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Spyder27


I am Spyder27 and I write MLP stories! I'm known as the Emperor of Sundagio by friends~ I don't write free stories, so DM me for comm details. Follow me if you want regular updates on my stories~

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Being the eldest sibling is hard, especially when you have no parents to raise your younger sisters. In this story, that's just the case in Adagio Dazzle's life. Unlike the Dazzlings we've come to see so far, this Adagio and her sisters have always lived on Earth, showing just a peak into the human counterparts' lives. During a normal night at home, Adagio has to remember the thoughts of her mother, all while keeping her promise to keep her sisters happy. Life can be unfair at times...

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This oneshot has been on my mind a lot and I've been wanting to make this into a full fledged story, but I want to see how my audience reacts to this type of prompt before I write something like it~ Please tell me what you think of this dynamic and enjoy the show! P.S. This story now has a sequel called Dreams and Reality!

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This story is pretty cute. Congratulations on writing it. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks so much! I wanted to make it cute, despite the tones of abuse in the story and such~ I'm glad you liked the story! :twilightsmile:

Is this is the same continuity of your other stories or a seperate time line?

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Separate timeline~ This story is following the human counterparts of the sirens, but thanks for asking~ :twilightsmile: If something is in the same continuity, I will put a note in the description saying it's a sequel or such~

I want to see how people react to this type of prompt before I fully dedicate myself to making a story like this.

It's a bit generic, but It's decent enough and I don't have a whole lot going on, so I'll track it.

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Thanks~ I'll definitely think about making a full-fledged story out of this prompt after I finish my long fic right now~ :twilightsmile:

Oh, little Sonata's cuteness is killing me. to which I can only say, fair enough, carry on.

It's really heartbreaking that other kids won't be her friend though. :fluttercry: She is a cute little ball of wonderful. ❤

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Precisely what I wanted~ I'm glad you thought she was cute! I've never written a kid character as young as ten and all, so I had to try and remember what it was like when I was ten and I did a little bit of research~ I also took a bit of my own personal experience when it came to friendships. :twilightsheepish: In this story, I really wanted to preserve Sonata's innocent attitude and clearly cute outlook on life while having this kind of abusive past, so I made her a kid. Thanks for taking the time to read my story~ I definitely appreciate it and I will consider making a full story as a sequel to this~ :heart::twilightsmile:

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I'll be there when that sequel arrives then. I really want to see more, even if it breaks my heart a little.

Besides, you made me want to hug Sonata even more than usual. 💖

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I'm glad you want to see more~ The sequel will probably be mostly about Adagio and her struggles being almost a single mom for Aria and Sonata, but they will still be in it a good bit~ :twilightsmile: As well as a fiery-haired individual, but yeah.

Sonata deserves hugs, just saying~ :raritywink:

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Sonata deserves hugs, just saying~:raritywink:

Yes, yes she does.

And again, I will be there for it. 👍

“Of course. Did you defeat a dragon?” I ask her, poking her nose and receiving a giggle from the small ball of joy that is my little sister.

Huh, guess in this world Sonata is just a toddler. That sure explains the picture for the story. Still though.

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“No… Ms. Cheerilee wouldn’t let me take him and all. I had to leave him in the locker by himself,” Sonata says with a sad expression, holding onto the teddy bear. Even though most kids her age have already grown out of the stuffed animal phase, Sonata seems to prefer them over dolls or cars, playing with them any chance she gets. To her, they’re her only friends… I’ve tried to help her socialize with other kids her age, but they never seem interested in making friends with her. It sometimes breaks my heart to see Sonata try so hard to be kind to the kids around her only to come home crying from someone’s mean comments getting to her.

How sad. :pinkiesad2:

“You… can have some of mine if you want,” Aria whispers, looking away from the both of us as she slowly hands me the bowl only for me to push it back towards her.

