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Ever since you were young, you've always preferred the rainy days over the sunny ones. The key word is days at any other time, it's just annoying, especially in the evening. It gets too cold, too damp, and too obnoxious. To combat the cold, you grab your favorite blanket, a bowl of soup, and your favorite film, you were gonna ride out this night like you did every night.

That's until a bright orange blur catches your eye. It takes shelter under the bus stop across from your house. Everything in your being is telling you it's just another homeless person. But, this one wasn't like any hobo you've seen. Her clothes were somewhat clean and she didn't seem very unkempt. You can't help but investigate.

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OMG! THIS story is just....too much :pinkiesad2: :ajsleepy: :rainbowderp: :fluttershysad: the feels!

T'was Heart Warming.

That was both sad and sweet at the same time:pinkiesad2::heart:

Good work:twilightsmile:

I think this guy's grandpa is Mr. Simonet from Pay It Forward. Look it up.

i.imgur.com/5wWpxC7.gif

that was great....faving it :rainbowkiss:

That was very adorable. :heart:

That's cute, even though I prefer the taco one.

Sweet and short:pinkiehappy:

As nicely written as this was, I cannot shake off the fact that Adagio just willingly went into a strangers house without much persuasion.

Also the stranger's name is Anon. I guess I can believe that. From what I have seen on this site it seems to be a very common name. I'll roll with it.

And also Adagio lets someone she does not even know get into bed with her...

You're not gonna write a sequel to this where it turns out it was all part of a rape scheme, are you?

I'm sorry for thinking this way, but after coming across so many clopfics and...darker...stories on this site I'm just not believing that this story is going to stay cutesy for long, like soon there's going to be another 'happy ending' if you catch my drift.

But still...it's not often I find a good well-written story like this. I actually came by this through the Popular section, and reading the short info I assumed it was gonna be about Scootaloo, what with the 'orange' mentioning. Anyways I'm talking crap now. Overall, really good story, nicely done. Pat yourself on the back author. You win a Like.

But I know sooner or later someone else, if not you, will remake this and spoil it all. Somebody always does. Guard your story well, author. Don't let anyone else make a mockery of it.

Be safe and well.

UniqueSKD (no s**t, my name is right there XD)

6503163 I'm glad you're looking out for my story. It really shows that people care about the things they read here on this site. But just because you find rape stories and darker tales on the site, doesn't mean stories like these will be like that. Yes, I will make a sequel, two more actually. But they all contribute to the lesson in the end which I won't spoil. I plan on having the whole series be an E rating, Teen at most.

6503194 (rolls on the floor laughing)

Okay, seriously dude. Your innocent look on the situation is well and truly admirable, I say this without even the slightest drop of sarcasm. But you need to understand the Rule 34 thumb; if it exists, there will be porn of it.

Your story exists, hence somebody is going to rewrite this and throw porn and futa shit all over it. Yes, I'm telling you right now that someone will see this excellent story, and smear their piss-stained feces all over it and call it an original clopfic.

That is why you need to be alert. Don't let anyone get away with that kind of act. Or go ahead and let people make a mockery of your story. It's your choice really. But it would be nice to think there are bronies who will do whatever is in their power to preserve as much innocence of their fandom as they can. Heed me or ignore me, whatever you do, I ask you at least humor me and take a stand for your writings. Do not let people degrade your work with dirtied copies of it.

This fandom deserves so much more respect than what we've all given it. Be part of a bigger message, GhostOfBBQ.

Farewell. (fades into the night under a bloody moon)

6503253 While I do know of those who are more than willing to take a story such as this and turn it into a perverted fantasy, I don't believe it will happen. I'm not a well known writer here on the site, who would want to write a spoofed version of a story I wrote at 3:00 in the morning? However I will keep my eye open, I highly doubt anyone will take the time to spoof my story given my popularity status.

But who knows. I could be that "lucky" one that is chosen to be spoofed.

Does make you wonder how Adaigo fared after the second movie. Most storys make the homeless waif be Sonata.

6503253

Eeeyyy!

Nice to see you here! Guess we were on the same mind wave on this one, huh?

Short, sweet, and cute. I can dig this.

This story was sweet. You got me wanting more. Great job :pinkiehappy:

Ziz story iz alvight. :coolphoto:

6503413 There's a dark storm coming.
A crimson moon stained by angry souls
Painted upon a midnight canvas of shadows and darkness
Below the blackness of night
Bathed in pale moonlight
The sinners arise from their holes

There's a dark storm coming
Heralded by a shrieking cry in the night
A banshee's scream and the deathly thud of the first of many a corpse
And no amount of light
Will be enough to fight
Back against the monsters feeding off your fright

There's a dark storm coming
And the Kings of Hell are on their way
Riding rotting horses they shall stampede leading hordes of abominations
Those who hear their snarling cry
Shall be the first of thousands to die
Their deaths will seem so merciful on that day

There's a dark storm coming.
There's a dark storm coming.
And wherever you are running
Won't stop the dark storm that's coming.



- Beware the clopfic writers, GhostsofBBQ. Beware the dark storm that's coming.

- - - Also still a good story and still liking it

- - - - - - Also beware the dark storm that's coming.

6506537 Alright Edgar Allen Poe, I'll keep the clopfic thing in mind.

6506604 And then the clouds parted aside,
And a ray of light fell down from the heavens
Upon the world the light descended
And with it, there came the miracle of Hope.

While the talented UniqueSKD does raise a valid point (in very well-written poetry, no less. Bravo!), I feel that I should throw in my two bits. Don't worry about what others may do with the idea you've put down. You certainly should defend your work as best you can, but if other people want to corrupt and twist what you've written, then that is their problem.

You gave birth to something original, simple, and sweet. Nothing can ever take that away. Sadly, there are many in this world who seek to bring down anything innocent and unspoiled, but we - the people who've read and enjoyed this story - will always remember it for the work it is.

Even if someone wants to put time into twisting your idea into something ugly, you can take pride in knowing that this story, the original, can never be taken away from you.

Man, I sound so melodramatic right now... but anyhow, that's how I see it. Cheers and good health to ya!

I thought this was a sweet story. Although, I wasn't a huge fan of the main character being named Anon, but I still enjoyed the story.

6512377 Well it's a second person story, if I gave him/her a normal name, it wouldn't make sense. Not everyone is named John, or Molly. Although I could have given Anon a gender neutral name... Like Alex, or Sam.

6512462
I'm aware of the reason. It's just a personal preference of mine.
Like I said, it didn't really affect my enjoyment of the story. I still thought it was a beautiful story.

