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Alex Warlorn


Just your average Brony who happened upon an idea that might actually turn out to be clever enough for guys to love.

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Adagio Dazzle locks herself in the bathroom, fills the tub to the brim, and gets into the tub. Sunset Shimmer has been away from Equestria for years, but didn't start thinking of it as home until she had friends. It's been centuries since Adagio and her sisters came to this world, they've had just each other.

UPDATE: MADE IT TO POPULAR STORIES!!
HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE PONY POV SERIES.

With help from Kendell2.

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Their story is actually a little sadder, according to their FIENDship is Magic issue. A thousand years have passed in Equestria and as far as I am aware, no one has made this fact known to them. In fact I'm surprised that so few people reference it (I know that the issue has its problems, but that bit was fanfic gold!).

Anyway, that's beside the point. This is actually one of the core aspects of the Dazzlings and most other beings in both fiction and real life. A certain longing for home.

Of course, the idea that they have lived out a thousand years in the Equestria Girls world is interesting too. It just been done a bit much.

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I consider they Fiendship is Magic issue non-canon.
The writers WANTED to do a story with Discord, but got told at the last minute that no, they couldn't. So the Sirens was a last minute substitution.

Here, the sirens have been on Earth for over a thousand years, helping along wars, persecutions, hate crimes, and surviving off the darker side of humanity.

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Dang, I would have loved a Discord story, and after his cameo in the Tirek issue too! Didn't have to be an origin story either, could have just done when he first came to Equestria and started messing with ponies for kicks.

Anyway, the Dazzlings origins in the comics does have some appeal. Though they were committing a crime and he had tried everything he could think of to stop them, Star Swirl did unilaterally banish them not just from Equestria but to a whole world entirely. No only that, he flung them into the future (WHERE HIS MAGIC IS LAW!:derpytongue2: Sorry, just felt I had to reference that) and probably most everyone they knew and loved is long dead and most everything else is gone or changed so much that it might as well be. They sheer shock and despair they would feel at this revelation would be astounding!

Oh my GOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!

*JonTron intensifies*

Excellent as always

Extremely well-detailed and written from her perspective! :twilightsmile:

7046015 Y'know what I'm wondering? Why's it always a thousand years?

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It's actually worse than that. Nightmare Moon, Discord, Sombra and Tirek all escaped their imprisonments (Chrysalis also escaped a thousand year sentence in the comics, but she decided to cut the potential headache and escape before the first year of the sentence was done), implying that they had intended the punishment to last forever (I believe that it was outright said for Discord). Of course, Celestia was counting on Nightmare Moon escaping, so that she could get her sister back.

On that note, Luna and Discord treated their sentences with mild annoyance. Understandable, as Luna is stated to have a long, possibly indefinite life span and Discord outright said that he is eons old. But Sombra and Tirek do not seem to have far so well. Sombra clearly lost much of his ability to reason and plan (acting more as a force of nature than as an antagonist) and it seems time was not so kind to Tirek because, let's face it, he was old. Magic seemed to restore his youth so long as he had it, but otherwise he was old, wrinkly and thin.

7054701 What I mean is: with a thousand years, that means that all these villains came at the royal sisters or Celestia in the same time frame. There was Discord, then less than a year later Sombra, then Luna turned into Nightmare Moon. We don't know if Tirek was before or after Nightmare Moon. Neither do we know if the Sirens were before or after Luna's defeat. It was a big fat quadruple whammy right towards Celestia. (The Sirens don't count cause' that was Starswirl.)

This was very well written :pinkiesmile:

She remembered when they first arrived. They just had to work a little magic, stir up a little chaos...and then point a finger at a 'witch.' The humans did the rest themselves. And never once was Adagio or her sisters suspected.

I can actually picture them in colonial attire and doing these things :pinkiecrazy:

And without having to worry about changes in water pressure like land ponies, going deeper or higher.

Even fish have this problem.

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True. But Sirens are a lot tougher in that regard than an earth pony or human would be.

A wonderful moment of Adagio alone with all the regret she doesn't have and the homesickness even she can't deny. And a distinct absence of gills.

Lovely stuff. Just the kick in the pants I needed to get back to work on my own siren story. (Though I do have that contest entry due in a week and a half. So much to do, so little time...)

In any case, thank you for this.

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Thank YOU for commenting on my works! It's an incredible honor sir! I love the in-depth emotional remarks you give to the characters' points of view here! Thank you!

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