A kind Aria eh, there's something I wasn't expecting. :pinkiegasp:

Licking her bowl slightly, Sonata quickly gets up from the couch, running to the kitchen to put her bowl in the sink. The pajamas she has on are a bright pink that contrasts with her skin nicely. The pink fabric is absolutely covered in a taco print, something she had wanted for a long time. Her favorite food in the whole world is a taco, making her wish for something as mundane as taco pajamas for Christmas. She’d write a letter with help from me to Santa Claus and send it to the North Pole. She doesn’t know the ‘North Pole’ she’s been sending her letters to is actually a shoe box in my closet. I guess I didn’t have the heart to actually send them away when she worked so hard on them. They’d only end up in the trash, so why not save them? It took me so long to save up enough money to buy her that gift, but I didn’t give myself the credit. To her, she still believes Santa gave her the pajamas. Most kids want toys, but she wanted sleepwear with her favorite food on them. It’s weird, but… wholesome.

She's definitely gonna have a rough reaction when she learn santa ain't real. :fluttershysad:

Running out of the kitchen, Sonata quickly makes her way to the bathroom to brush her teeth, making me smile at how excited she is to hear a bedtime story. Aria quietly stands up, bringing her own bowl and the rest of the dirty dishes to the kitchen with a stretch. “I’m going to go to bed now before the dork can ask me to stay,” Aria states quietly as she reenters the living room, making eye contact with me briefly. Pulling her phone out of her pocket, she sets it on the table in front of the couch with a slight sigh before walking down the hallway, disappearing behind a corner that leads to her own room.

At least she did 1 thing good in this part. Leave her phone behind. :ajsmug:

“Can we hear The Siren Princess again?” Sonata pleads with me, referring to both her and her stuffed animal. Sirens are typically seen as bad creatures… They seduce people and bring them to their doom, but Sonata saw some superhero like Aquaman and thought they were a siren. From then on, she insisted that sirens are good guys and they use their magic to save people, despite what I and her teachers try to tell her. I suppose it’s nice in a way. She can believe that something that is seen as typically bad can have a good side to them and give them the benefit of a doubt. I still wouldn’t hope to meet one though, but due to Sonata’s unbudging stance, I ended up relenting and making up a story about a siren. One she loves so much that I have memorized at this point.

Aquaman is nothing like a siren other than the fact he's from the ocean. :ajbemused:

“Promise…?” she asks me with her quiet voice, her eyes locked with my own. The day I got us out of there, I made a promise to myself to keep them safe. To keep them happy and healthy at all costs, even if it meant sacrificing my own happiness. In large part, this promise has been carried out, sacrificing my social life and my previous mannerisms just to make sure I can keep them happy and make sure they have good lives. Them first, me second… No matter what, I know the three of us can make it. We’re strong and I love both of them so much. They both need to know they matter and that they’re worth it.

Guess that explains what happened to their mother. :unsuresweetie:

“Okay~ I love you, Adagio,” Sonata tells me with another hug before letting go and turning away from me, walking towards the hallway. As long as they have a good life, I will be happy. No matter how dark the night may be, I will always be here for my sisters. Nothing will change that.

While this story was a little sad, I'm glad that Adagio has done so much for her sisters. A sign of how much she cares for them. :twilightsmile:
Reminds me of what my aunt Kelly has been going through since she divorced my former uncle in 2011 and she's been a single parent since then.

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Sonata is about ten years old in this story~ Aria is around 17 and Adagio is in her mid twenties. As for Aria, she is still mean, but I wanted to show that she can be nice to her sisters when she really wants to. Adagio has essentially acted like their mother for a long time now, so that's why Aria left her phone behind.

I really wanted to make a more dramatic story with abuse and mentions of trauma in it, hence why this exists. I decided on the name because of how their biological mother was to them. As sad as it may be with their poverty, trauma, and circumstances, I liked writing it and I'm glad you enjoyed it~ This story has an incomplete sequel titled Dreams and Reality~ You may want to give that a shot if you enjoyed this~

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Oh I'll be reading the sequel alright. :ajsmug:

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