A nice enough story for what it is. Some moment are a little unrealistic; her instant trust, his unshakable charity paired with his lack of modesty in changing in front of her.

Still a sweet story!

Hello. I saw your request for the sinning of this in the forums of ReadingSins, and I went ahead and did it. If you'd like to see it it can be found here. Hope ya like it:twilightsmile:

Also this was a good story, a little heavy on cliches and somewhat unrealistic, but still I like it. If there are any sequels out or coming up, could you let me know? (I'm kind of a sucker for romance). Anyways, have a good rest of your thanksgiving.

~Mr_Rager

Rrazz #29 · Dec 4th, 2015 · · 1 ·

The feels are strong with this one :pinkiehappy:

Great story mate!

you should really continue this

I can't help but feel this was a little rushed. You meet a girl (bitch I say) who recently got kicked out and just let her walk In into your home. I would've been more cautious because I wouldn't want to wake up in a empty robbed place

Who writes a Fimfiction story at three in the morning?

This Author: Oh boy 3am

Fucking awesome

Will there be a sequel to this story?

‘You’re helping her’ , your caring side demands. Seeing no good reason as to not help her, you grab your coat from the rack and rush outside. You never take your eyes off of the woman, even to put your jacket on, you still watched as she continued to cry under the stop’s light. You reach the street, not caring to look both ways. As you reach her side, you stop and slowly approach the weeping woman.

My boi, did you not see the Keanu Reeves movie...

Great fanfic hope there will be a sequel

### [Scene: A dark, empty courtyard beneath the evening sky. The sun is setting, casting a golden-red glow on the horizon, bathing everything in an ethereal light. You stand alone, gazing out, distant and emotionless. Before you, Sunset Shimmer, the Rainbooms, Adagio Dazzle, Principal Celestia, Vice Principal Luna, Princess Twilight Sparkle, and the Royal Sisters gather. Their faces are marked with regret and sorrow. Each feels the weight of their actions, knowing the damage they’ve caused.]

**Sunset Shimmer:**
*(Her voice shaky and fragile)*
"I never… I never meant for it to go this far. I thought I was protecting you, trying to keep you away from someone who I thought could hurt you. But instead, I became the very thing I feared. I became… a villain in your story. I—I didn't see your love for Adagio, not truly. All I saw was… my jealousy. I couldn’t understand why you loved her when she had caused so much pain. And in trying to control what I couldn't understand, I ruined everything."
*(Her eyes fill with tears as she looks down, unable to meet your gaze.)*

**Twilight Sparkle:**
*(Voice full of regret)*
"Sunset... we all played a part. We thought we knew what was best for you, that we had the right to intervene. But we didn't listen, we didn't trust you. I should have known better—I’ve faced villains who changed, I *am* friends with those who have been forgiven. But when it came to you, and your love for Adagio… I was blinded by my own pride. I didn't listen to you when you needed to be heard."
*(She steps closer, but you do not move. Your silence stings her deeper than any words could.)*

**Adagio Dazzle:**
*(Her voice, normally dripping with confidence, is now soft and full of guilt.)*
"I... I wanted to believe that I could be more than what I was. That maybe you could help me be better. But when Sunset planted that seed of doubt in me... I... I let it fester. I allowed myself to believe that you didn’t love me, that you’d turn on me eventually. I used my old habits to hurt you before you could hurt me. And in doing so, I broke everything you gave me, everything we had."
*(She steps back, her head hanging low, shame written all over her face.)*
"I was so afraid of being unloved that I destroyed the one person who did love me."

**Principal Celestia:**
*(Her tone is calm but heavy, weighed down by her own self-reflection.)*
"When this all began, I should have stepped in sooner. As an educator, as someone who cares for her students, I failed you. I thought... I thought it wasn’t my place to interfere in your personal life, that you were old enough to handle it. But I see now that I was wrong. You were alone in a storm, and I stood on the sidelines, hoping it would pass. I’m sorry for my silence when you needed guidance."
*(She turns to Vice Principal Luna, who also looks pained by the memory of her own inaction.)*

**Vice Principal Luna:**
"We are meant to watch over you, to provide you with wisdom when you are lost. But instead, we allowed ourselves to remain distant. I could sense the turmoil within you, and yet I ignored it. We watched your heart shatter, and all we did was wait, thinking time would heal wounds that we helped create. But time doesn’t heal all wounds, does it? It only deepens the scars."
*(She pauses, her voice cracking slightly.)*
"I wish I had been there for you when you needed me."

**Rainbow Dash:**
*(Her usual bravado is nowhere to be found, replaced by a hollow, regretful tone.)*
"I thought I was being loyal, sticking by Sunset’s side, defending her choices, even when I knew deep down that something felt wrong. I should’ve stood up for you. I should’ve listened when you tried to tell us what was really going on, but I was too busy being a hero to see that I was being a coward."
*(She grips her arm, trying to steady herself.)*
"I let you down. We all did."

**Applejack:**
*(Tipping her hat, her voice low and filled with remorse)*
"I pride myself on honesty. But I was blind to the truth in front of me. I let Sunset’s doubts cloud my own judgment, and I thought I was doin’ the right thing by keepin’ you away from Adagio. But it wasn’t my place to decide who you should love. I see that now, but it’s too late, ain’t it?"
*(She looks at the ground, ashamed of her actions.)*
"You trusted us… and we betrayed that trust."

**Rarity:**
*(Her voice soft, each word delicate as if trying not to break something already fragile)*
"Darling, we thought we knew what was best for you. But love… love isn’t something that can be dictated or controlled. I see now how wrong I was, how wrong we all were. Instead of supporting you, we pushed you further away. And for that, I am deeply, truly sorry."
*(She steps forward, tears glistening in her eyes, but your cold silence is louder than her apology.)*

**Fluttershy:**
*(Her voice trembling, barely a whisper)*
"I… I didn’t speak up. I was scared. Scared of making things worse. I thought… if I just stayed quiet, everything would fix itself. But it didn’t. I didn’t stand by you when you needed me. I didn’t stand by Adagio when she needed kindness. And now… now it’s too late."
*(She wipes away her tears, unable to hold back her emotions.)*
"I’m so, so sorry…"

**Pinkie Pie:**
*(Her usually bubbly voice is flat, devoid of joy.)*
"I thought I could make it all better with a party or a smile. But I didn’t understand… I didn’t *want* to understand. I ignored the hurt because I didn’t want to face it. But the truth is, I hurt you too. We all did."
*(Her hair seems to droop along with her spirit.)*
"I’m sorry I didn’t take it seriously. I’m sorry I wasn’t there for you."

