Four teenage guys from four different countries. They wake up in their own homes next to each other in a snowy forest, how did they get here and how will they survive? Rated teen for adult language and gore. Feedback is appreciated.
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The stereotyping is absolutely fucking hilarious.
I'm not sure if I like this or not. Great concept, fairly decent characters (Hopefully each will be given a chance to shine) but the pacing for it kills me. 30 seconds of combat and the ponies are gung ho to take the creatures that can kill a timberwolf in 1 shot to meet Celestia.
Keep on writing though, it's the only way to improve.
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I'm brand new to this so its a work in progress
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Stick around for some more ????
Yo.
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What? Oh yea a comment.
Well this is a nice fic that had only begun ad I wanted to tell you that I like your story and show it in the comments. While you're story is good you still need to read more if you want to write. So go choose a fic (better a long one) and read it, learn what's what and you'll know how to write properly. AND before you go and delete this story because you think I don't like it, place it On hiatus and learn gramatique then correct your text and everyone will be happy. AND, again, I do NOT judge you so go and get it rollin'!
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Ive been re-reading my favorite tics which are long ones, I've hit a bit of writers block recently and broke this morning. I'm also trying to expand the chapters to more than a little over a 1,000 words
Nice chapter aaand to the town of us?
It's more then just putting a bullet in, that's just the piece that kill you. Cartridge is more accurate.
So an and tyranical don't go together. An is for when the next word starts with a vowel.
So, now we have an ambassador. I can only hope that those boys find a way to tell as honestly about earth as possible, lies would only make things worse, and those pesky ponies tend to find things out. We will see what future holds for these guys.
It will be interesting to see how the new ambassador finds his duties, I can see how Twilight will drown him in books about the subject.
If an average pony makes 150-250 bits a month how is 200 considered 4 times more?
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I made a change to the income and missed that part. Fixed it
Brushed up my teeth and took a shower. No need for etc
Pranking
Princess Celestial agreed and said that she has a fun side
???
Took
Not not?
It's way better like this - Through the smoke I saw a figure that looked like dark blue unicorn, before I saw who is it I suddenly awoke.
New chapter good.
On Hiatus bad.
ehhhh not bad so far some mistakes but other than that will we see dragon lord ember at all?
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It definitely is an option, maybe not right at this moment as opposed to further down the line
Keep writing! :3
Just keep writing :3 You are doing well!
Seem's interesting, but if you want less hands down, get an editor.
Note: I haven't read the story yet. This is my impression of the story
USA!!!! joke: 911? nah. call 9mm.
i also make great jewish jokes!
no taxes or they will deal with america.
noah has his gun.
i laughed at that last part.
good story.
sadly, stalingrad doesn't exist anymore they changed the name.
af i Belive is as fuck.
im a hugger too.
2/5 ton truck. my dad drove that thing in the 80s in berlin.
Noooooo! Why is it when i find somthing i like from the writer i like, it always gets cancelled >:l
Please Keep writing!
Please!
YO MAN KIP IT UP OR NOT WILL RESOLT IN *BLAMING*