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Silver_Wing
I like writing, playing video games, sword fighting and ancient mythology. Oh, and let's not forget, I like MLP too ~_^
Silver_Wing
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Honestly, this story was so full of feelings of cute, dawwws , sexyness, little bit of sadness and some nice laughs. This was definately quite the experience.
It was great fun reading about Silver and Sky like this~ Too bad this isn't canon =p But I'm sure you have great things planned for the real reveal in the story!
There were tons of parts I really enjoyed, but my absolute favorite with no contest is when Sky gets mad at Silver for starting to think during the second half of the fun :P And the solution to the problem.
Silver x Sky best non-canon OTP =p
She wants him to be her Special Somepony. All caps and everything! I'm sure there's a school of etiquette about when to use caps or not in regards to the seriousness of the relationship in question. And I told you I was sailing this ship all the way!
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Oh My!
I'm not gonna lie; I said that out loud and everything 
'Going for gold in one shot' XD Little eager there, Sky? But when your stallion ignores all the cues... You just have to knock all his inhibitions away with proper force. A few good bangs and you should be good 
I also appreciated that swing in the wrong direction (as far as Sky was concerned) when he started thinking. Shows his character traits. The set up was good too. Not just lemons for the sake of lemonade. You build us a good stand and everything! (Weird and random metaphor is weird and random.)
Also, Multiverse Theory postulates that this is canon. Somewhere
Also... why do I get interrupted at your typos? Sheesh... So minor too.
Unfolded and hooves'.
You good sir have a talent at witting erotic clop. More Please!!!
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You sir have good taste in appreciation of scenes. That scene you mentioned with the swing in the wrong direction was personally my favorite.
Don't worry though, until the main story gets to a point to make this non-canon, this story will be canon! (one wishes :P).
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it^^
As for making more stories like this one... Only time will tell really. "Trapped in the Mirror of Worlds" is my main focus atm, but more like this aren't beyond the realm of possibility.
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I figured Blindfolding was a good way to work around Silver's particular issue, though it did make things a bit harder to describe, lol. Everything being feel and sound was a rather fun challenge though.
And Sky... Sky did go for gold by going for Silver XD She is a rather straightforward and direct Pegasus, and she does go for what she wants.
Also, I lol'd IRL at you Multiverse Theory btw. You ship them so hard, you bring in the big guns! haha
As one of your designated PLTs (Professional Lemon Tester) I will now give your required Feelings And Projections rating, on a scale of 1-5 as discussed.
Feelings: In a single phrase? Why can't I hold all these feels! From beginning to end, this lemon brings you along for a journey that is both believable and thought out. From the preamble to the food to the foreplay, it continues to make one's heartrate climb as the reader proceeds to understand exactly what both of the characters are doing and wanting and why. 5/5 points awarded.
And
Projections: So much relatability, it is easy to put oneself into the hooves of Silver, his aches, his pains, his pleasures, all of them well described despite the limit of a blindfold partway through. It becomes hard to picture this as a mlp lemon in the first place, but just as the immersion into the scenario starts to wane, Sky's voice calling Silver back to focus on her pulled you right back in. 5/5 points awarded.
F.A.P Total Rating: 10/10
Final Judgement: Cream of Lemon, one only wishes that lemons could be this good.
(other possible ratings include good lemon, sweet lemon, sour lemon, bitter lemon, or just plain lime.)
I normally don't care for OC clop stories, but I'm glad I gave this one a shot. I also normally don't comment on stories, but yours warrants it: freaking loved the imagery and writing style. Proooobably going to mosey over to your userpage and see what else I can find at some point. Until then, have a upvote and a favorite: and know that I wouldn't mind seeing more of these two working though the species barrier.
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Glad you enjoyed enough to comment, it's always nice to see what people think. ^_^ If you're a fan of the relationship between Silver Wing and Sky Flare though, I have a Non-Lemon story I'm working on called 'Trapped in the Mirror of Worlds'. You may find their interactions there equally amusing.