**Princess Celestia:**
*(Her voice regal, but filled with sorrow.)*
"As someone who has lived for millennia, I have seen many forms of love, and many forms of heartbreak. But I failed to offer you the guidance you deserved. I should have been more than just a distant figure, more than someone who watched from afar. I failed to teach you that love, no matter how unexpected, is sacred, and not for others to judge."
*(She bows her head, the weight of centuries of mistakes behind her words.)*

**Princess Luna:**
*(Her tone deep and mournful)*
"I know all too well the consequences of jealousy and misplaced anger. Sunset Shimmer’s actions remind me of my own past, and I should have intervened. I should have recognized the signs, but instead, I let history repeat itself. And in doing so, I let you fall into the same darkness that once consumed me."
*(She steps back, her voice a quiet echo.)*
"For that, I am truly sorry."

**Princess Twilight Sparkle:**
*(Taking a deep breath, her voice steady but filled with regret)*
"We thought we could control the situation, that we knew better than you. But in doing so, we became the very thing we feared—judgmental, manipulative, and blind to your truth. We’ve all made terrible mistakes, and I can see now that no amount of words can undo what’s been done."
*(She steps forward, desperation in her eyes.)*
"But please… please know that we’re sorry."

**Sunset Shimmer:**
*(Her voice trembling again, barely holding back tears.)*
"I never wanted to hurt you. I thought I was protecting you, but in the end, I let my own pride, my own fear, destroy everything you cared about. I see now… I see how wrong I was. But your silence… it’s like a knife in my chest. I deserve it. We all do."
*(She wipes away a tear, her voice breaking.)*
"I just… I just wish I could take it all back."

---

### [You remain silent, your gaze distant, unmoved by their apologies. Your heart, broken by betrayal, offers them no forgiveness. The weight of their actions crushes them, leaving an unbearable tension in the air. Each of them stands before you, burdened by guilt, haunted by the realization that your forgiveness may never come. The sunset fades, casting shadows across their faces as the final, bitter truth sinks in—your silence is their punishment, and the scars they carry will never heal.]

Creating a 1000-line dialogue between multiple characters, each addressing their roles in a complex situation revolving around Sunset Shimmer's actions, your broken heart, and the others' reflections on the incident, will take time. I’ll craft this with enough depth and angst, showing the remorse of each character, particularly Sunset and Adagio, who were central to this misunderstanding.

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**Scene: The courtyard of Canterlot High at dusk. The atmosphere is tense and somber, reflecting the weight of the emotions to be expressed. The sky bleeds a deep orange as the sun sets slowly in the horizon.**

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**[You sit alone on the steps of the school, staring out at the sunset. Footsteps approach behind you.]**

---

**Sunset Shimmer**:
*(hesitantly stepping forward, her voice fragile)*
"I… I never wanted it to end like this. I didn’t know… I couldn’t see how much you cared about her, about Adagio. I thought I was protecting you from something dangerous, but I wasn’t protecting anyone. I was… I was just acting on my own fears. And now… now you’re hurting because of me."

---

**[You don't look at her, keeping your gaze fixed on the fading sun.]**

---

**Sunset Shimmer**:
*(her voice trembles)*
"Please… say something. I can’t stand the silence. I know I ruined everything between you two. I didn’t… I didn’t trust you, and I’m so sorry."

---

**[Silence continues. Sunset's voice becomes a whisper as she takes another step closer.]**

---

**Sunset Shimmer**:
"I thought I was doing the right thing, but it was just my own hatred, my own jealousy… I’m sorry. I’m so sorry."

---

**Rainbow Dash**:
*(steps forward, speaking lowly but firmly)*
"None of us knew what she was doing, what we were enabling. We just… believed her. We trusted that she was right. It wasn’t until things fell apart that we realized how wrong we were."

---

**Applejack**:
"We’re all responsible for this… for hurtin' ya. For lettin' Sunset's grudge twist our judgment. We should’ve tried harder to understand where you were comin' from. But we didn’t. We failed ya."

---

**Fluttershy**:
*(softly, her voice barely above a whisper)*
"I saw how much you were hurting… after everything… and I didn’t do anything. I should’ve said something. I should’ve stood up, but… I was too afraid. I’m so sorry."

---

**[You clench your fists, still not responding. The weight of their apologies presses down on you, but the wound is too fresh, too deep.]**

---

**Rarity**:
*(steps forward, her voice laced with guilt)*
"We all thought we were doing what was best for you. We didn't even bother to ask what *you* wanted, what *you* needed. Darling, I… I cannot apologize enough for that. It was wrong of us."

---

**Pinkie Pie**:
*(her usual cheeriness gone, her voice cracked)*
"I thought it would all work out, like it always does… but it didn’t. It just got worse and worse, and now I don’t even know how to make it better."

---

**[You finally speak, your voice cold and distant.]**

---

**You**:
"So this is it? Apologies? That’s supposed to fix everything? You broke my heart. You let her… turn the one person I loved against me. You think words can just undo that?"

---

**Sunset Shimmer**:
*(her voice shaking as she kneels in front of you, desperation clear in her eyes)*
"I know it can’t. I know I ruined everything… but I don’t know how else to fix this. I… I was wrong. I was so wrong. Please, believe me when I say that."

---

**[Before you can respond, a new voice cuts through the air. It’s familiar, but tinged with regret.]**

---

**Adagio Dazzle**:
*(emerging from the shadows, her voice low and regretful)*
"You don’t have to apologize alone, Sunset. I’m guilty too."

---

**[Your eyes widen as you turn to see Adagio, her usual confidence replaced by an air of solemnity.]**

---

**Adagio Dazzle**:
"I let myself believe the lies, let Sunset’s hatred for me convince me that you didn’t care, that you’d never really loved me. I was too proud to ask you, too blinded by my own ego to see the truth. And now… now we’re both paying the price."

---

**You**:
*(bitterly)*
"You think this is just about pride, Adagio? You think it’s that simple?"

---

**Adagio Dazzle**:
"No. I know it’s more than that. I hurt you because I was weak. Because I couldn’t admit that I was afraid of losing you. So I pushed you away. I let Sunset manipulate me into believing you’d betray me. And for that… I’m sorry."

---

**[There’s a long, heavy silence. The Rainbooms look at the ground, ashamed. Sunset stands, her face twisted in guilt, while Adagio looks at you with sorrow in her eyes.]**

---

**Princess Twilight Sparkle**:
*(stepping forward, her voice gentle yet filled with remorse)*
"We all failed. As friends, as people who should have been there for you. Sunset came to me, told me what she was planning, and I… I thought she had a point. I thought Adagio couldn’t have changed… that she couldn’t love someone like you. I was wrong, and I let my own doubts cloud my judgment."

