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New Canterlot


I can finally see...but not for long

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“One second, Dashie.” Fluttershy released her arms and crawled into the shirt, pulling down over them both.

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW -boom- Damnit there goes my Daw meter again!

Gotta say, I didn't expect Rainbow and Flutters to be active already. It'd be a good bet that their first time would be a story in of itself. That said, I'm a bit sorry that Rainbow Dash forgot about her shower. I felt that was a good opening to ask Fluttershy to join her. Oh well, that's just something you can consider in a future story.

An excellent follow up to one of my favorite FD fics! :yay:
Can't wait for more!! :rainbowwild:

Not bad. Quite a nice read and not to steamy and unrealistic. But a fair warning though. Futtershy sounds very represses in the urges and also sounds like Dash is bring her out of it so flutter might get dependant.

marvelous! you totally make the sex scene really detail and yet keeping the original characteristics of them. good work

Awwwww~! this was 1,000% ADORBS!!!:heart: :heart:

If you enjoyed thus far, I plan on writing more cutesy smexy one-shots in the future, so stay tuned!

I'll hold you to that, dear~ :raritywink::heart:

This is the stuff I love reading. I swear dude, everytime you add a new story, I know that whichever night I end up reading it will be a wonderful night.

Always genuinely happy to read your stuff.

Do you have a patreon/paypal?

7213977 There's always after the pizza, too. ;) :yay::heart::rainbowderp:

I wonder are you going to do Rarijack

Well this definitely made my friday night. And I accidentally put it in the wrong bookshelf the first time so don't get confused if it shows up. :twilightblush:

If you made it this far, please give yourself a pat on the back!

Yeah I'll need it since this is my first ClopFic.:twilightblush:
Not bad, I'll wait to read the RariJack one another time.

I want more so badly!!!

Dang Flutters! It's always the quiet ones...:rainbowkiss:

“D-Damn, Shy.” She whispered into Fluttershy’s ear. “Just a minute, ok?”
“I don’t wanna wait…” Fluttershy whined quietly, looking away with half her blushing face behind her hair.

The Flutterlust is strong with this one.

Both girls turned their heads, eyes wide in surprise and shock, voices gasping. Dash was the first to begin scrambling to get the shirt back off. “OH, SHI-”

BUSTED!! :rainbowlaugh:

Or maybe? :ajsmug:

I'm not a flutterdash shipper but, i kinda.. kinda like the ship because i'm a "appledash" shipper :rainbowlaugh: (sorry, haters gonna hate) but, still!! This story is good but.. i kinda, confuse when they have that sex moment :rainbowderp:, because i'm ony 15!! GODDAMN IT!! :pinkiecrazy:

can you see heaven before you die because you can see hell more than once but can you see heaven before ascending?

“Dashie… tastes… really yummy.” Shy muttered before looking up at her. “I… want more…”

That was really cute!
Thanks for the fic!

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