaint.
This was a fun read, but there were a few little errors that almost caused me to lose emersion. Little things like the thought bits being in past tense while the rest of the story is in present tense, a few misspelled words, and some punctuation hiccups. For the most part, this was a fun to read through. I kind of want to see a followup to this story now.
Oh God yeah I remember that that was pretty freaking awesome lol
kind of reminds me of a Sailor Moon transformation
This was a pretty nice story and it's always nice to see Big Mac actually having fun but also hanging out with Spitfire which she always needs a break as well as both of them are very hard workers and yet they kind of like each other and I enjoyed hanging out with each other this was a pretty nice story keep up the good work
Epic and I loved it