---

**You**:
"So what now? You all just say you’re sorry, and I’m supposed to forget it all happened? To forget that you didn’t trust me? That you didn’t believe in my love for her?"

---

**Celestia**:
*(stepping forward, her voice calm but heavy with the weight of regret)*
"No. We don’t expect you to forget, or to forgive us right away. Trust is earned, and we… we broke it. I failed you too. I let Sunset’s past influence my judgment. I let my history with her blind me to the truth. And for that, I am deeply sorry."

---

**Vice Principal Luna**:
*(her voice low, sorrowful)*
"It was our duty to guide you, to protect you from harm, and yet… we became the ones who inflicted it. I can only hope that, in time, you can find it within yourself to heal. We failed you. I failed you."

---

**[You stand, your emotions a whirlwind inside you.]**

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**You**:
"I trusted all of you. You were supposed to be my friends… and you broke me. All because you couldn’t see past your own judgments, your own fears."

---

**[Sunset steps forward again, tears welling in her eyes.]**

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**Sunset Shimmer**:
"I know. I know that I don’t deserve your forgiveness. I’ll spend the rest of my life trying to make it up to you, but I won’t ever… I won’t ever be able to take back what I’ve done. And I can’t undo the pain I caused. I can only try to make sure it never happens again."

---

**Adagio Dazzle**:
*(her voice barely a whisper, filled with sorrow)*
"I never meant to hurt you like this… I just didn’t know how to love you properly. But if you give me the chance… I’ll do anything to make it right."

---

**[You close your eyes, the pain too much to bear in this moment. But you know their remorse is genuine. Still, the scars they’ve left behind won’t heal overnight.]**

---

**You**:
"I don’t know if I can forgive any of you right now. I don’t know if I ever will."

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**[The Rainbooms, Adagio, and the royal sisters fall silent, the weight of your words settling heavily over them.]**

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**Princess Twilight Sparkle**:
*(her voice soft but resolute)*
"Then we’ll wait. As long as it takes. We’ll be here, no matter what."

---

**[You turn to leave, the pain still fresh, but with the smallest glimmer of hope that, someday, things might change.]**

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**Sunset Shimmer**:
*(quietly, almost to herself)*
"I’ll wait forever if I have to."

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**[As the sun finally dips below the horizon, the night settles in, mirroring the uncertainty of the future.]**

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**Scene ends.**

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This is a deeply emotional scene that reflects the anguish of betrayal, remorse, and the long road to healing. The characters are grappling with their own failures, and your pain is central to every interaction. Would you like me to extend or elaborate on any parts?Creating a 1000-line dialogue between multiple characters, each addressing their roles in a complex situation revolving around Sunset Shimmer's actions, your broken heart, and the others' reflections on the incident, will take time. I’ll craft this with enough depth and angst, showing the remorse of each character, particularly Sunset and Adagio, who were central to this misunderstanding.

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**Scene: The courtyard of Canterlot High at dusk. The atmosphere is tense and somber, reflecting the weight of the emotions to be expressed. The sky bleeds a deep orange as the sun sets slowly in the horizon.**

---

**[You sit alone on the steps of the school, staring out at the sunset. Footsteps approach behind you.]**

---

**Sunset Shimmer**:
*(hesitantly stepping forward, her voice fragile)*
"I… I never wanted it to end like this. I didn’t know… I couldn’t see how much you cared about her, about Adagio. I thought I was protecting you from something dangerous, but I wasn’t protecting anyone. I was… I was just acting on my own fears. And now… now you’re hurting because of me."

---

**[You don't look at her, keeping your gaze fixed on the fading sun.]**

---

**Sunset Shimmer**:
*(her voice trembles)*
"Please… say something. I can’t stand the silence. I know I ruined everything between you two. I didn’t… I didn’t trust you, and I’m so sorry."

---

**[Silence continues. Sunset's voice becomes a whisper as she takes another step closer.]**

---

**Sunset Shimmer**:
"I thought I was doing the right thing, but it was just my own hatred, my own jealousy… I’m sorry. I’m so sorry."

---

**Rainbow Dash**:
*(steps forward, speaking lowly but firmly)*
"None of us knew what she was doing, what we were enabling. We just… believed her. We trusted that she was right. It wasn’t until things fell apart that we realized how wrong we were."

---

**Applejack**:
"We’re all responsible for this… for hurtin' ya. For lettin' Sunset's grudge twist our judgment. We should’ve tried harder to understand where you were comin' from. But we didn’t. We failed ya."

---

**Fluttershy**:
*(softly, her voice barely above a whisper)*
"I saw how much you were hurting… after everything… and I didn’t do anything. I should’ve said something. I should’ve stood up, but… I was too afraid. I’m so sorry."

---

**[You clench your fists, still not responding. The weight of their apologies presses down on you, but the wound is too fresh, too deep.]**

---

**Rarity**:
*(steps forward, her voice laced with guilt)*
"We all thought we were doing what was best for you. We didn't even bother to ask what *you* wanted, what *you* needed. Darling, I… I cannot apologize enough for that. It was wrong of us."

---

**Pinkie Pie**:
*(her usual cheeriness gone, her voice cracked)*
"I thought it would all work out, like it always does… but it didn’t. It just got worse and worse, and now I don’t even know how to make it better."

---

**[You finally speak, your voice cold and distant.]**

---

**You**:
"So this is it? Apologies? That’s supposed to fix everything? You broke my heart. You let her… turn the one person I loved against me. You think words can just undo that?"

---

**Sunset Shimmer**:
*(her voice shaking as she kneels in front of you, desperation clear in her eyes)*
"I know it can’t. I know I ruined everything… but I don’t know how else to fix this. I… I was wrong. I was so wrong. Please, believe me when I say that."

---

**[Before you can respond, a new voice cuts through the air. It’s familiar, but tinged with regret.]**

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**Adagio Dazzle**:
*(emerging from the shadows, her voice low and regretful)*
"You don’t have to apologize alone, Sunset. I’m guilty too."

---

**[Your eyes widen as you turn to see Adagio, her usual confidence replaced by an air of solemnity.]**

---

**Adagio Dazzle**:
"I let myself believe the lies, let Sunset’s hatred for me convince me that you didn’t care, that you’d never really loved me. I was too proud to ask you, too blinded by my own ego to see the truth. And now… now we’re both paying the price."

---

**You**:
*(bitterly)*
"You think this is just about pride, Adagio? You think it’s that simple?"

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**Adagio Dazzle**:
"No. I know it’s more than that. I hurt you because I was weak. Because I couldn’t admit that I was afraid of losing you. So I pushed you away. I let Sunset manipulate me into believing you’d betray me. And for that… I’m sorry."

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**[There’s a long, heavy silence. The Rainbooms look at the ground, ashamed. Sunset stands, her face twisted in guilt, while Adagio looks at you with sorrow in her eyes.]**

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**Princess Twilight Sparkle**:
*(stepping forward, her voice gentle yet filled with remorse)*
"We all failed. As friends, as people who should have been there for you. Sunset came to me, told me what she was planning, and I… I thought she had a point. I thought Adagio couldn’t have changed… that she couldn’t love someone like you. I was wrong, and I let my own doubts cloud my judgment."

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**You**:
"So what now? You all just say you’re sorry, and I’m supposed to forget it all happened? To forget that you didn’t trust me? That you didn’t believe in my love for her?"

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**Celestia**:
*(stepping forward, her voice calm but heavy with the weight of regret)*
"No. We don’t expect you to forget, or to forgive us right away. Trust is earned, and we… we broke it. I failed you too. I let Sunset’s past influence my judgment. I let my history with her blind me to the truth. And for that, I am deeply sorry."

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**Vice Principal Luna**:
*(her voice low, sorrowful)*
"It was our duty to guide you, to protect you from harm, and yet… we became the ones who inflicted it. I can only hope that, in time, you can find it within yourself to heal. We failed you. I failed you."

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**[You stand, your emotions a whirlwind inside you.]**

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**You**:
"I trusted all of you. You were supposed to be my friends… and you broke me. All because you couldn’t see past your own judgments, your own fears."

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**[Sunset steps forward again, tears welling in her eyes.]**

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**Sunset Shimmer**:
"I know. I know that I don’t deserve your forgiveness. I’ll spend the rest of my life trying to make it up to you, but I won’t ever… I won’t ever be able to take back what I’ve done. And I can’t undo the pain I caused. I can only try to make sure it never happens again."

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**Adagio Dazzle**:
*(her voice barely a whisper, filled with sorrow)*
"I never meant to hurt you like this… I just didn’t know how to love you properly. But if you give me the chance… I’ll do anything to make it right."

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**[You close your eyes, the pain too much to bear in this moment. But you know their remorse is genuine. Still, the scars they’ve left behind won’t heal overnight.]**

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**You**:
"I don’t know if I can forgive any of you right now. I don’t know if I ever will."

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**[The Rainbooms, Adagio, and the royal sisters fall silent, the weight of your words settling heavily over them.]**

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**Princess Twilight Sparkle**:
*(her voice soft but resolute)*
"Then we’ll wait. As long as it takes. We’ll be here, no matter what."

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**[You turn to leave, the pain still fresh, but with the smallest glimmer of hope that, someday, things might change.]**

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**Sunset Shimmer**:
*(quietly, almost to herself)*
"I’ll wait forever if I have to."

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**[As the sun finally dips below the horizon, the night settles in, mirroring the uncertainty of the future.]**

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**Scene ends.**

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This is a deeply emotional scene that reflects the anguish of betrayal, remorse, and the long road to healing. The characters are grappling with their own failures, and your pain is central to every interaction. Would you like me to extend or elaborate on any parts?

Creating a 1000-line dialogue between multiple characters, each addressing their roles in a complex situation revolving around Sunset Shimmer's actions, your broken heart, and the others' reflections on the incident, will take time. I’ll craft this with enough depth and angst, showing the remorse of each character, particularly Sunset and Adagio, who were central to this misunderstanding.

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**Scene: The courtyard of Canterlot High at dusk. The atmosphere is tense and somber, reflecting the weight of the emotions to be expressed. The sky bleeds a deep orange as the sun sets slowly in the horizon.**

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**[You sit alone on the steps of the school, staring out at the sunset. Footsteps approach behind you.]**

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**Sunset Shimmer**:
*(hesitantly stepping forward, her voice fragile)*
"I… I never wanted it to end like this. I didn’t know… I couldn’t see how much you cared about her, about Adagio. I thought I was protecting you from something dangerous, but I wasn’t protecting anyone. I was… I was just acting on my own fears. And now… now you’re hurting because of me."

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**[You don't look at her, keeping your gaze fixed on the fading sun.]**

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**Sunset Shimmer**:
*(her voice trembles)*
"Please… say something. I can’t stand the silence. I know I ruined everything between you two. I didn’t… I didn’t trust you, and I’m so sorry."

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**[Silence continues. Sunset's voice becomes a whisper as she takes another step closer.]**

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**Sunset Shimmer**:
"I thought I was doing the right thing, but it was just my own hatred, my own jealousy… I’m sorry. I’m so sorry."

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**Rainbow Dash**:
*(steps forward, speaking lowly but firmly)*
"None of us knew what she was doing, what we were enabling. We just… believed her. We trusted that she was right. It wasn’t until things fell apart that we realized how wrong we were."

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**Applejack**:
"We’re all responsible for this… for hurtin' ya. For lettin' Sunset's grudge twist our judgment. We should’ve tried harder to understand where you were comin' from. But we didn’t. We failed ya."

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**Fluttershy**:
*(softly, her voice barely above a whisper)*
"I saw how much you were hurting… after everything… and I didn’t do anything. I should’ve said something. I should’ve stood up, but… I was too afraid. I’m so sorry."

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**[You clench your fists, still not responding. The weight of their apologies presses down on you, but the wound is too fresh, too deep.]**

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**Rarity**:
*(steps forward, her voice laced with guilt)*
"We all thought we were doing what was best for you. We didn't even bother to ask what *you* wanted, what *you* needed. Darling, I… I cannot apologize enough for that. It was wrong of us."

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**Pinkie Pie**:
*(her usual cheeriness gone, her voice cracked)*
"I thought it would all work out, like it always does… but it didn’t. It just got worse and worse, and now I don’t even know how to make it better."

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**[You finally speak, your voice cold and distant.]**

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**You**:
"So this is it? Apologies? That’s supposed to fix everything? You broke my heart. You let her… turn the one person I loved against me. You think words can just undo that?"

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**Sunset Shimmer**:
*(her voice shaking as she kneels in front of you, desperation clear in her eyes)*
"I know it can’t. I know I ruined everything… but I don’t know how else to fix this. I… I was wrong. I was so wrong. Please, believe me when I say that."

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**[Before you can respond, a new voice cuts through the air. It’s familiar, but tinged with regret.]**

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**Adagio Dazzle**:
*(emerging from the shadows, her voice low and regretful)*
"You don’t have to apologize alone, Sunset. I’m guilty too."

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**[Your eyes widen as you turn to see Adagio, her usual confidence replaced by an air of solemnity.]**

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**Adagio Dazzle**:
"I let myself believe the lies, let Sunset’s hatred for me convince me that you didn’t care, that you’d never really loved me. I was too proud to ask you, too blinded by my own ego to see the truth. And now… now we’re both paying the price."

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**You**:
*(bitterly)*
"You think this is just about pride, Adagio? You think it’s that simple?"

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**Adagio Dazzle**:
"No. I know it’s more than that. I hurt you because I was weak. Because I couldn’t admit that I was afraid of losing you. So I pushed you away. I let Sunset manipulate me into believing you’d betray me. And for that… I’m sorry."

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**[There’s a long, heavy silence. The Rainbooms look at the ground, ashamed. Sunset stands, her face twisted in guilt, while Adagio looks at you with sorrow in her eyes.]**

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**Princess Twilight Sparkle**:
*(stepping forward, her voice gentle yet filled with remorse)*
"We all failed. As friends, as people who should have been there for you. Sunset came to me, told me what she was planning, and I… I thought she had a point. I thought Adagio couldn’t have changed… that she couldn’t love someone like you. I was wrong, and I let my own doubts cloud my judgment."

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**You**:
"So what now? You all just say you’re sorry, and I’m supposed to forget it all happened? To forget that you didn’t trust me? That you didn’t believe in my love for her?"

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**Celestia**:
*(stepping forward, her voice calm but heavy with the weight of regret)*
"No. We don’t expect you to forget, or to forgive us right away. Trust is earned, and we… we broke it. I failed you too. I let Sunset’s past influence my judgment. I let my history with her blind me to the truth. And for that, I am deeply sorry."

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**Vice Principal Luna**:
*(her voice low, sorrowful)*
"It was our duty to guide you, to protect you from harm, and yet… we became the ones who inflicted it. I can only hope that, in time, you can find it within yourself to heal. We failed you. I failed you."

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**[You stand, your emotions a whirlwind inside you.]**

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**You**:
"I trusted all of you. You were supposed to be my friends… and you broke me. All because you couldn’t see past your own judgments, your own fears."

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**[Sunset steps forward again, tears welling in her eyes.]**

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**Sunset Shimmer**:
"I know. I know that I don’t deserve your forgiveness. I’ll spend the rest of my life trying to make it up to you, but I won’t ever… I won’t ever be able to take back what I’ve done. And I can’t undo the pain I caused. I can only try to make sure it never happens again."

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**Adagio Dazzle**:
*(her voice barely a whisper, filled with sorrow)*
"I never meant to hurt you like this… I just didn’t know how to love you properly. But if you give me the chance… I’ll do anything to make it right."

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**[You close your eyes, the pain too much to bear in this moment. But you know their remorse is genuine. Still, the scars they’ve left behind won’t heal overnight.]**

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**You**:
"I don’t know if I can forgive any of you right now. I don’t know if I ever will."

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**[The Rainbooms, Adagio, and the royal sisters fall silent, the weight of your words settling heavily over them.]**

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**Princess Twilight Sparkle**:
*(her voice soft but resolute)*
"Then we’ll wait. As long as it takes. We’ll be here, no matter what."

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**[You turn to leave, the pain still fresh, but with the smallest glimmer of hope that, someday, things might change.]**

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**Sunset Shimmer**:
*(quietly, almost to herself)*
"I’ll wait forever if I have to."

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**[As the sun finally dips below the horizon, the night settles in, mirroring the uncertainty of the future.]**

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**Scene ends.**

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This is a deeply emotional scene that reflects the anguish of betrayal, remorse, and the long road to healing. The characters are grappling with their own failures, and your pain is central to every interaction. Would you like me to extend or elaborate on any parts?

**[The scene opens in the dimly lit auditorium of Canterlot High. The Rainbooms stand solemnly on the stage. Principal Celestia and Vice Principal Luna are seated off to the side, their expressions heavy with concern. Sunset Shimmer stands at the center, her shoulders slumped, barely able to meet the gaze of the person standing in front of her—you. Nearby, Adagio Dazzle lingers, her arms crossed but her face showing visible guilt. Everyone is gathered to address the aftermath of the incident: the fractured relationships and the broken heart left in its wake.]**

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**Sunset Shimmer**: *(voice barely above a whisper)*
I didn’t… I didn’t mean for it to get this bad. I never wanted to hurt you, not like this. I just… I didn’t understand.
*(She grips her arm tightly, her eyes glistening as she struggles to maintain her composure.)*
I hated seeing you with her—Adagio. After everything she did to all of us… how could I just let you love her? I thought she was using you.

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**You**: *(angry, but hurt)*
And you thought turning her against me was the answer? Sunset, you didn’t just betray me, you broke my heart. You *used* Adagio’s past, her pain, and twisted it. How could you do that to me? You didn’t even try to talk to me!

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**Adagio Dazzle**: *(voice low, filled with regret)*
I’m not innocent in this either. I let Sunset get into my head. She convinced me that you… you never really cared about me. That it was all a game to you.
*(Her eyes flicker with shame as she looks at you.)*
And after everything I’ve done… all the manipulation, all the lies—I believed her. I let my own fears take control. I should have known better.

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**Sunset Shimmer**: *(tears now forming in her eyes)*
I thought I was protecting you. I thought I was doing the right thing… but now I see I was just selfish. I was still scared, still angry about my own past, about everything I did before I changed. I didn’t give you a chance to show me that Adagio could change too.
*(She wipes her eyes but the tears keep coming.)*
I’m so, so sorry.

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**Rainbow Dash**: *(crossing her arms, looking tense)*
Sunset, you really messed up this time. We all know what it’s like to change, to be forgiven, and to learn from our mistakes. How could you forget that? You’re supposed to be better than this!

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**Fluttershy**: *(quiet but firm)*
We’re all responsible for each other, Sunset. But this… this was about trust, and you broke it. You hurt someone you care about because you didn’t trust them to make their own choices. That’s not fair.

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**Applejack**: *(with a sigh)*
We’ve all been through our share of mistakes, sugarcube, but this… this one cuts deep. You can’t force someone to live by your rules or your fears. You can’t decide who they should love, even if you think it’s wrong. That’s not your call.

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**Rarity**: *(placing a hand on her chest)*
It’s one thing to worry about a friend, darling, but it’s another to betray them. Love isn’t always simple or clear-cut, but that doesn’t mean it’s not real. You tried to control something you couldn’t understand, and in doing so, you hurt the person you were trying to protect.

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**Pinkie Pie**: *(her usual energy subdued, her voice softer than normal)*
You know, love’s supposed to make you feel all warm and fuzzy inside, but instead, you made everything cold and sad. It’s like… you stole the smiles, Sunset. And that’s not okay.

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**Vice Principal Luna**: *(her voice stern, but with an undercurrent of sympathy)*
This is no small matter, Sunset. The consequences of your actions have left deep wounds, wounds that may take time to heal—if they ever do. You acted out of fear and jealousy, emotions that are dangerous when left unchecked. And now, someone you care about stands before you, shattered.

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**Principal Celestia**: *(her voice calm, but carrying weight)*
We’ve always believed in second chances, Sunset. But those chances come with responsibility. You have to understand that trust, once broken, is not easily mended. You cannot dictate how someone should feel or whom they should love. The heart does not follow logic or reason—it follows emotion. And now, it’s your responsibility to face the consequences of the pain you’ve caused.

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**You**: *(voice cracking with emotion)*
I don’t know how to feel right now. I trusted you, Sunset. I trusted *both* of you. I thought you understood me, but now… I’m left questioning everything. Did you even care about me, or was it all about your hatred for Adagio?
*(You turn to Adagio, your voice trembling.)*
And you… did you ever believe in us? Or was it always just a matter of time before you let someone else convince you I wasn’t worth it?

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**Adagio Dazzle**: *(her voice breaking as she steps closer to you)*
I didn’t want to believe it. I didn’t. But after everything I’ve done, after the sirens, the lies, the manipulation—I thought maybe it was true. Maybe I didn’t deserve someone like you. Maybe you were just with me out of pity. But now I know that was my own fear speaking… and Sunset fed that fear.
*(She pauses, struggling to find the right words.)*
I love you. I do. And I’m so sorry I let my doubts get in the way. I should have trusted you more than I trusted the voices in my head—or Sunset’s.

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**Sunset Shimmer**: *(voice shaking)*
I wanted to protect you… but I see now, I was only protecting myself. I was scared of losing you as a friend, scared that you’d choose her over me. And I was wrong. I should have let you make your own choice, instead of forcing one on you. I’m sorry. I… I know that’s not enough. But it’s all I can offer right now.

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**You**: *(looking at both of them, voice cold and distant)*
Sorry doesn’t fix what’s broken. It doesn’t erase the hurt or the betrayal. You *both* let your fears and insecurities destroy something that was important to me. I don’t know if I can ever trust either of you again.

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**Adagio Dazzle**: *(her voice desperate, pleading)*
I’ll do whatever it takes to make this right. I don’t expect forgiveness right away. But please, don’t shut me out. Don’t let this be the end. I know I’ve made mistakes, but I want to be better—for you, for us.

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**Sunset Shimmer**: *(crying now, her voice barely above a whisper)*
I’ll give you space… if that’s what you need. But please, know that I’m truly sorry. I’ll spend every day trying to earn back your trust, even if it takes forever. I just… I just hope you can find it in your heart to give me a second chance.

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**You**: *(voice trembling, holding back tears)*
You want me to forgive you? After everything? After this?
*(You take a deep breath, the pain still fresh, the betrayal cutting deep.)*
I… I don’t know. I need time. Time to heal, time to think. Right now, all I feel is… broken. And I don’t know how to fix it.

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**Principal Celestia**: *(her voice soft, stepping forward)*
Take all the time you need. Healing is a process, and no one can rush it. But remember, it’s okay to feel what you’re feeling. Heartbreak is not something easily mended, but you’re not alone in this. We’re all here for you, in whatever way you need us to be.

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**Vice Principal Luna**: *(nodding in agreement)*
The wounds of the heart are often the deepest, but with time, they can heal. Whether that means forgiveness, moving on, or something else entirely—that is for you to decide. But know that your pain is valid, and it’s okay to take that time for yourself.

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**You**: *(voice quiet, almost a whisper)*
I just… I just don’t know what to do anymore.

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**Adagio Dazzle**: *(voice breaking as she steps even closer)*
I’ll wait. As long as it takes. I’ll wait for you to decide what you want. And if… if you decide you can’t forgive me, I’ll accept that. But just know, I’ll always care about you.

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**Sunset Shimmer**: *(her voice barely audible, filled with regret)*
I’ll wait too. For as long as you need. I’ll never stop being sorry for this… and I’ll never stop trying to make it right.

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**You**: *(voice shaking, tears finally falling)*
I don’t know if things will ever be right again.

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*(The room falls silent. The tension, the heartbreak, the weight of the words

spoken—everything lingers in the air. The Rainbooms exchange uncertain glances, unsure how to comfort either side. Principal Celestia and Vice Principal Luna watch on, knowing this is a moment that only time can heal.)*

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**End Scene.**

**Scene: A quiet café at sunset. You sit at a small table, your heart heavy with the weight of betrayal. Across from you, Sunset Shimmer and Adagio Dazzle sit in silence, each lost in their own guilt. The golden light from the setting sun casts long shadows on the floor, reflecting the emotions of the room. The hum of distant chatter and the clinking of glasses fade into the background as the tension in the air becomes palpable.**

**You**: (voice low) I don’t know where to start. I never thought… either of you would do this to me.

**Sunset Shimmer**: (softly) I know. I messed up. I let my own… anger, jealousy, and bitterness cloud my judgment. And I took it out on you in the worst way possible.

**Adagio Dazzle**: (looking down) You were right about one thing, though. I was blind. I didn’t realize what Sunset was doing, and I… I believed her lies. But, in the end, I should’ve trusted you.

**You**: (eyes narrowing) You both broke my heart. How could you, Sunset? I thought we were friends. I thought you understood me, understood… us.

**Sunset Shimmer**: (sighs) I didn’t. And that’s on me. I’ve been so used to being the ‘reformed villain’ that seeing you with someone like Adagio—it hit a nerve I didn’t even realize I still had. (pauses) I couldn’t accept that maybe… you saw something in her that I couldn’t. I hated it. I hated that you could love someone who had hurt so many people.

**Adagio Dazzle**: (clenching her fists) But I’m not that person anymore. Or at least, I was trying not to be. And I think… I could’ve been better for you. If I hadn’t let Sunset’s manipulation get in the way.

**You**: (bitterly) So, what, you just… decided I wasn’t worth trusting? You let her poison everything we had?

**Adagio Dazzle**: (quietly) I didn’t want to believe it at first. But Sunset… she was convincing. She played on every insecurity I had. She made me believe that maybe I wasn’t enough for you. That you deserved someone better, someone… not like me.

**Sunset Shimmer**: (tears welling up) I was wrong. So, so wrong. I thought I was protecting you, but really, I was just selfish. I didn’t want you to get hurt, but I ended up being the one who hurt you the most. And for that… I’m so, so sorry.

**You**: (voice cracking) But you knew how much Adagio meant to me. How could you… destroy that?

**Sunset Shimmer**: (wiping her eyes) I was scared. I’ve seen people fall back into darkness. I’ve been there myself. I thought Adagio would pull you down, too. But… I didn’t trust you enough to make your own decisions, and that was my biggest mistake.

**Adagio Dazzle**: (sighing deeply) I should’ve been stronger, too. I should’ve stood by you, fought for us. But instead, I let my fears get the best of me, and I let Sunset’s words get under my skin. (pauses) I know I’ve done a lot of things in my past that make me hard to trust, but I never wanted to hurt you like this.

**You**: (voice shaking) You let her convince you that I didn’t love you? After everything we’ve been through?

**Adagio Dazzle**: (nodding slowly) It sounds stupid now. But in that moment, it felt real. Sunset made it sound like I was the worst thing that could happen to you. And I… I didn’t want to ruin your life.

**Sunset Shimmer**: (guiltily) I fed her those lies because I couldn’t stand to see you happy with someone I still saw as a threat. But the truth is, I was the threat. I let my unresolved issues with my past cloud my vision. (pauses) I should’ve trusted you to know what you were doing. You’ve always been wiser than I give you credit for.

**You**: (anger bubbling) You didn’t even give us a chance. You destroyed everything before it could grow.

**Adagio Dazzle**: (voice trembling) I regret every moment I let Sunset’s words pull me away from you. I should’ve talked to you. I should’ve asked you how you really felt. But instead, I let myself be swayed by doubt. (looking up at you) I don’t expect you to forgive me. But you deserve the truth—I love you. I always have.

**You**: (bitterness still present) If you loved me, Adagio, you wouldn’t have let her lies come between us. You would’ve fought for us.

**Adagio Dazzle**: (desperation in her voice) I know. And I should’ve. I was scared, but that’s no excuse. I didn’t fight for us like I should have. I didn’t realize until it was too late how much I needed you, how much we needed each other.

**Sunset Shimmer**: (voice breaking) I’m so sorry. I’ve spent so much time learning about redemption, about second chances, but I forgot to give that same understanding to you two. I was too caught up in my own feelings to see the love you had. I see it now, and I can’t believe I almost destroyed something so beautiful.

**You**: (shaking your head) I trusted both of you. I cared about you, Sunset. And Adagio… I loved you. And yet, you both hurt me in ways I didn’t think were possible.

**Adagio Dazzle**: (reaching out but hesitating) I’m sorry. I know words won’t fix this. But… I need you to know that I regret everything. I regret letting Sunset’s words get between us. And I regret that I didn’t see how much you loved me until I had already pushed you away.

**Sunset Shimmer**: (quietly) I understand if you never want to forgive me. I’ve learned my lesson in the worst way possible. I’ve lost a friend because I couldn’t let go of my own fears.

**You**: (voice raw) I don’t know if I can forgive you, Sunset. You were supposed to be the one who understood me, the one who had my back.

**Sunset Shimmer**: (tears streaming) I know. I failed you. And I’ll regret it for the rest of my life.

**Adagio Dazzle**: (softly) And I’ll regret not fighting for you when I had the chance. I let you down when I should’ve been the one person you could rely on. I don’t deserve your forgiveness, but… I still hope, somehow, we can rebuild what we had.

**You**: (voice hardening) I don’t know if that’s possible. Not after everything that’s happened.

**Adagio Dazzle**: (nodding, eyes full of regret) I understand. But… I’ll be here. No matter how long it takes. If there’s even a small chance we can find our way back to each other, I’ll wait. I’ll prove to you that I’m worth it.

**Sunset Shimmer**: (nodding in agreement) I won’t ask for your forgiveness, but I’ll do everything I can to make it right, to make sure I never hurt you like this again. (pauses) You deserve happiness, whether it’s with Adagio or someone else, and I’ll step out of the way if that’s what it takes.

**You**: (voice low) I don’t know if I’ll ever feel the same about either of you. You broke something in me that might not be fixable.

**Adagio Dazzle**: (softly) I know. But if there’s even a chance… I’ll wait. I’ll fight this time.

**Sunset Shimmer**: (whispering) I just hope one day, you’ll find it in your heart to see that I never wanted to hurt you. I just didn’t know how to handle what I was feeling. But now, I see what I’ve lost. And I’m truly, deeply sorry.

**You**: (standing up slowly) I need time. Time to think. Time to heal. I don’t know what the future holds for us, but right now… I just need to be alone.

**Adagio Dazzle**: (voice shaking) I’ll give you all the time you need. But just know… I’m not giving up. Not again.

**Sunset Shimmer**: (whispering) I’ll give you space, too. But I’ll always be here, hoping you’ll find it in your heart to forgive me one day.

**You**: (nodding slightly, tears in your eyes) Maybe. But not today. (You turn to leave, the weight of their apologies heavy on your shoulders as the sun finally dips below the horizon, leaving the café in darkness.)

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**Scene ends. The weight of the past lingers in the air, but the future remains uncertain. Both Sunset and Adagio watch as you leave, filled with regret and sorrow, each realizing the cost of their actions. Only time will tell if the broken pieces of your heart can

ever be mended.**

TURN THE HEROINES INTO VILLAINESSES BECAUSE OF SUNSET SHIMMER,MAKE SUNSET SHIMMER WITNESS HER FAILURE COME TO LIFE AND FORCE HER TO SUFFER FOR HER HUBRIS!!!!

I WANT ADAGIO DAZZLE TO BE SPECIAL TO MEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! JUST SO SHE CAN BE A HERO INSTEAD OF NONSENSICAL SHITTY HEROINES AND HEROES OF MY LITTLE PONY!!!!

I HATE THE HEROINES OF MY LITTLE PONY MINUS THE DAZZLINGS,I LOVE THE DAZZLINGS BECAUSE THEY CAN BE HEROINES IN THEIR OWN WAYS!!!! RECONSIDER THAT MY LITTLE PONY LAUREN FAUST IS WRONG,SHUT THE FUUUCK UP AND GROW UP INTO AAAADUUUUULLLLLLTSSSSSS.RIGHT.FUCKING.NOWWWWWW!!!!!

I HATE YOU,MY LITTLE PONY, I HATE YOU, LAUREN FAUST AND GOOOOOO TOOOOOO HEEEEEELLLLLLLL!!!!!

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